! pjm reviews
,, judged by _human-being_ ;
- "falling in love" by ennie_minnie
Cover (4/5)
The cover looks good, however some of the font used is too small and can not be read clearly
Title (5/5)
The title is good given that it is used for a romance genre story.
Blurb/ story description (2/5)
The description gives insight to probably one of the most important scenes of the story. However, there are grammatical errors and moreover, the description can hold much more than just one signal scene extracted from the story. Giving a brief summary of what the story holds should also be kept in mind.
Plot (7/10)
Reading as far as the chapters I was assigned to, I couldn't much insight of the plot, as even the male lead wasn't introduced yet. However, it did give a lot of information on many characters and build up their story and relation. Still, by chapter 3, I believe some more significant points regarding the story should've been revealed.
Character buildup (7/10)
The characters as described so far were all interesting in their own unique ways, however there wasn't much of a character buildup. Which is not bad, as I feel like the story had only started building up.
Content (7/10)
Grammar (5/10)
There were many grammar issues.
Writing style (6/10)
The story is written in first pov, with usual changing of povs. The writing style of the author isn't bad but it still can be made better.
Worth reading (7/10)
The story itself may not be that bad but the overall quality was lacking in many places.
Overall enjoyment (7/10)
The plot and characters seemed interesting, there were hints of originality. However, the bad grammar and some confusing scenes were off putting.
Total (57/85)
- "my fate" by ru_my_bae
Cover (2/5)
Cover needs a lot of work
Title (5/5)
Title sounds intriguing and interesting
Blurb/ story description (2/5)
The description has many grammatical errors. Moreover, the way it is written makes it quite confusing.
Plot (9/10)
The plot is strong. If handled well, it can be an amazing story.
Character buildup (4/10)
So far, there wasn't much of a character buildup as the characters were barely described so far.
Content (3/10)
The content lacks quality
Grammar (4/10)
There were a lot of grammatical errors. Including punctuation errors and many other errors.
Writing style (4/10)
The writing style is a bit confusing and needs much work done.
Worth reading (4/10)
The plot isn't bad however there are many other areas lacking that would make a reader hesitant to read the book.
Overall enjoyment (5/10)
I did enjoy what I read but I am hoping that the author would improve over time and then improve the overall quality of the story.
Total (42/85)
- "that joseon rain" by IR3NIC
Cover (5/5)
The cover looks amazing. The editing is also very well done as well as the color palette usage.
Title (5/5)
Title seems interesting and original
Blurb/ story description (5/5)
The description is well written. It gives insight of what the story holds and builds the excitement for readers.
Plot (10/10)
So far, the plot seemed quite interesting. It didn't use cliches either.
Character buildup (9/10)
All the characters seem to have a unique and intriguing personality. Hopefully, the author will carry out their buildup well overtime.
Content (10/10)
The content was indeed of top quality.
Grammar (10/10)
I didn't notice any major issues with the grammar. In fact, it was pretty flawless for most of the part and the use of vocabulary was also pretty great.
Writing style (10/10)
The writing style is original and neat.
Worth reading (9/10)
Definitely worth reading.
Overall enjoyment (9/10)
I did quite enjoy as much as I read, although some references may be a bit confusing for the readers but the author did try to explain them
Total (82/85)
,, judged by Riyabangtanff ;
- "ghost boyfriend" by Bangtanwhale
Cover : 3.5/5
The cover is good looking. It looks apt for the story but it's not that attractive. The author can make something attractive . It's my opinion.
Title : 4.5 / 5
The title suits the story well. It's simple and unique.
Blurb : 3 /5
Actually blurb is the short summary of the story, but here it is a scene from the story. Yes ,it is good. But there are some mistakes in grammar. The letters are not uppercase after the full stop and there is no comma full stop at right places. The author should be more careful while writing the blurb as it a backbone of story.
Plot : 7/10
The author build the plot well. But there are many places where the author rushes. The author rushed throughout the story. Actually, in this type of story, the author can add many elements which bring the readers emotion. I didn't feel any kind of emotions.
For eg: The first chapter itself is Jimin's death. The author can add how much they love each other. If the author described the death scene and hospital scene in detail, it can bring emotions and empathy to the readers. But everything happened in a hurry manner.
Character build up : 2/10
Actually there's no Character build up. Only once , when they were going to a party the author had mentioned about the dress , but that too was a pic. There's no mentioning of their dress, Character, looks , innerthoughts .
Content : 9/10
The content is really good, and interesting. It's unique and can gain more attention. To be honest, I haven't come across such a story this far .
Writing style : 7/10
About Writing style,like I said everything is just rushed throughout the story. The author can make it more describing. And one thing I noticed Is that difference in the writing styles. In some chapters, the sentence other than dialouge are in bold letters, while in some others they are not. There must be a constant flow.
Grammar : 6/10
There are many spelling mistakes and wrong tenses used in many parts . For eg: tention for tension. Author should be more careful with these and read again once the writing is done , so that you can avoid unintentional mistakes.
Worth reading : 8/10
Yes it is worth reading for those who love fantasy fiction stories. It's a unique story and can be really worth if it is more describing.
Overall enjoyment : 7/10
Yes I enjoyed reading it.
Total : 57/85
- "his arrogant wife" by shanominjiark
Cover : 4 /5
The cover is good and unique. But there is no author name other than that, everything's fine
Title : 3 /5
Based on the story , the title is apt. But ,it is too simple. On reading the title , the readers can just predict what's inside. Moreover it didn't feel unique.
Blurb : 3 /5
About the blurb, blurb is usually the short summary of the story which gives an idea to the readers. Here it is a scene ,like a prologue. Anyway it is giving some ideas. There's some mistake like "will you marry me y/n" a "?" Is needed.
Plot : 8/10
Based on the plot, I would like to say, it is good. But there are many chances to add more elements to it which make the story really worthwhile.
Character build up : 8 /10
The character is built up really well. The appearance of the protagonist is mentioned, their inner thoughts are mentioned which is a positive point. But, from what I read I didn't feel any empathy towards any of them.
Content : 7/10
Even Though the context is not unique, the author has added many elements to make it good.
Writing style : 7/10
From the beginning to the end , there's a constant flow in the writing style which is really a plus point. But , if the author made the situation more descriptive it would be really good. And about the dialogue placement, as it is a book you can write like he said or something.
For eg ,Avoid, jimin:___ like this. And some of their expressions are too placed with the dialogue.
Grammar : 3 / 10
There is wrong use of tenses at many places.
Eg: buyed for bought.
There are spelling mistakes. eg: There for their
Punctuation marks aren't used at right places
I highly recommend rereading the story and making edits on it .
Worth reading : 7 /10
Actually the genre is not my cup of tea. But I'm sure those who like to read some kind of drama , romantic books will like it
Overall enjoyment : 6/10
The thing is I was confused at many places due to the absence of commas, wrong tenses and errors. But the story line feels good.
Total : 56/85
- "torn between" by AraBTS07
Cover : 5 /5
Cover is just wonderful. It looks really good and wholesome. Everything is there and it really suits the story.
Title : 4.5/5
Title of the story is apt. It is really a unique and simple Title. Attractive too.
Blurb : 4 /5
Blurb gives a good idea about the story. Simple and effective. I really love the way the author did not mention too much about the story and still it gives an idea.
Plot : 8 /10
The plot too is innovative , it's not overrated and there's a constant flow.
Character build up : 9/ 10
The thing is we can feel every bit of emotions while reading and every way the author has written everything seems so good.
Content : 7 /10
The thing is this content is overrated. To be honest, many stories have this content like a love triangle. But the way it has plotted, it's unique.
Writing style : 9 /10
No more to say, just super because there's a constant flow in Writing style. And on each chapter there's improvement which is really visible.
Grammar : 9 /10
There's no careless mistakes and usage of simple language is really wonderful. Vocabulary is good too.
Worth reading : 9 /10
Yes guys, I highly recommend this.
Overall enjoyment : 9 /10
Total : 73.5/85
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