Alpha Winners (Fantasy)
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Hi! We have the final results for Fantasy, and we are pleased to crown our alpha winners! Special thanks to gamma judges Ash2650, jennywittle, mortalsouls, and damon_salvatore_29 as well as beta judges NaturalSole128 and damon_salvatore_29. We're almost done, y'all. We've just got Chick Lit/New Adult left!
To determine the alphas, we have averaged both the gamma and beta scores. Here we have posted your review as well as your better score, not the average score.
Winners: Check the prizes chapter for your points, and you can redeem them in Phoenicia's Points Shop! You have a month to redeem your prizes! DM for your other score as well as for your sticker!
All Participants: DM for your scores.
So without further ado... here are the winners.
First Place: depressed_book_worm with the book The Azure!
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Genre: 5/5
Originality: 9.5/10
Description: 9.5/10
Character development: 9.5/10
Plot: 10/10
Grammar: 15/15
Structure: 5/5
Vocabulary: 9.5/10
Overall enjoyment: 4.5
Total: 92.5
Average Score: 90.25
Review: Firstly, I would just like to say, this was one of the most unique books I have ever read. I am not a big fan of the whole alien concept, but this book actually caught my heart! The plot was free of cliches, and I loved that. The descriptions were well written, be it character or scenic, so good job there. But sometimes I found a few of your paragraphs pretty long and the immediate next one really short. I think you should align them well. You could also use more enriching words. Apart from that, everything was amazing!
Second Place: Jarvis1989 with the book Armageddon (The Trilogy)!
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
Genre: 5/5
Originality: 9/10
Description: 10/10
Character development: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Structure: 4/5
Vocabulary/spelling: 10/10
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 92/95
Average Score: 89.5
Review: I loved the idea of this particular story. It was different, but quite similar to Greek mythology, or so I thought which made it so much more interesting. I loved your descriptions, all the scenes were perfectly described. As for your cover, I would suggest playing a bit with the fonts. Try to make it look a bit stronger. Also, I would suggest using more dialogue descriptions, as sometimes we can get confused. Nonetheless, an amazing read!
Third Place: MiyaHikari with the book, The First Feather Falls!
Title- 5/5
Cover- 5/5
Blurb- 5/5
Genre- 5/5
Originality- 10/10
Description- 9/10
Character Development- 10/10
Plot- 10/10
Grammar- 14/15
Structure- 5/5
Vocabulary- 9/10
Overall Enjoyment- 5/5
Total- 92/95
Average Score: 89
Review: This was clearly one of the best books I have ever laid my eyes on. It was so professionally written, that I could find absolutely no flaw in it. Your cover, title and blurb were so aesthetic! Your grammar was completely on point. As for your structure, all the paragraph placements were amazing. But I found a misspacing in the placement of ellipses in a lot of sentences. But no worries, you can always go back and tweak them. Again, incredible work done!
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