✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: RookWri78
✧ Book :: Into The World

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◖Basics :: 10 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 1.5 | 05

◍ The cover isn't eye-catching. It doesn't even go with the story or the theme or the genre. It doesn't even have a matching font, that'd suit the genre. The picture you've used doesn't go with the story. Use something more relevant. It won't attract readers.

⚘ Synopsis :: 2.5 | 05

◍ The synopsis is fine but not very interesting or engaging. Add something that'd make people interested. It is short, make it longer. Also, add in a scene with a cliffhanger and a few dialogues. You can add the favorite part of the story too, just make sure it doesn't give any spoilers.

⚘ Title :: 03 | 05

◍ I suppose it goes well with the story and matches the theme. It will also attract people to read it. The title is quite cool and gives a vibe of a story with the, 'positivity/life lesson', theme, like, Ikigai and sometimes sci-fi vibes. And i think the technology in this is so high, that it goes with it in an amazing way.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ The overall execution is good, however there's a need for improvement in a few areas like, synopsis, writing style, grammar and description of the scenes.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 6.5 | 10

◍ The plot is interesting and different. It will have people engaged for sure. The creativity is also good. However, there aren't many twists and turns, which should be added but the cliffhangers you've given at places, are just so amazing!

○ Writing Style :: 5.5 | 10

◍ The writing style of yours is something which I'm not very fond of. The scenes need more describing. The words should be like an inescapable trap, so that the readers get lost in the book and get engrossed into the imaginary world you've made. Also, by description I mean the surroundings. You need to mention POVs too.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 14 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 07 | 10

◍ There aren't many grammatical errors, however I found a few typos and punctuation errors and some grammatical errors here and there.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 07 | 10

◍ The vocabulary is vast and sort of complicated. However, the words are never repeated again and again. It's good!

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 05 | 10

◍ Very few people can describe emotions in a real way, so it's alright. And those few are the professional writers, so it's really alright. You've done well, however, you need to describe more and from different POVs, keep changing the POVs and also mention the POVs. You should also include the way they speak, as in action and speech tags so that the emotions could be imagined while reading the dialogues.

○ Character Development :: 06 | 10

◍ The characters are well structured and built. They're sort of interesting and they developed well. However they should be described more and their appearance too.

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Total :: 47 | 80

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