! oneshots reviews
,, judged by mytaegyu_sopeworld ;
- "dark tales" by deewiwi
Cover (0/5) : 5/5
The cover is edited really well, it fits the title of Dark tales.
Title (0/5) : 3/5
The only reason I give it a 3 is because the title doesn't fit the storylines well, I see the stories as more sad.
Blurb/Story description (0/5) : 2/5
It's pretty short and does not give full detail as to what the story is about.
Plot (0/10) : 8/10
The plots are different from the one-shots I have read and I like them because they are like real life scenarios that could happen.
Character Build Up (0/10) : 7/10
Well since it's different characters it's hard to categorize them but I rate 7/10 since you give each story and character change.
Content (0/10) : 9/10
I rated this off of what content you put out in the story and overall leaves the reader on edge wanting more.
Writing Style (0/10) : 8/10
Your writing style can be repetitive at times but overall is great.
Grammar (0/10) : 9/10
I'm not sure if I am being to harsh here but you missed two grammar errors so I took a point off. But good job grammar is hard to fix easily if not paid attention too.
Worth reading (0/10) : 7/10
It was worth reading, they were sorta short but still enjoyable
Overall Enjoyment (0/10) : 9/10
I liked the plots of each story and how different they were, they felt like real.
Total (0/85) : 67/85
Good stories but sometimes the writing could be a bit repetitive. Good work, keep writing.
- "bts oneshots" by Bluekindavibe
Cover (0/5) : 4/5
The cover is good and well edited but something felt off about it, I'm not sure quite what.
Title (0/5) : 2/10
I feel like the title was s bit too plain, like how you have it in the cover art was cool "a door to the new world" but the title is plain to me because I've seen many titles like yours, I felt you could make your outshine the others with s new title.
Blurb/Story Description (0/5) : 2/5
The description the same as the title, it was plain and had nothing to reel me in, it was more of hashtags to me.
Plot (0/10) : 5/10
The plot is well, and has some fiction parts. For it being a one-shot it should've been one chapter instead of two, but I also liked that factor, that's why it's in the middle.
Character Build Up (0/10) : 6/10
The same as the other story it's quite hard to see character build up in one-shots if not done right, but the characters were overall interesting
Content (0/10) : 6/10
Your content is done well, I thought I would leave it in the middle but I have you a point up
Writing Style (0/10) : 2/10
Your writing style Id quite confusing, when I was reading I had difficulty because it wasn't separate it was all together into one big paragraph and it got confusing to read.
Grammar (0/10) : 8/10
You spell well and have great grammar but there was some errors I came across because of the paragraphs not being separate.
Worth Reading (0/10) : 7/10
It's worth reading for people who don't mind suggestive stories, I think a certain audience will enjoy it.
Overall Enjoyment (0/10) : 6/10
It's not my type of story but I enjoyed some chapters you're a good writer, keep it up.
Total (0/85) : 48/85
Interesting..plots and stories. I would just say that you should separate the stories into paragraphs because having them all together makes it difficult to read. Good work continue writing.
- "husband | jungkook" by winterawrr ;
Cover (0/5) : 3/5
The cover is plain but still good, I can see what you were going for with the cover
Ritle (0/5) : 3/5
Like the story mention above it is quite a plain title but it matches the plot line so good work.
Blurb/Story Description (0/5) : 4/5
The description is done well, it doesn't say to much or less.
Plot (0/10) : 5/10
The plot is done well, I have read a lot of plots like these and I think yours about Jk being like in a relationship/husband is executed well then others I have read.
Character Build Up (0/10) : 3/10
I found some of the plot being the same like with the pranks and stuff so as for the main characters I don't see build up quite yet. But getting there for sure
Content (0/10) : 5/10
You write well and the content is well. Just like the stories above
Writing Style (0/10): 6/10
Your writing style definitely shows how you are great at writing, it was the easiest to read for me.
Grammar (0/10) : 10/10
I read thoroughly and there's was no errors. Good work
Worth Reading (0/10) : 6/10
I think people will enjoy it and that's why it is worth reading
Overall enjoyment (0/10) : 5/10
I'm not a big JK Stan but this book is actually really good. I think it's writing could be possible and suit him well
Total (0/85): 50/85
I don't usually like Jk FF because I'm not a JK Stan but this one was good. Good work, good story.
- "bts seokjin imagines" by @Jinleen_5
Cover : 5 / 5
Cover looks beautiful, the purple theme is pretty. It looks cute.
Title : 3 / 5
It's pretty common,simple and basic. Many other books can be found with the same title but can't say much about it as it is just a one-shot book.
Blurb/Story description : 5 / 5
The blurb looks nice, it contains all the basic information needed for this kind of story.
Plot : 8/10
The plot and storyline of the one-shots were great. Really liked how the story goes. It all made sense and felt real.
Character build up : 6/10
I can't really rate this category, since these are one shots but the characters felt real and everything made sense.
Content : 8/10
The content was good, the one shots were pretty well written but the second story was a bit longer than what I expected, which kind of made me lose interest in that part.
Writing style : 8/10
Your writing style is great, the POVs were really well written and made me feel through it.
Grammar : 9/10
There were no grammatical errors in my eyes and the vocabulary was good too.
Worth Reading : 9/10
It's worth reading, the stories are great and interesting, these will give you butterflies too.
Overall enjoyment : 8/10
Really enjoyed reading this, hoping to see more from you. Keep up the amazing work.
Total : 60/85
- "oneshots" by a_purple_girl ;
Cover : 3 / 5
The cover looks good with the black and white theme. Nothing special but it's pretty simple and basic.
Title : 2 / 5
The title is too common and pretty basic, nothing special about this.
Blurb/Story Description : 4 / 5
There is nothing that special in the blurb, just the necessary information.
Plot : 9/10
I absolutely love your one-shots. All of them are so good, they all really give the feels and everything. I was so into the stories.
Character Build Up : 8/10
I can't really rate this category, I absolutely loved all the characters, there was something different and surprising about all the characters which was really interesting to read.
Content : 10/10
Saying it again, all of them were so good, I really liked all of them. They all are just chefs kiss.
Writing Style : 8/10
The writing was good, the writing style is neat and since it is only based on the third person's pov it was more clear.
Grammar : 9/10
I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and the vocabulary was great too.
Worth Reading : 10/10
This book was definitely worth reading for me.
Overall Enjoyment : 9.5/10
This book was really enjoyable for me, definitely recommend this one if you want something good and short.
Total : 73.5/85
- "tales of heart" by aurora_2604 ;
Cover : 5 / 5
Cover is simple but pretty, looks pretty good in my opinion.
Title : 4.5/5
I really liked that you gave a unique title instead of just using something like "taekook one shots" but still the title is very common.
Blurb/Story Description : 4 / 5
Nothing special in the blurb, just the necessary information.
Plot : 10/10
All the stories seem different and really interesting, I was hooked with them. The plots are definitely a 10/10.
Character Build Up : 8/10
I can't really rate this category but all the characters are amazing, I really loved them.
Content : 9/10
There is enough content provided. I was highly intrigued and satisfied with them.
Writing Style : 9.5/10
I really love your writing style, the way you describe everything is just perfect, instead of just leaving them like that you gave a vivid description, which is what I liked the most.
Grammar : 10/10
Couldn't find any grammatical errors in the book, which shows how much work you have put in it.
Worth Reading : 9/10
There is no way this won't be worth reading for me, I would definitely recommend it to taekook fans.
Overall Enjoyment : 10/10
Really really enjoyed this book. I have read only a few chapters and I just can't wait to complete all of them, this book is definitely going in my all time favs list. Keep on writing, you're a great writer.
Total : 79/85
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