The girl with the scar by: Ava-Violet
Requested by: Ava-Violet

I liked the story and plot so far. But I did find a lot of grammar errors in your story, so I would recommend going back fixing it.

I also liked how you hinted at the fact that something bad happened to the main character early on as well. So, good job on that as well.

Other than that, I thought the pacing of the story was nice.

Overall, it's a good story and would recommend it to anyone who loves books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly