Review#156
Rockford Island by: FilledWithRage
Requested by: FilledWithRage
Reviewed by: GwynethStarks
First of all, the cover is eye catching and definitely makes you stop and go "Wait a minute."
The summary is a perfect mix of mystery and suspense. I love the story plot, original in its own special way.
There are no grammar errors so far and the description is on point.
But the conversations between characters seem stiff and a bit unrealistic to their age. A little research and editing would help.
I feel like the characters themselves need a little work on them, it feels like their personalities are being held back. I love the humor and jokes in the story though, it gives it a realistic feeling.
Overall, it's a interesting book.
This review was made by GwynethStarks and not me, Traveler_lilly. So I hope you will enjoy reading her reviews as well on here and also show your support for her as well. Thanks. :)
Thanks for letting her review your book.
-Traveler_lilly
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