Book: In This Together

                                                                         Author: bleedblue2011

Reviewer: Praahi

About the book:

In This Together is a fan-fiction on Indian Cricket Team, mainly about the current cricket team captain Virat Kohli. The story starts from the end of 2019 world cup where India lost in the semi final and out of no where the captain has been charged by match fixing allegations. In this, the whole team stands with Virat when the BCCI is against him. Will he be proved innocent? If yes, how? is all in the story.

Review:

- The cover is beautiful with men in blue, highlighting Virat conveying that he is the main lead. 

- The Title is apt for the story saying that all of them are together may t be any situation in their life. 

* As the background is black, the font color of the title could have been white or any bright color, so that it would be attractive and clearly visible.

- Nice description and a very good introduction reading which one can get the gist of the story.

- The language is simpler and easy to understand. Apart from few grammatical errors, I couldn't  find any other flaw in your writing. You are using the same tense through out the story with right punctuation.

- Writing on Indian Cricket Team is a bit difficult because there would be many characters and doing justice to each and every one would not be that easy but still you are successful in making the readers feel the presence of all the team members when required. 

- Coming to the main part, the plot. Though I could not put it under the genre of "Suspense Thriller", there are few important facts revealed in the later part of the story and this is the only factor that would keep the reader hooked up to the story. Your way of narrating the story is very smooth and the flow is really good without any chance of confusion.

Need to Improve:

- The cover and title are perfect but with a few changes in the color and font, they could be made more attractive.

- Here and there, there are few grammatical errors which could be corrected by proof reading.

- It is recommended to use '...' to indicate that the sentence is not complete or something has interrupted rather than '--'

- It is always recommended to mention before the start of the story about the font which you are using to differentiate between the dialogues and other expressions if you are using different fonts like you used Italic, bold etc to make it more reader friendly.

- Character Description is missing. Though the Indian Cricket Team is famous, it is good to have a description.

Best Things:

- Infact, everything is perfect with this story, starting from the vocabulary, tense to the plot. But as a reviewer, it is my responsibility to find minute faults and point them out to you. 

Overall, I would recommend this story to all the Indian Cricket Team fans especially Virat Kohli's.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Best of luck and keep writing. Hope I have not offended you in any way.

Thank you,

Praahi.

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