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Judge: VRMY13

Participant: 2MysteriousGem

Place: Asia

Book: ~POEMS~

Grammar: 20/30

There were several grammar mistakes that I found.

Emotions: 8/10

I can feel that you write by emotion, but it kind of lacks impact.

Line Structure: 9/10

Some are not written in stanzas, but it's good.

Poetic Devices: 15/20

I don't really notice that you use other poetic devices aside from rhymes.

Organization & Diction: 28/30

Well organized.

Total: 80/100

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Participant: more-like-reyna

Place: India, Asia

Book: Reflection

Grammar: 28/30

Emotions: 10/10

Each word spoken held depth one wouldn't help but feel

Line Structure: 10/10

Set in simple sentences to read but feel

Poetic Devices: 19/20

A huge role of similes, metaphors and rhymes played throughout each poem

Organization&diction: 26/30

Well structured, some could do with a bit more or less

Total: 94/100

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Participant: NerissaTheodora

Place: Asia

Book: Hidden Facets of a Gal

Grammar: 27/30

Some words can be omitted to give a deeper meaning

Emotions: 10/10

The emotions oozing through each line spoken, written, said, one can feel even if there is no similar event that has happened to one to feel

Line Structure: 10/10

Each stanza is written and held with a kick to emotions

Poetic Devices: 19/20

Metaphors, similes, rhymes all play a huge role within the texts that formed the stories being told

Organization&diction: 27/30

Organized and spoken/written well

Total: 93/100

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Participant: sunshineglitch

Place: Asia

Book: Something in the Air

Grammar: 28/30

Very minimal mistakes but a few need changing

Emotions: 10/10

Emotions poured through choice of words were felt

Line Structure: 8/10

Sentence structure used but each holding enough to tell the story

Poetic Devices: 16/20

Organization&diction: 27/30

Total: 89/100

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Participant: Tefnut09

Place: Asia

Book: Puss in Boots

Grammar: 25/30

Some words can be omitted

Emotions: 6/10

Some emotions may be brought forth such from reminiscing times

Line Structure: 10/10

Simple and readable sentences

Poetic Devices: 16/20

The tone was set in a readable stanza for an audience every known of the cat in boots known as Puss In Boots

Organization&diction: 28/30

Very well organized

Total: 85/100

*****

Judge: ENCHANTEDmajor

Participant: maanvibhagat

Book: My Brain Work

Grammar : No grammatical errors. Each and every line was well written.

30/30

Emotions: The book was nice,it could reflect what it wanted to convey.It could clearly show what it meant,words were not hazzy but were crystal clear.

8/10

Line structure: The poem was well organized,it didn't appeared as if it was just stuffed,it could clearly bring out meaning.The context or be it the words,each and every thing was well balanced.

8/10

Poetic devices : The poem can very well communicate with the audience. Many times as a reader we keep wandering what does this particual line mean or what does it signify but here as a reader the words were clear, they were enough to give me the sense of idea or tell me what they meant. Rather than spending so much time,trying to figure what it meant, I could enjoy the actual words of the poem.

20/20

Diction and organization : I must say the poem lacked use of various figures of speech. I mean they were there but not in much quanity although this did not effect the true meaning of the poem. But i would really liked if there were use of 'metaphors' or 'hyperbole'. Again,the lines were well arranged and so were the words.

25/30

Total : 91/100

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Participant: kittymissylexisexy

Place: Asia

Book: Mellifluous: A Poetry Collection

Grammar : 30 for the grammar.There were no grammatical errors. Well penned.

30/30

Emotion : The poem did not feel incomplete.It satisfied me in all ways.melefious is something that has touched my soul,each word created an exotic desire,desire to read further.Words were eonugh to comunicate and I think thats what a real poem is like.

10/10

Line structure : The lines were connected,each line lead to the other and held a specific meaning which it was able to communicate with the author.It seemed complete.It did not leave me wandering what more could have been there,it had all what it needed.

8/10

Poetic devices : Lets say,if the poem was sad or it was about desires,then it was thoroughly based on that.It was not like the title was something else and it meant something else.Being a reader,it sent me chills reading it.Words were so powerfull that they made me imagine and feel each and every word.The use of vocabulary was well,there weren't so many tough words,it was all in certain and balanced amount.

20/20

Diction : Like I mentioned above,words had meaning,words had power and most of all it had a weird flame that encircled me within it.Word structure or be it the way the words were used,all of them had a sense of professionalism.

30/30

Total : 98/100

This is the winning book. No other book send me emotions the way this book did. I loved it. Be it the words or be it how it was arranged all of them were just beyond belief. Best poetry book I ever read.

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Participant: SketchyReaderWriter

Place: Africa

Book: There's Method to this Madness

Grammar: No grammatical errors. I was quite impressed seeing no errors in grammar which most people make.

30/30

Emotion : The poem had its own way of expressing itself with a lot of rhymes.It was very rhythmic as most words rhymed with another.It could clearly explain what it meant in a different way which is appreciable. People use a lot of exquisite words yet fail to master a poem,but this case,its a beautiful example of rhyme in poetry.Well versed.

9/10

Line structure:When you write a poem that is well rhyming,the first thkng you need to know is order.You cannot just scramble everything and consider it a poem.It is appreciable that all words were accurately placed. I was quite impressed to see this,the poem and its rhyming was giving me a jolly experience. You can understand that,because when you see something rhyme, you dont feel like 'wait what why is it ever here?' It was overall very nice.

8/10

Poetic devices : I could find a lot of then but they all were in a definite proportion,it wasn't like the entire poem is just stuffed with words that I have no clue about.It had some of them but then,all of them did not make the poem a puzzle, it made it more meaningfull. The poem had strong points,that it was able to hold the entire time,not just the beggining but even at the end,I did not forget the central idea of the poem, because it was held together almost all the time.

19/20

Diction : The uses of words and the use of lines were all making sense.Poem is about how well are you able to express yourself without making it a complete jumbled jigsaw puzzle and sketchyreaderwriter, i must say did it very nicely.

30/30

Total : 97/100

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Participant: XoXDQXoX

Book: Words from a Broken Girl

Grammar: Grammar is full for this one. No grammatical errors. Nice

30/30

Emotions : It was short,yet touchy.I could relate,I could feel.I could feel the pain of the poem.It was short yet crisp.That's what a poem should be like.Specially fear,omg that was just great.

10/10

Line structure: Line structure was relatable.It was not messed.The lines were exactly where it should be,did not seem lost,or asking the readers to find a place for themselves.

9/10

Poetic device : Actually it was hard to find them,though the poem is able to express itself yet there is this lack of words. It give me a feeling incompleteness. Though there was a communication set up between the audience and the poet but it was not strong. Might be cause of the shortness of the poem. But it had a lasting effect.

15/20

Diction and organization: Use of words or figure of speech? Hardly any. I mean that is what seperates a poem from a story. I mean there were rhymes but still I felt a need of more figures of speech. Line was well structured. The best thing is though it was short it was able to create pools of imagination within my head. Just one thing, the poem could have been a little longer.

23/30

Total: 87/100

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Participant: theintrospectiveme

Book: Somethings

Grammar : I would give the grammar,full.It was overall correct.

30/30

Emotions: Umm,I think I could understand what it mean't but feel?I actually did not much.Words were short but not enough to suffice my mind or what I wanted with the story.It did not felt complete.It was lacking something.I could sense a bit of insufficiency.

3/10

Line structure : Well it was set nice.I mean I could relate well with each line.It wasn't like everything is just studded.It was well put up.It was not messy,I would rather say it was neat and well arranged.Didn't find it jumbled.

8/10

Poetic devices : Poems were short.But use of poetic devices could be seen.Although it was insufficient.It lacked a spark.The tone was formal.But as a reader I had this thought,"Wait what it ended?"Though it carried its message it still needed something to complete it.

12/20

Diction: Well i can say it was well organized with appropriate words.I did not have to open a dictionary and just wave pages,searching for words.It was well versed with words that were needed.It did not have exquisite words that were not required,instead had words that were understandable for the normal people.This is the thing I love.

28/30

Total : 81/100

*****

Judge: Taemedaddy

Participant: eccentricdestiny13

Place: Asia

Book: The Pettifogging Chamber

Grammar: 30/30

Emotions: 10/10

Line structure: 10/10

Poetic devices: 20/20

Organization and diction: 30/30

Total: 100/100

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Participant: Emy_Akpan

Place: Africa

Book: ESSENCE

Grammar:30/30

Emotions:0/10

Line structure:10/10

Poetic devices:20/20

Organization and diction:30/30

Total:90 /100

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Participant: Tipsy_Wings

Place: Asia

Book: I Have Come To Confess

Grammar:20/30

Emotions:5/10

Line structure:10/10

Poetic devices:0/20

Organization and diction20/:30

Total 55/100

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Participant: aMusedandPoetic

Place: Europe

Book: Musings

Grammar:30/30

Emotions:5/10

Line structure:10/10

Poetic devices:10/20

Organization and diction:30/30

Total:85/100

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Participant: Anabuzjustinedebezy

Book: A Beauty with Scars

Grammar: 20/30

Emotions: 0/10

Line structure:1 0/10

Poetic devices: 5/20

Organization and diction: 10/30

Total:45/100

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Judge: stella_raymond_real

Participant: arushirajguru

Book: Hidden Poetry

Total Score: 95/100

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Participant: artandwildflower

Book: The Art of Words

Total Score: 93/100

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Participant: Rachel_MercuryHolmes

Place: Asia

Book: Sonnet's Mine

Total Score: 96/100

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Participant: faychaaaa

Place: Asia

Book: Written Feelings

Total Score: 94/100

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Participant: RajacWindspire

Place: USA

Book: Life's Lessons

Total Score: 90/100



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