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JUDGE: RuthieBalo

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PARTICIPANT: xvpizzalov

FROM: Asia

BOOK: Rest in Peace

TOTAL: 87/100

Title: 8/10

Opening: 6/10

Characters: 20/20

Plot: 36/40

Grammar: 17/20

The title is simple, but enticing. Also it could mean a lot of things in different contexts. The opening decent; it did let me know what the story is going to be, but it's too short. I love the characters; especially the main character. She is awesome, smart, sarcastic, and clever. But she is also realistic as she does have flaws and mistakes. The plot is brilliant. At first, I thought this book was going to be basic with a family that is ridiculously rich. But this book actually plays with expectations and makes fun of cliches in horror and teen fiction. This book balances comedy and horror really well. The writing and grammar is excellent. No major mistakes, except for some confusing tenses. But other than that, I love the writing. Overall, this book is special and the author is truly talented.

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PARTICIPANT: akeila_agramunn

FROM: Asia

BOOK: Rise of the New Olympians

TOTAL: 77/100

Title: 9/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 16/20

Plot: 29/40

Grammar: 15/20

The title is great. It lets the reader know what type of book they are getting into. It is relevant to the story. The opening is really good; I understood what was going to happen and it left me excited to read more. The characters are good; there are a lot of gods and characters who have their own unique powers and traits. Some use it for evil or revenge, while others use it for good. The plot is good, but it does remind me of other books and movies. Mainly, Percy Jackson. The writing is good, there were some awkward sentence structuring and some paragraphs could have been written differently. Overall, a solid book.

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PARTICIPANT: miss-rina

FROM: Africa

BOOK: The Beautiful and the Damned

TOTAL: 74/100

Title: 6/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 15/20

Plot: 31/40

Grammar: 14/20

The title is solid. It's a bit generic as I feel like there are a lot of things named that. The opening is well done. I especially like the quotes, showing the characters interacting and their relationship towards each other. I love the characters, especially Sekker, who is a personification of death. He has a lot of human traits for a grim-reaper; showing his feelings on humans, Devils, gods, Suicide, love, the afterlife, and what it's like being a grim reaper. He is such a fascinating character. The plot is really good. Exploring the world of death and treating it as a corporation. Showing the many experiences and interactions that the Grim reaper go through. The grammar is solid, but there were a lot of punctuation mistakes and sentences that could have been written better. Overall, a solid book.

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PARTICIPANT: Nerdnessoverloaded

FROM: Asia

BOOK: So Far Away

TOTAL: 59/100

Title: 7/10

Opening: 6/10

Characters: 14/20

Plot: 20/40

Grammar: 12/20

The title is fine. It does have mystery to it, but it's too simple. The opening is okay. I appreciated the quotes, but the description of the book is too short. Also it didn't entice me enough to read the book. I do like some of the characters. I especially liked Hayley as she does have personality and is supportive to her family and friends. The plot is fine, but there are a lot of books on Wattpad dealing with high school. This book didn't really add anything new. The grammar is not the best; punctuation mistakes, run-on sentences, spacing issues, and lack of capitalizations. This book was okay.

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PARTICIPANT: Dishami661

FROM: --

BOOK: Queen Vishaka

TOTAL: 81/100

Title: 10/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 17/20

Plot: 35/40

Grammar: 11/20

I love the title so much. It shows culture, it lets the reader know what type of book they are getting, and it's enticing. The opener is really good as I got a clear sense about the book and the life of Vishaka. Vishaka and the characters are great. Vishaka learns so much about her powers and the dos/don'ts of using it. I love how supportive Vishaka's sister is as she teaches her a lot about her powers and how to properly use them. The plot is excellent, it feels like a true fairytale. I love the world, the powers, the responsibilities, the people, and the characters. If there's one thing that I don't like about this book has got to be the grammar. There are a lot of spacing, punctuations, misspellings, and capitalization mistakes. Proofread more and edit more of your book. Overall, this book is really good.

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JUDGE: Namrata8155

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PARTICIPANT: CallmeBethel

FROM: Asia

BOOK: Game of Realms: Angels, God's and Mortals

TOTAL: 90/100

Title: 10/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 19/20

Plot: 37/40

Grammar: 15/20

There are spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes which are in need of editing. Some punctuations are missing. Prologue is a bit messy. Some sentences are complicated and difficult to read. I suggest writing simple and comprehensible sentences. Writing style improves from chapter 1. Plot is intriguing and fascinating. The Shakespearean style dialogues fascinated me the most. I was expecting that but wasn't sure if this story could deliver it. Humour was refreshing. One more thing that I absolutely love about this book is that it is informative which can keep the curious minded readers intrigued and hooked till the end. I like how the characters interact with each other. Dialogues are entertaining. Plot development is great. I love the originality of this story. However, so many things are happening, that it gets confusing at times, what to focus on. It's difficult to engross in the story. The flow gets interrupted multiple times. Whenever I'm getting into the story, the plot gets completely diverted in different directions and I'm forgetting about the other characters.

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PARTICIPANT: TheDrippingOilPaint

FROM: Asia

BOOK: Shadow on the Window

TOTAL: 83/100

Title: 10/10

Opening: 9/10
Characters: 16/20

Plot: 30/40

Grammar: 18/20

The cover and title are alluring and apt for a paranormal book; definitely draws readers to the book. The artistic images enhance its aesthetic appeal. The chapters are too short, thus the story seems slow paced. Writing style is fluid. Descriptions are graphic and vivid. The emotions of the protagonist have been portrayed very well. This book is well written. The author made sure that there were no grammatical or spelling mistakes which made it more enjoyable and easier to read.

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PARTICIPANT: Itskhinandten

FROM: --

BOOK: The Nightmare Last Night

TOTAL: 93/100

Title: 10/10

Opening: 10/10

Characters: 19/20

Plot: 39/40

Grammar: 15/20

The plot developed very well as the story progressed. There is the right amount of suspense and drama. I enjoyed the dialogues and the character interactions. The characters seemed very real. I could feel their emotions. However, there are few grammatical and spelling errors which are in need of editing. The story is gripping. The romance seemed a bit immature. The matchmaking thing and Dhaarula's overdramatic behaviour is hilarious and surreal. Even the confession of Thaen seemed forced. Writing style is good. The social message about the importance of trees ("Save trees") has been conveyed very beautifully in the story. The character aesthetics are beautiful.

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PARTICIPANT: ridampanesar

FROM: North America

BOOK: After School

TOTAL: 96/100

Title: 9/10

Opening: 10/10

Characters: 20/20

Plot: 38/40

Grammar: 19/20

The plot is intriguing. The story is very well written. The author made sure that there were no grammatical errors or misspelled words or missing punctuations. This made the book easier to read. Writing style is elegant. The detailed descriptions of scenes and characters made the story more engaging and enthralling. The characters seemed real. Readers can feel the emotions of each character. Although, the narration of the seating arrangements seemed tedious at one point. The horror scenes are strong and compelling. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the book. This is definitely a good read.

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PARTICIPANT: mathakuna

FROM: --

BOOK: The Last Breath

TOTAL:

Title: 8/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 16/20

Plot: 30/40

Grammar: 12/20

The title and cover are good but could be better. Since the genre is paranormal, I was expecting something scary. Chapters are too short. There are grammatical mistakes which are in need of editing. Writing style is good. I enjoyed the dialogues and character interactions.

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JUDGE: AngelOfDeath2020

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PARTICIPANT: SkylerChase29

FROM: --

BOOK: Vicious Fangs

TOTAL: 82/100

Title: 8/10
Opening: 6/10

Characters: 10/20

Plot: 39/40

Grammar: 19/20

Title: Relevant, not very rare, has a slight bold effect.

Opening: It didn't really hook me into the book as much as others did, but I love how it was written.

Characters: I can't feel them. As I said before this is a rare problem for me but I just can't. The descriptions are good though.

Plot: It's a good plot, I have some questions but they might be answered later on the story.

Grammar: As most were, so close to perfection.

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PARTICIPANT: HollyDixon_

FROM: UK

BOOK: Fallen Light

TOTAL: 97/100

Title: 9/10

Opening: 10/10

Characters: 18/20

Plot: 40/40

Grammar: 20/20

Title: Now that got me interested right away. Those two words you wouldn't expect to be together. Unfortunately it isn't rare, but does have a bold effect.

Opening: I love the way it was written and it got me hooked into the book.

Characters: I can relate and feel them most of the time, the author did the descriptions well too.

Plot: Good plot, no holes, very unique, I haven't seen a single story like it. I look forward to reading more.

Grammar: Perfect.

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PARTICIPANT: NatSullivan17

FROM: --

BOOK: Shadows of Chaos

DISQUALIFIED

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PARTICIPANT: chiomanita

FROM: --

BOOK: The Devil's Mission

TOTAL: 80/100

Title: 10/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 13/20

Plot: 40/40

Grammar: 9/20

Title: "Devil? A devil is the main character?" that's what I thought when I first read the title and got curious. It definitely has a bold effect and is rare.

Opening: It didn't get me as curious and interested as a title, but it works.

Characters: I cannot relate and can't imagine snapping at my father like the princess, but I do feel them.

Plot: It's a good plot and the only one of its kind I know. The only other story I know starring the ones who are usually the bad guys/villains is Descendants.

Grammar: Needs improvement.

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PARTICIPANT: triothethird

FROM: Asia

BOOK: The Oracle in the Dust

TOTAL: 95/100

Title: 8/10

Opening: 10/10

Characters: 20/20

Plot: 40/40

Grammar: 17/20

Title: So far irrelevant, it's rather rare and has a bold effect though.

Opening: This got me interested, I also love it.

Characters: I can relate and I can feel them, and this is all the time.

Plot: It's a wonderful plot, and I can't wait to read more. There aren't any holes too.

Grammar: It's rather good, though missing spaces, quotation marks, etc. every now and then.

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JUDGE: Oluwatosinmelody24

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PARTICIPANT: Dream_Writer11

FROM: Africa
BOOK: Caeli: Anel

TOTAL: 93/100

Title: 7/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 19/20

Plot: 39/40

Grammar: 19/20

Title:nice title but I don't really understand what it meant. It's unique.

Opening: The opening was amazing. I was curious to find out what happened next.. It a nice opening.

Characters: Nice characters. I couldn't relate much but the characters we're amazing.

Plot: Amazing plot. I love the plot. You did an amazing job.

Grammar: Your grammar was on point.

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PARTICIPANT: ChasteEmpress

FROM: Africa

BOOK: Aliana the Mermaid

TOTAL: 79/100

Title: 8/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 15/20

Plot: 30/40

Grammar: 17/20

Title:The title is straightforward. Anyone reading the novel would know it is a mermaid story centered on a mermaid girl.

Opening: The opening is nice and it made me check what happened next. Nice opening.

Characters: The characters weren't real. The writer made them perfect. People have flaws! The characters we're too cliche.

Plot: The plot was a little bit cliche. It's like a story I've seen all the time on Wattpad. A girl falling in love with a billionaire son.

Grammar: Just a few punctuation errors that can be corrected.

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PARTICIPANT: SumitJena2099

FROM: Asia

BOOK: The Blue Voice

TOTAL: 87/100

Title: 9/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 16/20

Plot: 35/40

Grammar: 18/20

Title: It's rare and unique. 'The blue voice'.

Opening: It's very catchy. It would make you question yourself on what was going on to happen next.

Characters: Well I didn't feel the connection between the characters and the readers. Apart from that, it was okay.

Plot: The plot was solid enough but the writer needs to add something to the story. Like a twist.

Grammar: Punctuation errors.

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PARTICIPANT: pantherplz3

FROM: --

BOOK: The Town of Anton

TOTAL: 95/100

Title: 8/10

Opening: 10/10

Characters: 19/20

Plot: 39/40

Grammar: 19/20

Title: Nice title. It made us understand that the story was going to be about a town called Anton.

Opening: The opening was a wow. I was so hooked up that I was anxious about the next chapter.

Characters: The characters felt real. The girl whose parents were killed by an unknown man. Great character setting.

Plot: Nice plot. You are a great writer and I'm amazed at your plot. Kudos!

Grammar: Your grammar and punctuations were on point.

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PARTICIPANT: Zacari-Primrose

FROM: --

BOOK: Got Pregnant by the Hybrid

TOTAL: 90/100
Title: 6/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 18/20

Plot: 38/40

Grammar: 19/20

Title: It's too long. She could use something like this. "The hybrid child or A hybrid baby." There is nothing wrong with the title but it too long and not catchy 6%

Opening: The opening was lovely. It expresses curiosity. Like what the hell? Really? She is pregnant.. I was curious to know what Happened next.

Characters: They felt real. I could feel their emotions. Nice job writer.

Plot: Good plot. From the few chapters I read, I concluded that the plot was nice.

Grammar: Didn't really notice any grammar errors.

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Well Done everyone!
A little improvement is needed by each of you, our Judges judged your book with Full honesty, So their reviews does matter to you.