✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: 99problemstosolve
✧ Book :: Kiara Flames

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◖Basics :: 15.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover goes with it nicely, it portrays everything well, but it's not clear, it's blurry, so make it clearer also the line below, 'Kiara Flames', isn't visible, please make it darker and make it visible. The sticker added on top, isn't visible either, so please make it clearer, through the 'enhance' feature of the app Remini or just increase the quality.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ It's well written and will have people interested in the story! It has everything a blurb should have. It just seems a bit too long to me, however it's good it doesn't give off any much of the info, but I'd suggest you make it a scene with a cliffhanger.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ The title goes with the story nicely, because it's the story of a girl named 'Kiara Flames', so I guess it's a perfect match, and there's no problem with it not matching the genre! I must say, you used your brain cleverly!

⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05

◍ The overall execution is nice. It's done in a good way and this is basically the average of the above three markings. It's according to the 3 criterions given above.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ It's different from most of the stories, the plot is nice, is well structured and a little fast paced. Like, Kor got attached to Kiara real soon, it'd have been better if it was taken a little slower. The plot is written and constructed in a well manner. However, it does not have many twists or cliffhangers, it's a very straight story, yet, it is very interesting, I must say, it got me hooked, the credit goes to the creativity and interesting plot as well as the writing style. The creativity is no less, the way it's made it's very different and nice!

○ Writing Style :: 07 | 10

◍ The writing style has made the story even better than it actually is (the plot). The writing style is amazing, giving a clear description of the scenes and people. However, your wording lacks a little, like it could be better, I won't say it's the best writing style, I know you can do better. You just have to make your words more like an inescapable trap.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 14.5 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 05 | 10

◍ The grammar is okay, however, there are many mistakes regarding grammar. The tense is fine but other things are not, at places, you've used 'I' for Kiara and in the same paragraph you've used 'she' and 'you', also, you've nowhere mentioned 'xx pov', which must be mentioned. That's why, i have deducted 5 marks, because that really confuses, it makes people think that they have left a few lines or they don't get that what character you're talking about, even though it's easy to get it here because of very less characters but will be difficult if the characters are increased.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10

◍ You've a good vocabulary and a large collection of words, say. The story doesn't seem monotonous or very complicated 'cause of hard vocabulary!

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 07 | 10

◍ The emotions are conveyed nicely, but can be done in a better way and made more lively. Just describe them a little more, it's like a little less described than it should be for it to be crystal clear, as it should be.

○ Character Development :: 6.5 | 10

◍ The characters are nicely shown and portrayed, however I'm not very convinced by the picture introduction you've given, it tells nothing but just their looks. However the characters are nice and very interesting and built in a good way. However, you can give a little more about Kor in the starting chapters, if you haven't given in the chapters of later, also the character Kiara is very well written.

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Total :: 58.5 | 80

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