✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: p2a0i0g3e
✧ Book :: Becoming Free

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◖Basics :: 16.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 04 | 05

◍ The cover goes with the story and plot, however I must say, it may not be able to have people interested in reading it. Also, the font color could be changed. Other than that it's good!

⚘ Synopsis :: 4.5 | 05

◍ The synopsis is good and gives a very good and brief idea of the story and the characters, which I liked personally, and also, it's on a cliffhanger, so it's quite amazing and will surely have readers to start the story!

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ The title goes with the story and the theme very well and will attract readers too! It's a unique name and sounds good!

⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05

◍ The execution is nice and is led in a good way, the way the book starts is enough to attract readers of this genre. However, it could be better, with a little filters added to the cover.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 07 | 10

◍ The plot seems to be different and has some suspense built up, because of the backstory of the main lead and the secrets she has. It is a little fast paced and needs some working and editing on the plot structure and the way it's built. The story might be different but if not executed or displayed that way, it's of no use. The author is creative, with all the names and things she/he has added and the starting she/he chose.

○ Writing Style :: 7.5 | 10

◍ The writing style is nice. However, it needs to be worked on, not a little, it's not something that'll make people trapped but it may as well, so it's an okay-okay way of writing. It could be better. However, the way you've described everything it's so cool! However, you should describe everything more and at places it doesn't make sense too.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 15 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 07 | 10

◍ There are a few grammatical errors here and there, and at places, commas are missing, so please go through the chapters carefully and edit these.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 08 | 10

◍ The vocabulary is neither too vast nor too less, it's just moderate. The language isn't complicated, which is a good thing!

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 07 | 10

◍ The emotions are conveyed nicely, however they can be described more, so as to feel more real. The emotions are explained in a good manner, but, needs a little editing and at some places, it isn't clear, so, just make it clearer. Like, it can be because of punctuational errors.

○ Character Development :: 07 | 10

◍ The characters are displayed in a nice way and nicely built. However, giving an introduction of them with a little amount of information about them before the prologue or after the prologue and before the first chapter, would be better. They could be made better and more interesting, so people fall in love with them. Also, you must describe their physical appearance, in the starting chapters only, with good use of adjectives.

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Total :: 60 | 80

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