What I'm looking for is simple... does it make any sense!

Do you have plot holes so large I can drive an 18 wheeler truck through?

Or if  your delivery is not clear.  I'm guilty of that with my regional slang and dialect.  I may know what a yutz and a putz are but not someone from Peru learning English.

If I see minor things like spelling or a typo I'll point it out. But it's my primary focus.

Still with me?

Great!