Golden eyes by: FLAMINGICE-
Requested by: FLAMINGICE-

I honestly loved this fanfic so far. I liked how the main character has to deal with her own issues while in the world of a unknown region where she doesn't anything about.

Since I loved the anime show Yona of the dawn, I was curious on how this story turn out since I already knew what happened in the show but didn't know if this will have a unique twist to it or not.

I also love the cover of your story as well since in my opinion, it conveys what the story is about pretty well and I love the gold font to it.

There were also no grammar errors as well so good job on that part.  

But I do want to mention the pacing of the story. Now mostly likely you based this fanfic off of the anime tv show and not the manga since the anime is only 24 episodes long and the pacing of your fanfic seems rushed and goes too quickly for us to have time to process the information that we are given.

Granted there is moon's profile which readers can read to learn more about moon but some readers do tend to skip over it since they most likely want to read the story and it's plot rather than about someone's profile. Plus you mention some of the things in moon's profile again in the story so, I kind of questioned why you had a profile for her set up before you began the story.

I also would have loved seen how she got the fans and the clothes in different parts of the story rather than in just one chapter and moving on since it felt rushed to me personally.

Overall It has potential to be a great story but might a little work still. I would also recommend this book to anyone who loves Yona of the dawn and wants to read some fanfic of it here on Wattpad.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly