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Romance Winners (Part 1)

📢✅ Breaking News: The Romance Genre Winners Have Been Selected!

Attention everyone! Prepare yourself for the announcement of our winners 🌟 We've finally arrived at the moment you've all been waiting for - the winning authors of The Fabulous Writer Awards have been chosen!

"Drumroll, please! 🥁🥁🥁

The winners of the Romance genre of the Fabulous Writer Awards are here to claim their rightful place in the spotlight. These incredible and talented writers have amazed us all with their stories and their unique ability to transport us to different worlds.

And a very special thanks to Judge Minooiii for judging all the fabulous books.

Now, time to announce our winners!!!

The book that secured third place is...



The bipolar beast by Emerald_666666

Scorecard:

Cover: 7/10

The cover is good but I think you can have a better cover to show your title better.

Title: 10/10

Your title suits the story.

Writing style: 9/10

Your writing style is unique and I like the fact that you used different nationalities and vibes in your book.
However, I think that it needs a bit more organisation with the font and their dialogues and thoughts.

Storyline: 8/10

This storyline is also a familiar, rich rude guy/poor good girl trope, however, you wrote it in your unique way. In addition, I like the fact that it has a comedy vibe inside of the story so that the readers won't get bored.

Grammar: 6/10

There are some punctuation, capitals, and grammar errors.
Characters: 9/10

I like the Female lead's character and personality. She seems strong-minded.
Steven was also understandable since he's a bipolar person judging by the blurb and the title.

Enjoyment: 8/10

The plot is rom/com and I enjoyed it. It was fun to read. However, I wanted more interactions between main leads.

Overall: 8/10

Total score: 65

Feedback: I want more scenes with the main leads.

The book that secured the second place is...













Romantic story by aurora_2604

Scorecard:

Cover: 9/10

The cover looks good in my opinion.

Title: 8/10

The title could've been something more eye-catching but it suits the story judging by the blurb.

Writing style: 9/10

The Writing style is fluent. The scenes and characters are well described.

Storyline: 7/10

The storyline is one of the common topics, but it has its own unique ideas and unexpected things. So I actually liked the fact that it was familiar yet surprising.

Grammar: 7/10

There were some grammatical errors such as pronouns, etc, but overall the word choice and sentences were good.

Characters: 8/10

It would've been better if the characters were a bit more unique in personalities, however, they were relatable.

Enjoyment: 10/10

I really did enjoy the story since it was fun to read and the engagement of the story was indeed high.

Overall: 8/10

Score: 66/80

Feedback: I want you to show their emotions and thoughts more during the story so that the readers can feel them more.

And

His Baby Machine by ArabelaTaylor

Scorecard:

Cover: 7/10

The pic is good but the font and the colour of the text aren't suitable since it's hard to read it.

Title: 10/10

Absolutely an interesting title.

Writing style: 9/10

Your writing style is great. I liked how you described emotions, their expressions, and their surroundings beautifully and poetically.

Storyline: 7/10

Arranged marriage is also one of the common tropes, but the plot is rich and new. I like how it got my attention right away with only the prologue. The tension between protagonists is pretty well-written.
However, there was only one thing that wasn't clear to me. Why did the male lead call her "baby machine" in the first place out of the blue when he was interested in her more than that?
When I read the prologue, I thought he must've thought of her as an object, but it wasn't like that as I read more.
Anyway, the twist and confusion caught my attention to read more so that I could know the reason behind it.

Grammar: 9/10

I haven't seen any grammatical errors but IG, there were some errors on pronouns.

Characters: 7/10

I liked your characters, especially, the female lead. But, the male lead's behaviour or intentions was kinda unclear to me.
Nevertheless, overall they felt real.
Enjoyment: 9/10
I did enjoy the story since the tension between them was great. I liked how their chemistry made me excited.

Overall: 8/10

Such a good story and worth reading.

Total score: 66/80

Feedback: I think everything was good but I'd like to see the reason behind the male lead's behaviour.

And now the book that secured first place is...












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His Little Spitfire by NatashaIli

Scorecard:

Cover: 9/10

The cover looks fine.

Title: 10/10

The title suits the story

Writing style: 9/10

I like the way you write and you describe everything in detail, but I think the chapters are quite long.

Storyline: 9/10

The storyline is also realistic and entertaining to read. I liked how fresh the story was.

Grammar: 10/10

I haven't seen any errors.

Characters: 8/10

I liked your characters and especially, their names. There were too many characters at first all of a sudden so I was a bit confused about what was going on.
However, I could feel the male lead's character. The female lead's personality was a bit hazy to me in the first chapters, so it made me curious to know more about her personality and her past, but when you showed her past little by little, it became clearer to me.

Enjoyment: 7/10

I did enjoy how the plot and the fact that you didn't go with the usual clichés. But, I wish the chapters were a bit shorter so that the audience wouldn't lose their interest or get bored.
Overall: 9/10

It was worth reading for romance readers.

Total score: 71

Feedback: You did a good job indeed. I think I mentioned above about cons enough.

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Now, it's time to announce the books that secured the fourth, fifth and sixth place in this award. Don't be discouraged because your books didn't win. Your book is great, you just need to make some improvements.

The book that secured fourth place is...

Maybe in Another Life by Vasukisameer21

Scorecard:

Cover: 10/10

The cover is indeed good.

Title: 9/10

Sounds interesting

Writing style: 7/10

It was fine but I felt that it was a bit rushed in changing the scenes. I'd like to see more details about the places where the characters are there.

Storyline: 6/10

The storyline is bad-guy/good-girl, enemies-to-lovers tropes, so it's a bit familiar, but still, the plot was fun to read and it has a fresh start with its different path.
Judging by the blurb, I know that the story will have twists and unexpected things which can make readers curious to read more. So I was invested in the story.
However, there was one thing bothering me and it was the part that he suddenly offered the marriage. I think it was too soon to do that.

Grammar: 10/10

I didn't see any errors.

Characters: 7/10

I like the female lead and I could feel her, but the male lead's behaviour was a bit inconceivable. I wished he was more reasonable.

Enjoyment: 8/10

I had fun reading it and the plot sounds interesting. I just wished that the things weren't rushed between Mainleads.

Overall: 7/10

Total score: 64/80

Feedback:

I wish the male lead was a bit gentle or at least not very rude. I know you wanted to show that he's become cold and emotionless due to some trauma that he got from his mother's death, but still, I think it'd have been more realistic if he wasn't so impulsive and rude.

The book that secured fifth place is...

Too enchanting to be destroyed By prekshanagupta

Scorecard:

Cover: 8/10

The pic is great but the font is too small to read.

Title: 10/10

It's indeed a good choice.

Writing style: 5/10

It's hard to read because of the long paragraphs and their conversations or their thoughts were a bit hard to differentiate with the narration.
And I think it'd have been better if you hadn't used those emojis.

Storyline: 8/10

The storyline seemed interesting and new since it has a mysterious side along with the romance side of it. It raised the excitement within me and I liked it.
However, I wished that it was written in more detail to feel the thrills of it more.

Grammar: 6/10

There are some grammatical errors and also errors with capitals and punctuation.

Characters: 7/10

The characters were good but I think their feelings and their characteristics need to be more specific.

Enjoyment: 9/10

The engagement was high and I liked the plot. It can be a perfect story if you work on the things that I have mentioned.

Overall: 7/10

Total score: 60

Feedback: put more space between your parts. Don't use emojis and try to describe their expressions and feelings with only words. Make sure to have a pattern font for narrating, their dialogues, and their thoughts so that they can read it more easily.

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Judge note:
All of you did a good job with your books. It was so hard to score your work. I liked all of your books, so please don't get discouraged if you don't win. The competition was indeed tight.

Congratulations to all the winners ❤️❤️

Note: Kindly send me your email address if you want your prize from me.

Romance winners (Part 2) will soon posted as I get results from the judge.

Have a wonderful day :)

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