✧ Reviewer :: LunaticLxna
✧ Reviewee :: ErraticChand-p
✧ Book :: His Unexpected, Crazy Wife!

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◖Basics :: 12.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 1.5 | 05

◍ Even though the cover matches the story's theme, it doesn't look good. Due to the picture being the artistic theme, it looks quite out of harmony and reflects a bad image in front of the reader. Then, similarly, the lines on the image look bad. The font is not very nice, too cliché. Next, the author's name it's too small, almost not visible. Then, adding background behind the text is not a very good idea, it covers the half upper body of the face claim.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ To be very honest, despite the cover damaging the book's image, the synopsis impressed me. It's really amazing and interesting. The thing is, it's too long, three-four paragraphs long, but it's entirely fine. It's giving all the information a blurb should give.

⚘ Title :: 03 | 05

◍ The title is nice but very long you may say. Sounds quite ordinary too. You may make it smaller in words which end in one or two words much more interesting. It's totally fine if you don't want to change it, but it will look better because it sounds very common.

⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05

◍ The book is executed elegantly. Just a small suggestion, in the first chapter, a brief character introduction with the moon board could have been better. Because you've just told their names to readers which is not enough. A few things about the main leads are important. You've given an introduction but it's after almost four chapters. That's fine but before starting the story it's necessary so that it gives an idea to the reader about the character.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 06 | 10

◍ The plot is good, not very cliché as it seemed at the start of a few chapters. But it doesn't change the fact that few things are quite monotonous or ordinary, very predictable actually. So you need to work on your creativity, and how so? You can just read your book once and you will understand what you can change in creativity. Except for creativity, the plot is good.

○ Writing Style :: 08 | 10

◍ For writing style, when you're using Hindi or Marathi words, it's awkward. Even though it has translation still as you read it with paragraphs it's quite awkward, since it's not in full English or full Marathi or Hindi. It's anxious as you keep on switching languages. Few words like Aai/Bappa/Baba and more it's not very comfortable to the reader. Except for this, the way you've written the story is good.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 16 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 08 | 10

◍ Your grammar is good and understanding. Nice pretty far.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 08 | 10

◍ I don't think you need any improvement here, you have a vast vocabulary.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 08 | 10

◍ As the story is written in a well-detailed way, the emotional pattern was good. I don't have much to say here, it's nice and for this, the credit goes to the way you write.

○ Character Development :: 07 | 10

◍ The story is not completed, but it has 40+ chapters and many developments in the characters aren't going very nicely. I feel like the characters are having the same behavior as they had at the start. I hope that improves. That's it.

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Total :: 57.5 | 80

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