Review# 55
The Sexual Fantasy Quirk by: @JaszmeneSmith
Requested by: @JaszmeneSmith
I thought it was an okay book but I personally didn't like it as much as some other fanfiction stories that I have read on Wattpad, plus I haven't watched or read My Hero Academia before so I was totally unfamiliar with the characters in this book. There were some grammar errors in it and would totally recommend fixing it. Plus with the flashback scene in chapter two, I would recommend fixing it a bit because it was hard to read the dialogue and tell who was talking and where the sentences ended and started.
Plus your cover I think needs a little more work on it because at the bottom of the cover I noticed the word comment which makes me think you took a picture of something and then slapped it on and called it good without really making it look much nicer. So, I would recommend using a cover app or having a graphic designer help make one for you so it's much better than what it is so, it doesn't look dull and lack luster.
Overall, it's an okay book and would recommend this book to anyone who wants to read books like this one and enjoy it more than I did.
Thanks for letting me review your book.
-Traveler_lilly
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