✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: 0valeyes
✧ Book :: The Oval War Journal
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◖Basics :: 10.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ I suggest you change the cover to something that is in accordance to the theme. It's a journal, so it should have something related to that along with what the journal is based on. And the cover must have author's tag which was missing. Moreover, a digital version of the cover would look more presentable.

⚘ Synopsis :: 01 | 05

◍ I suggest you write the blurb of the book in a more simple way. I couldn't understand what you were saying about the book and the blurb is confusing. It should be written in a simple and easy manner to understand the language, so that readers can know about the book through it.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ I think you were explaining about certain incidents in the book so for that, the title you gave was quite suitable and relatable to the book.

⚘ Execution :: 2.5 | 05

◍ The synopsis was not clear. Though title was good. The chapters were short and not much was explained about the characters and some things need to be cleared. The grammar needs some improvement for easy understanding of content. The cover looked good but needs to be more relatable.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 04 | 10

◍ The book has certain plot holes. Where it started, what it's talking about, who is talking about it, what's the main idea about the book is not clear. Try to fill these gaps to attract readers.

○ Writing Style :: 04 | 10

◍ You need to work on the way you write things. Sometimes it really confuses me, I am not able to understand what I am reading. You have to explain everything, what are you talking about so that readers can known and get interest in it. It also feels kind of rushed as it's not much clear.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 08 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 03 | 10

◍ You haven't used punctuations in the story as it's quite confusing for me to understand what actually is written in the book. I suggest you use punctuation marks and capitalize letters for better understanding of the content.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 05 | 10

◍ There is not much Vocabulary usage in the book. I recommend you to use new words for the book to become fun to read for many readers. Though keep in mind to not make the sentences complex and difficult to understand.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 05 | 10

◍ There were not much emotions conveyed. Though it was a journal, I suggest you give your opinions too on it to make it more relatable for all the readers and they can also know the views about the different things, you have talked about in the book.

○ Character Development :: 06 | 10

◍ About the characters, the chapters in the book are short, you can explain about the people mentioned in the book so that readers get a feeling of attachment and interest in the different topics in the book. Don't make chapters too long though, but enough long to tell about characters.

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Total :: 37.5 | 80

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