Poetry Royalties ✓
A Tribute follow to bunnydream199 who wrote this
Judge: VRMY13
Participant: 2MysteriousGem
Place: Asia
Book: ~POEMS~
Grammar: 20/30
There were several grammar mistakes that I found.
Emotions: 8/10
I can feel that you write by emotion, but it kind of lacks impact.
Line Structure: 9/10
Some are not written in stanzas, but it's good.
Poetic Devices: 15/20
I don't really notice that you use other poetic devices aside from rhymes.
Organization & Diction: 28/30
Well organized.
Total: 80/100
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Participant: more-like-reyna
Place: India, Asia
Book: Reflection
Grammar: 28/30
Emotions: 10/10
Each word spoken held depth one wouldn't help but feel
Line Structure: 10/10
Set in simple sentences to read but feel
Poetic Devices: 19/20
A huge role of similes, metaphors and rhymes played throughout each poem
Organization&diction: 26/30
Well structured, some could do with a bit more or less
Total: 94/100
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Participant: NerissaTheodora
Place: Asia
Book: Hidden Facets of a Gal
Grammar: 27/30
Some words can be omitted to give a deeper meaning
Emotions: 10/10
The emotions oozing through each line spoken, written, said, one can feel even if there is no similar event that has happened to one to feel
Line Structure: 10/10
Each stanza is written and held with a kick to emotions
Poetic Devices: 19/20
Metaphors, similes, rhymes all play a huge role within the texts that formed the stories being told
Organization&diction: 27/30
Organized and spoken/written well
Total: 93/100
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Participant: sunshineglitch
Place: Asia
Book: Something in the Air
Grammar: 28/30
Very minimal mistakes but a few need changing
Emotions: 10/10
Emotions poured through choice of words were felt
Line Structure: 8/10
Sentence structure used but each holding enough to tell the story
Poetic Devices: 16/20
Organization&diction: 27/30
Total: 89/100
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Participant: Tefnut09
Place: Asia
Book: Puss in Boots
Grammar: 25/30
Some words can be omitted
Emotions: 6/10
Some emotions may be brought forth such from reminiscing times
Line Structure: 10/10
Simple and readable sentences
Poetic Devices: 16/20
The tone was set in a readable stanza for an audience every known of the cat in boots known as Puss In Boots
Organization&diction: 28/30
Very well organized
Total: 85/100
*****
Judge: ENCHANTEDmajor
Participant: maanvibhagat
Book: My Brain Work
Grammar : No grammatical errors. Each and every line was well written.
30/30
Emotions: The book was nice,it could reflect what it wanted to convey.It could clearly show what it meant,words were not hazzy but were crystal clear.
8/10
Line structure: The poem was well organized,it didn't appeared as if it was just stuffed,it could clearly bring out meaning.The context or be it the words,each and every thing was well balanced.
8/10
Poetic devices : The poem can very well communicate with the audience. Many times as a reader we keep wandering what does this particual line mean or what does it signify but here as a reader the words were clear, they were enough to give me the sense of idea or tell me what they meant. Rather than spending so much time,trying to figure what it meant, I could enjoy the actual words of the poem.
20/20
Diction and organization : I must say the poem lacked use of various figures of speech. I mean they were there but not in much quanity although this did not effect the true meaning of the poem. But i would really liked if there were use of 'metaphors' or 'hyperbole'. Again,the lines were well arranged and so were the words.
25/30
Total : 91/100
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Participant: kittymissylexisexy
Place: Asia
Book: Mellifluous: A Poetry Collection
Grammar : 30 for the grammar.There were no grammatical errors. Well penned.
30/30
Emotion : The poem did not feel incomplete.It satisfied me in all ways.melefious is something that has touched my soul,each word created an exotic desire,desire to read further.Words were eonugh to comunicate and I think thats what a real poem is like.
10/10
Line structure : The lines were connected,each line lead to the other and held a specific meaning which it was able to communicate with the author.It seemed complete.It did not leave me wandering what more could have been there,it had all what it needed.
8/10
Poetic devices : Lets say,if the poem was sad or it was about desires,then it was thoroughly based on that.It was not like the title was something else and it meant something else.Being a reader,it sent me chills reading it.Words were so powerfull that they made me imagine and feel each and every word.The use of vocabulary was well,there weren't so many tough words,it was all in certain and balanced amount.
20/20
Diction : Like I mentioned above,words had meaning,words had power and most of all it had a weird flame that encircled me within it.Word structure or be it the way the words were used,all of them had a sense of professionalism.
30/30
Total : 98/100
This is the winning book. No other book send me emotions the way this book did. I loved it. Be it the words or be it how it was arranged all of them were just beyond belief. Best poetry book I ever read.
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Participant: SketchyReaderWriter
Place: Africa
Book: There's Method to this Madness
Grammar: No grammatical errors. I was quite impressed seeing no errors in grammar which most people make.
30/30
Emotion : The poem had its own way of expressing itself with a lot of rhymes.It was very rhythmic as most words rhymed with another.It could clearly explain what it meant in a different way which is appreciable. People use a lot of exquisite words yet fail to master a poem,but this case,its a beautiful example of rhyme in poetry.Well versed.
9/10
Line structure:When you write a poem that is well rhyming,the first thkng you need to know is order.You cannot just scramble everything and consider it a poem.It is appreciable that all words were accurately placed. I was quite impressed to see this,the poem and its rhyming was giving me a jolly experience. You can understand that,because when you see something rhyme, you dont feel like 'wait what why is it ever here?' It was overall very nice.
8/10
Poetic devices : I could find a lot of then but they all were in a definite proportion,it wasn't like the entire poem is just stuffed with words that I have no clue about.It had some of them but then,all of them did not make the poem a puzzle, it made it more meaningfull. The poem had strong points,that it was able to hold the entire time,not just the beggining but even at the end,I did not forget the central idea of the poem, because it was held together almost all the time.
19/20
Diction : The uses of words and the use of lines were all making sense.Poem is about how well are you able to express yourself without making it a complete jumbled jigsaw puzzle and sketchyreaderwriter, i must say did it very nicely.
30/30
Total : 97/100
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Participant: XoXDQXoX
Book: Words from a Broken Girl
Grammar: Grammar is full for this one. No grammatical errors. Nice
30/30
Emotions : It was short,yet touchy.I could relate,I could feel.I could feel the pain of the poem.It was short yet crisp.That's what a poem should be like.Specially fear,omg that was just great.
10/10
Line structure: Line structure was relatable.It was not messed.The lines were exactly where it should be,did not seem lost,or asking the readers to find a place for themselves.
9/10
Poetic device : Actually it was hard to find them,though the poem is able to express itself yet there is this lack of words. It give me a feeling incompleteness. Though there was a communication set up between the audience and the poet but it was not strong. Might be cause of the shortness of the poem. But it had a lasting effect.
15/20
Diction and organization: Use of words or figure of speech? Hardly any. I mean that is what seperates a poem from a story. I mean there were rhymes but still I felt a need of more figures of speech. Line was well structured. The best thing is though it was short it was able to create pools of imagination within my head. Just one thing, the poem could have been a little longer.
23/30
Total: 87/100
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Participant: theintrospectiveme
Book: Somethings
Grammar : I would give the grammar,full.It was overall correct.
30/30
Emotions: Umm,I think I could understand what it mean't but feel?I actually did not much.Words were short but not enough to suffice my mind or what I wanted with the story.It did not felt complete.It was lacking something.I could sense a bit of insufficiency.
3/10
Line structure : Well it was set nice.I mean I could relate well with each line.It wasn't like everything is just studded.It was well put up.It was not messy,I would rather say it was neat and well arranged.Didn't find it jumbled.
8/10
Poetic devices : Poems were short.But use of poetic devices could be seen.Although it was insufficient.It lacked a spark.The tone was formal.But as a reader I had this thought,"Wait what it ended?"Though it carried its message it still needed something to complete it.
12/20
Diction: Well i can say it was well organized with appropriate words.I did not have to open a dictionary and just wave pages,searching for words.It was well versed with words that were needed.It did not have exquisite words that were not required,instead had words that were understandable for the normal people.This is the thing I love.
28/30
Total : 81/100
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Judge: Taemedaddy
Participant: eccentricdestiny13
Place: Asia
Book: The Pettifogging Chamber
Grammar: 30/30
Emotions: 10/10
Line structure: 10/10
Poetic devices: 20/20
Organization and diction: 30/30
Total: 100/100
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Participant: Emy_Akpan
Place: Africa
Book: ESSENCE
Grammar:30/30
Emotions:0/10
Line structure:10/10
Poetic devices:20/20
Organization and diction:30/30
Total:90 /100
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Participant: Tipsy_Wings
Place: Asia
Book: I Have Come To Confess
Grammar:20/30
Emotions:5/10
Line structure:10/10
Poetic devices:0/20
Organization and diction20/:30
Total 55/100
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Participant: aMusedandPoetic
Place: Europe
Book: Musings
Grammar:30/30
Emotions:5/10
Line structure:10/10
Poetic devices:10/20
Organization and diction:30/30
Total:85/100
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Participant: Anabuzjustinedebezy
Book: A Beauty with Scars
Grammar: 20/30
Emotions: 0/10
Line structure:1 0/10
Poetic devices: 5/20
Organization and diction: 10/30
Total:45/100
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Judge: stella_raymond_real
Participant: arushirajguru
Book: Hidden Poetry
Total Score: 95/100
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Participant: artandwildflower
Book: The Art of Words
Total Score: 93/100
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Participant: Rachel_MercuryHolmes
Place: Asia
Book: Sonnet's Mine
Total Score: 96/100
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Participant: faychaaaa
Place: Asia
Book: Written Feelings
Total Score: 94/100
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Participant: RajacWindspire
Place: USA
Book: Life's Lessons
Total Score: 90/100
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