A tribute follow to  readwriteslay who wrote this

Judge: Alpha_Me8

Participant: Taranee6284

Book: The other side.

Scores: 85 /100

Title: 8/10
Opening: 6/10
Character:18 /20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 16/20

Reviews:  I really liked the title, but you know, one can always make things better. The title wasn't associated very nicely with the book. I found mistakes and grammatical errors in the very opening sentence, to begin with. The sentence where Nate talks with Ray about biology. The plot is interesting but the errors are really frustrating. The full stops come before the quotation marks not after them. I recommend that you get your work proofread and edited by one of the shops on Wattpad.

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Participant: MayaUmeh15

From: Africa

Book: Conquered

Scores: 79/100

Title: 7/10
Opening: 7/10
Characters: 15/20
Plot: 34/40
Grammar:16 /20

Reviews: The title and the book cover were the very things, that inspired me to read the book. Take this as friendly advice, that there are many editors and proofreaders work on Wattpad, who offer their services. Please get one of them to read and edit your book because there are many punctuation and grammatical errors. Also, the paragraphs are way too lengthy, for a reader's choice. The dialogue strategy was also off. We couldn't understand, who was saying what, and also that you wrote the dialogues, in the same paragraphs. Really, Maya, it doesn't hurt to start from a new line.

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Participant:  UNBROKENSMILE

Book: IN CONTROL

Scores: 96/100

Title: 9/10
Opening: 9/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 40/40
Grammar:19 /20

 Reviews: A very well written book, with a lot of potentials. I don't really read lgbtq+ books, but I think this book changed my viewpoint of lgbtq+ books. The author really knows what she is doing. The plot is also not cliché, but unique in its own way. That's why I had to give it full marks. The grammar and punctuation were all very well set, and the reader could literally feel the characters' feelings and emotions. So, character building is really visible. Your work is great! Keep it up!♡

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Participant: theashesofthephoenix

Book: Ashes of the Phoenix

Scores: 96/100

Title: 9/10
Opening: 7/10
Characters: 17/20
Plot: 38/40
Grammar:19 /20

Reviews: The title was awesome! It hooked me to read the book. Also, the character development was quite visible and strong. The reader was able to get a glimpse at Fade's life and condition. The place where you had a downfall was the dialogues section. We always put a full stop before the quotation marks, not after it. Also, always leave a line after writing a dialogue. It would seem better and neater. You can also, make the structure of the paragraphs more accurate and suitable by decreasing their length. However, this book was an interesting read!♡

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Participant: booklored

Book: Xavier

Scores: 98/100

Title: 10/10
Opening: 9/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 39/40
Grammar: 20/20

Review:- The book cover was gorgeous! From the start only everything was perfect! Not only was the title really good and the opening pretty captivating, but the characters were also made up quite well. Frankly, I could see the metaphorically see the scene when Victoria was shot or when Xavier confesses that he was checking her fidelity. It was all quite interesting. The plot was unique and also the concept of LGBTQ+ was spicy. Keep it up! Your book will be worth every shot!♡

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Judge: VisualTragedy

Participant: sheryl_

Book: Crimson and Azure

Scores: 58/100

Title: 4/10
Opening: 3/10
Characters: 14/20
Plot: 25/40
Grammar: 10/20

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Participant: epxphani

Book: Bind the knot

Scores: 89/100

Title: 10/10
Opening: 7/10
Characters: 17/20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 18/20

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Participant: Bitchthatsme

Book: A change of heart

Scores: 79/100

Title: 7/10
Opening: 6/10
Characters: 16/20
Plot: 30/40
Grammar: 20/20

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Participant: SinnerBeKiller

Book: Spirited away

Scores: 82/100

Title: 4/10
Opening: 5/10
Characters: 17/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 19/20

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Participant: sheenushivani

Book: Burnt soul

Scores: 77/100

Title: 7/10
Opening: 5/10
Characters: 14/20
Plot: 32/40
Grammar: 19/20

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Judge: dorkynerd21

Participant: Xanatos271

Book: Demons of farewell

Title: 8/10
Opening:10/10
Character development:18/20
Plot:36/40
Grammar:20/20

Total:92/100

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Participant: Harrylmarteee

Book: Italian Mess

Title: 9/10
Opening:10/10
Character development:19/20
Plot:38/40
Grammar:20/20

Total:96/100

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Participant: phimimi01

Book: The church-Goer

Title:8/10
Opening:9/10
Character development:18/20
Plot:32/40
Grammar:19/20

Total:86/100

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Participant: Taranee586

Book: Loving Ms. billionaire

Title: 8/10
Opening: 9/10
Character development: 19/20
Plot: 38/40
Grammar: 20/20

Total: 94/100

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Participant: Debasmita02mitra

Book name: The rules of pursuit

Title: 8/10
Opening:8/10
Character development:19/20
Plot:37/40
Grammar:18/20

Total:90/100

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Judge: imagineTishaD

Book: Fly me to the moon

Participant: Namrata8155

Score: 76/100

Title: 9/10

As I have to read the first six chapters of the book, so I knew, that it wasn't relevant and Rare title but it does create curiosity to know why it's title is that?

Opening: 4/10

Not good. Both prologue and first chapter do not attract readers. You started as "It was a lazy Sunday...." and "In the laboratory, they inserted..." Was not at all attracted me.

Characters: 15/20

Until chapter 6, I got to read-only Tina's POV. But she was an interesting character. I liked the humor of Guinea pig.

Plot: 28/40

It seemed to be a science fiction story, though I liked the concept of the spoon and how the stranger mocked at her.

Grammar: 20/20

No errors found. Keep writing.

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Book: Feminine Secrets

Participant: pinkiriss

Score: 95/100

Title: 10/10

The title is Rare, first reader seems to have an idea that the story will be narrative by a female (a girl) but it comes to be a boy. Wow!

Opening: 9/10.

Your first starting about the boy had a name, was mind-blowing but then you suddenly revealed "I was the prettiest boy...." It suppressed my curiosity but as well uplift the excitement why the boy is pretty?

Characters: 16/20

So far I liked all the characters, the boy and Natalie. But not the teacher of course.

Plot: 40/40

At every turn, there's another turn.

Grammar: 20/20

No errors found.

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Book: When in London

Participant: katherineWitherspoon

Score: 93/100

Title: 10/10

I love how you set the title, for me usually it's hard to set a title. It definitely is Relevant and rare.

Opening: 10/10

I specifically loved the Cover, Banners, and all other graphics. I just loved it. Also, your opening of the story was Excellent.

Characters: 18/20

Jane was good and Rich is my favorite, I find him funny. Lyla...um ya could be a better character.

Plot: 35/40

I'll read the whole book to find the plot...

Grammar: 20/20

No errors found

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Book: The moment we met

Participant: IvashkovLightwood

Score: 94/100

Title: 9/10

Though it's not rare but I appreciate the relevancy.

Opening: 7/10

I liked your trailer. But the opening could have been better. You could have written, "What would you do if 5 years ago your mom, dad died and today's their death anniversary?"... Then start about it's spring...

Characters: 19/20

I love Maddison so far. I like how you called Grandma as "Gramma".

Plot: 39/40

Till chapter 6, your plot is very strong.

Grammar: 20/20

No errors, wow!

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Book: DeVil's in the name

Participant: Sugar_And_Spice125

Score: 90/100

Title: 8/10

It does create curiosity, but it's not rare. But I like your cover's subtitles "People always underestimate a girl in Diamonds and fur"

Opening: 10/10

The best opening I read among these 5 books. I loved it. Perfect.

Characters: 14/20

For me, they were pretty confusing because of their names, I mean I got confused between Cruella and Gabriella!

Plot: 38/40

Good one, I had no problem understanding.

Grammar: 20/20

No errors found, but pretty good use of words.

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Well Done everyone!
A little improvement is needed by each of you, our Judges judged your book with Full honesty, So their reviews does matter to you.