✧ Reviewer :: Chaotic_Lals
✧ Reviewee :: ZianDutt
✧ Book :: Poison Among Shadows

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◖Basics :: 17.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 4.5 | 05

◍ It looks splendid, really. Just a tiny bit of adjustments? The 'D' in 'SHADOWS' looks a tad bit weird. Also, the part were 'D' and 'O' intersects, looks like a 'Y'. It might just be me, but it looks a bit awkward.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The synopsis is very engaging. It has all the elements a book's blurb asks for. However, I feel like a part could be better written. The 'Until her aunt betrays her' is awkward when in the beginning of a paragraph. You can either put the sentence in a single line, and start a paragraph from the next sentence, or add a 'That is' preceding 'until'. Other than this, your blurb is good to go.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Suitable and attractive.

⚘ Execution :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Honestly, I didn't really have much to review of sorts—from a critical point of view. The book is good just as how it is right now. Of course, there's always room for improvement. There were no major errors or issues that I've noticed within the plot or writing style either.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 09 | 10

◍ I really love the fact that the book focused on culture. I see little to no books on Wattpad that does the same. The plot's pace was consistent, and there were no loop holes noticed as of now.

○ Writing Style :: 09 | 10

◍ You've got a beautiful writing style. So far, I've got no complaints with it. Emotions, check; scenario conveying, check; details, check. I must say however, that at some points, I felt like the writing style was a tad bit too theoretical, you know? No flavor. Nothing some editing cannot fix.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 18.5 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 09 | 10

◍ I'm impressed, to say the least. No errors noticed, with the exception of some missing commas here and there.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10

◍ Splendid. The range of words used covers a vast lexical spectrum which is very much appreciable. Keep it up.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 09 | 10

◍ Beautiful. Like mentioned previously, due to the writing style being standard and descriptive, readers don't have any issue relating with characters, hence, emotions coming off just fine.

○ Character Development :: 09 | 10

◍ Each character had a spotlight of their own, and they were portrayed beautifully. The same goes for development.

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Total :: 72 | 80

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