Tremendous Ten And The Missing Piece Of History- The Chronicals Of T10 Niranju98

Title: Great name for a series!

5/5

Summary: Very detailed and explains the story line well. To improve it, try varying your sentence types.

4/5

Cover: I absolutely love how there is a contrast of dark and light! The edits are just fantastic.

5/5

Spelling, Punctuation And Grammar (SPAG): I never noticed any mistakes. The whole thing was completely free from grammatical errors! I would just say, try using a variety of punctuation and sentence types.

4/5

Characters: Simply detailed. They are explained well but maybe use more fancy (high class) words to exaggerate your characters more and help us visualize them better.

4/5

Overall: A wonderful start on your series! I definitely recommend this book to people who enjoy fantasy a lot!

22/25

Dark angel (B1 The Reaper Series) courtneyrush756

Title: I love it! It goes so well with the theme of series!

5/5

Summary: I love how you spoke from Tia's point of view. However, it lacks in detail. You should add more descriptions and it is also quite messy and jumbled up. 

3/5

Cover: Gorgeous! The hue's are amazing and the effect if it being blurred is wonderful! However, you should resize it to fit. Wattpad covers are generally 512 x 800.

4/5

Spelling, Punctuation And Grammar (SPAG): No mistake caught my eye!

5/5

Characters: Descriptive writing is really hard to do and you nailed it!

5/5

Overall: A wonderful book with such a unique plot. I love the ghostly figure that pops up!

22/25

sable darkness (B2 The Reaper Series) courtneyrush756

Title: Really unique and different!

5/5

Summary: A perfect summary with a simple background of the boonk. However, more creative writing could be used to make it more interesting.

4/5

Cover: I love the cover to my hearts content. It is the best cover I've ever seen. I love the shining effects and it's just amazing. The only downside is that it doesn't fit the Wattpad cover size. The size should be 512 x 800.

4/5

Spelling, Punctuation And Grammar (SPAG): Not a single mistake!

5/5

Characters: Descriptions were still perfect!

5/5

Overall: A great start to the second book! I love the descriptions and the metaphors you used!

23/25

Winners

First Place: courtneyrush756 Sable Darkness

Second Place: Dark Angel by courtneyrush756 and Tremendous Ten And The Missing Piece Of History- The Chronicals Of T10 by Niranju98

Prizes

1st Place

- a follow
- 2 books of your choice added to a reading list of mine
- comments on 2 books of your choice
- a sticker for your winning book
- Your winning book added to a reading list of mine

2nd Place

- a follow
- a book of your choice added to a reading list of mine
- comments on a book of your choice
- a sticker for your winning book
- Your winning book added to a reading list of mine

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