✧ Reviewer :: 112313parnika
✧ Reviewee :: CNavyaXII
✧ Book :: Lucia

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◖Basics :: 14.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover of the book can be converted into a creative one. Its just a simple image which usually doesn't attract readers as much a creative cover does. You should make a cover which speaks about the story in a more specific way. The fonts especially. While the image gives off sensual, dark vibes, the font gives off jolly vibes.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The synopsis was attractive. I liked the way you started it with the dialogue. It made me curious instantly. Also the line where you related the meaning of her name to the life, the fact that her name means light but her life is dark, this combination looked really good and enough for attracting readers.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ I feel the title is specific to the plot and the fact you used light makes it more unique. Its very rare that I see light instead of words like heart or princess. Also the story revolves around her and how she becomes strong and this makes this title better than any other as it speaks a lot about the plot.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover disappointed me but the synopsis did attract me. It was well written and the title was totally relatable to the plot. The characters and plot were unique and added to my curiosity and the vocabulary usage and explanations were good too. Except that the side characters need a better description for readers to be clear regarding them.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ The plot was seriously so good. At a point, it made me disbelieved at the various plot twists. I didn't had a single idea of what could happen next like I would usually have in every other mafia books which adds to the bonus point of how well prepared the plot was. But if the characters other than Lucia are given insight too, then it would be better.

○ Writing Style :: 8.5 | 10

◍ The writing styles of yours was unique. The way you left cliff hangers at every end and then started your story with them sparked my interest more. But you should not use bold tags as they are used for larger emphasis like in headings. Italics would be preferential in case of certain points you would like readers to keep in mind.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 18.5 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 09 | 10

◍ Don't use more than one exclamatory mark in stories. I didn't find any other mistake which was good.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10

◍ The vocabulary was good. You described many things in French, Spanish and Italian language with meanings which made the content interesting to read and also I learnt many new words from it which were not different from the content and they perfectly fitted in.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 07 | 10

◍ I think the emotions conveyed did a good job in part of Lucia but the other characters need more space in the story. The main purpose is that readers hate these characters but then again the readers should know more about people they hate and the nature and reasons which make them villains. Every character should be clear for readers.

○ Character Development :: 07 | 10

◍ The character development should be slow. Lucia's development was good at age five but after that, it got really fast. Some things remained unclear. Cause all characters just came and went, they were not presented well like Lucia.

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Total :: 63.5 | 80

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