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Review #40

The Healer by: @_jd____
Requested by: @_jd____

I really enjoyed the story and the plot of it. It had an interesting concept of where the main character is learning to heal through a diary and how he can find the owner of it.

I also like how you show how broken the main character is through dialogue and actions and how it affects him and how he is living and he never healed over time.

I noticed that you had the - in a few spots scattered around like in the first chapters, was that intentional? Because I feel like that it shouldn't be there and that you could replace it with the comma or start the next sentence as an actual sentence instead when doing that.

Other than that, I didn't really see any grammar errors that I could find. Well done on that part.

Overall, it's a great story and totally recommend it to anyone who loves reading about books that have this sort of concept to it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly

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