Did you enjoy the final chapter of the revised one shot? There have been changes since the first three chapters were posted and you hopefully found the story reflects the complexities and moral ambiguities of 'The Fall'.

When readers or viewers debate whether #EdwardCullen #ChristianGrey #PaulSpector #JaimeLannister etc are 'good' or 'bad' we can be sure the author created characters that transcend the page and become flesh and blood in the mind of the reader or viewer.  In #GeorgeRRMartin's own words "If everyone thinks your character is a hero or everyone thinks your character is a villain, then you're writing cardboard."  The 'good' or 'bad' in people have always inspired debate.  We still debate the legacies of Cecil Rhodes, Winston Churchill, Abraham Lincoln etc. Writers like #AllanCubitt #StephenieMeyer #ELJames, #GeorgeRRMartin etc changed the landscape and made us expect more from fictional stories and characters...

Love to hear from readers.  In fact the Paul & Katie one shot would not have been written if it wasn't for a fan of #TheFall requesting it.  In the show, the Paul & Katie Skype chat and masturbation scene was tightly edited. The same goes for Katie's journal of fantasies about Paul that she handed the police. Viewers peeked into Paul's journal and some extracts were added to this one shot. The first version of Chapter 1 had no adult scenes, when readers requested it, erotic adult scenes were added. Although different from the show, it's hoped this imagining reminds readers of various story threads as we wait for series 3.

This dark erotic yarn was a collaborative effort between engaged readers & this humble writer in training.  Saying thank you to every one of you for reading and sharing your thoughts on here does not seem enough, please accept this heartfelt note of thank you. There will be slow continual changes to polish the writing and add images to the text. A special thank you to fans who re-read and notice changes, you know who you are!

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June, 6, 2016

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