Mafia's possession courtneyrush756

Title: Intruding: I like the way they possesses everything as theirs.

5/5

Summary: Amazing vocabulary used and fabulous use of different devices abd techniques.

5/5

Cover: Prefect for an action book!

5/5

Spelling, Punctuation And Grammar (SPAG): Great but you have slight grammatical errors. Aometimea the words just don't fit.

4/5

Characters: Perfect detailed descriptions which are implicitly explained. Great work!

5/5

Overall: An amazing book with so much action seeping through with only a paragraph! Your prologue included many details which were described perfectly.

24/25

You are 1st Place since your score was 23+! Congratulations! Your prizes are:

-a follow
- 2 books of your choice added to a reading list of mine
- comments on 2 books of your choice
- a sticker for your winning book
- Your winning book added to a reading list of mine

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