✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: Katopark
✧ Book :: Solus Snippets

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◖Basics :: 14.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover can be improved more. The image looks a bit blur and it can be made more relatable to the story. The theme can be according to the story a bit more. And text position can be fixed.

⚘ Synopsis :: 3.5 | 05

◍ I got confused reading the last paragraph. I suggest you write something that provides more clarity than this. It's not clear if it was what you told readers regarding story or character is saying it.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ Solus means alone or accompanied and snippet means brief extract. I think the story was based on that plot and that made the title totally relatable to the plot

⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05

◍ Don't write the achievements in the synopsis of the book. You can create a chapter at the very beginning to list out its achievements.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 8.5 | 10

◍ The plot was unique and I have never read a plot like this before. It didn't have any type of plot holes and nothing was left as it is. It went slowly and gradually and justified all characters.

○ Writing Style :: 09 | 10

◍ I got hooked to the book by the way you wrote it. The starting was really good increasing my curiosity and interest at the same time. The details were written in an amazing way and the interest in the story wasn't decreased at all instead it increased. Good work.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 19 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 9.5 | 10

◍ The story didn't have any grammatical errors which was impressive. Errors can make the meaning of the content different or confusing and the story didn't had that made it more easy to read.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10

◍ The vocabulary did its work when you mentioned phrases and quotes in the start and end of chapter. Also I feel, its usage was in the content too. So there's no lacking of vocabulary usage until now. The content is full of new words yet its simple and easy to read.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 07 | 10

◍ I guess the emotions need a little bit of work. It is only mentioned in one or two sentences. When the boy's mother died, I think there his emotions should be described more.

○ Character Development :: 08 | 10

◍ I think the characters were well developed and explained. There was not a single point, when I got confused regarding the story which makes it more interesting to read. Except the boy's part, to make him relatable, he needs a bit of screen space.

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Total :: 64 | 80

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