Mystery/Thriller Royalties ✓
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JUDGE: devilsupro
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PARTICIPANT: chimphony
FROM: Asia
BOOK: Operation Superhuman
DISQUALIFIED
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PARTICIPANT: Sharleonbeibangara
FROM: --
BOOK: The Secret of the Mullivatras
TOTAL: 90/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 9/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 36/40
Grammar: 16/20
Title: Appropriate title.
Opening: Exciting opening.
Characters: Proper characters used which had an effect on the story.
Plot: Plot was good but some chapters were too lengthy that one would get bored reading it and it also caused the plot to fall off sometimes.
Grammar: A lot of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes were present.
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PARTICIPANT: NxnsxgnorsDxmon
FROM: --
BOOK: Possible Second Chance
TOTAL: 99/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 20/20
Plot: 39.5/40
Grammar: 19.5/20
Title: No other title would have been better.
Opening: The opening was bang on and arose much interest.
Character: A good deal of exciting characters used.
Plot: Rarely any plot holes found.
Grammar: Too good.
**One of the best books I read till date.
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PARTICIPANT: whatkhushiwrites
FROM: Asia
BOOK: CHAOS
TOTAL: 96.5/100
Title: 9/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 39/40
Grammar: 19.5/20
Title: Relevant title with the chaos caused in the protagonist's mind.
Opening: Excellent opening.
Character: Good mix of characters.
Plot: Well established and stable plot.
**My pleasure to read this book.
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PARTICIPANT: sarah_amlan
FROM: Asia
BOOK: KATANA - The Slayer
TOTAL: 93/100
Title: 8/10
Opening: 10/10
Character: 19/20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 19/20
Title: The title was relevant to the character, but it still didn't have an effect on the story yet.
Opening: Impressive opening with a curiosity to know further.
Characters: Good deal of characters used.
Plot: The plot was good enough but the base is not that stable, but was good to read.
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JUDGE: Aphrodite
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PARTICIPANT: musembee
FROM: Africa
BOOK: Arabella Academy: Perfectly Imperfect
TOTAL: 100/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 20/20
Plot: 40/40
Grammar: 20/20
Title: The title is lovely. It is a rare title that made me curious. It is unique. The title really fits the genre.
Opening: The way this story felt me in shock. The author really used a catchy title that gets readers attention.
Characters: All characters in this story made it more interesting. Each character felt so realistic and I really have to say it was amazing.
Plot: The plot of this story is amazing. It really brought the emotions in me, the figurative speeches that were used made it better.
Grammar: Flawless work.
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PARTICIPANT: Orizone
FROM: Australia
BOOK: Lostar
TOTAL: 92/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 17/20
Plot: 38/40
Grammar: 17/20
Title: The title is very weird which makes reading more interesting. It is a really unique title that really fits the genre.
Opening: The way the story was opened was a bit confusing but if you read it well you will really be able to understand it. The author really started the story with an incredible opening.
Characters: The characters in this book were confusing, they were not really real to me.
Plot: The plot is really nice but it is not straight forward which really leaves me lost.
Grammar: They were so grammatical mistakes in this book.
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PARTICIPANT: aaria101
FROM: Asia
BOOK: Delusion or Illusion
TOTAL: 96/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 8/10
Characters: 20/20
Plot: 40/40
Grammar: 18/20
Title: The title is very lovely. It is a title that is full of mystery which makes it really interesting
Opening: The opening of this book was not really catchy. It was normal, it did not really attract any excitement.
Characters: All characters in this story felt so real and interesting. Each character made me really emotional and it made me finish the whole book.
Plot: The plot is incredible. It really touched me deeply.
Grammar: This book had a few spelling and tenses mistakes.
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PARTICIPANT: Hafelia
FROM: Asia
BOOK: Seeking Freedom
TOTAL: 85/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 5/10
Characters: 13/20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 20/20
This story was okay. The title was lovely but the opening was not nice at all. The characters in this book felt weird, they were not really feeling realistic. The plot was okay and a little bit weird but okay. The work was flawless.
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PARTICIPANT: Libranian1010
FROM: --
BOOK: The Lost Family
TOTAL: 84/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 6/10
Characters: 15/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 18/20
This story is also okay. The title is catchy but the opening is not. The opening ignites any emotions in the mind of the reader. The characters felt real, their pains felt real which made this book interesting to read. The plot was okay but it did not pull much emotions out of me. There were so grammatical errors in the book which the writer should edit.
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JUDGE: Akankshaola
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PARTICIPANT: EllaShaw_2642
FROM: Asia
BOOK: A Cold Summer
TOTAL: 100/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 20/20
Plot: 40/40
Grammar: 20/20
It has a unique with a perfect opening sending a mysterious aurora. The characters are in proper flow with the story and the title justifies the events following in the story.
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PARTICIPANT: Libranian1010
FROM: --
BOOK: Blind From One Eye
TOTAL: 96/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 38/40
Grammar: 19/20
The plot is unique and the title justifies the story considering the female protagonist. The characters should have been given a better description. The opening of the story makes you curious and forces you to find out what's next.
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PARTICIPANT: SinnerBeKiller
FROM: Asia
BOOK: Spirited Away
TOTAL: 86/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 7/10
Characters: 16/20
Plot: 34/40
Grammar: 19/20
The opening of the story isn't much of perfection. The title is unique and justifies the story. The characters need to be worked on. The story isn't in much flow with the plot.
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PARTICIPANT: RibbonsAndKnives
FROM: Asia
BOOK: Master's Doll
TOTAL: 83/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 7/10
Character: 14/20
Plot: 34/40
Grammar: 18/20
The opening of the story is quite confusing which doesn't appeal. The plot is unique but the character's need to be worked on. The title justifies the story.
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PARTICIPANT: WarriorGirl_777
FROM: --
BOOK: The Rose Key
TOTAL: 93/100
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Characters: 18/20
Plot: 36/40
Grammar: 19/20
The opening of the story is perfect and the title is relevant to the series of events that follow after the key is found under the rose. The characters could have been more into their personalities and shown more relevance with the plot.
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JUDGE: silenthoney906
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PARTICIPANT: Libranian1010
FROM: --
BOOK: The Famous Actress
TOTAL: 66/100
Title: 7/10
Opening: 6/10
Characters: 13/20
Plot: 20/20
Grammar: 20/20
Title: The title "The Famous Actress" is nice and gives us a sense that the story is based on the renowned and celebrated actress. It's nice and collaborates with the cover. Which I must say is nice, as talking about the effect of it on me as a reader, it is good as to encourage me but not that marvellous.
Opening: The story opening shows that the female protagonist is really interested in becoming an actress as she is fascinated by a very famous actress by seeing a magazine. But, the scenes are not that clearly defined and it doesn't leave a good impact on me as a reader as I was not bucked up to read more. The opening doesn't give me the vibe like the character building, showing how the story revolves around them. SORRY, IF ITS HARSH
Characters: The story involves around 3 characters: A]The female protagonist, Talking about JESSY the main character, she is the one with the dream to become a actress just like the lady in the magazine. With that dream, she just enters the industry but got rejected and changes her name. "flora Harper"[that is indeed a nice name ] but as I think the whole parts which I was supposed to read , as i had said, their is no detailing about her character. How she thinks, what she is actually and all that. B]Her father. Mr. George is the one was the one who knows the mysterious career of her mother. He first objects her daughter going on the same path. As he doesn't want her to know the truth. C]Her mother. {it was the secret.} The actress Jessica. Whom she wants to become like.
Plot: The plot is interesting but is not gracefully carried, sadly.
Making it a short story the mystery is not that hooking you to read forward. At least me, it doesn't interest me to read it to the last end.
P.S. sorry, it was heartfelt.
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PARTICIPANT: TheDrippingOilPaint
FROM: --
BOOK: Shadow on the Window
TOTAL: 86.5/100
Title: 8/10
Opening: 8/10
Characters: 17.5/20
Plot: 36/40
Grammar: 17/20
Title: The title is amazing with the sense of mystery in it. its perfect for the story track.
Opening: the opening of the story can not be more perfect. displaying someone depression is very much difficult. And the emotions are clearly shown.
Characters: The story clearly revolves around the female main lead ' Jiya' as she is dealing with her demons and nightmare and most important the feels of death. The chill waves making her feel liveless as she feels the life is being suck out of her makes us shudder and the mystery is perfect.
Plot: The plot is mysterious and the thrill to read increases with each passing chapter. the death thoughts. and her panic attacks cant be describe more clearly.
Grammar: The story is edited with punctuations and tenses. the thing that the paragraph should be a little smaller than they are apart from that everything is good.
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PARTICIPANT: _tales_writer_
FROM: Asia
BOOK: His 'Hush-Hush' Girl
TOTAL: 90.5/100
Title: 8.5/10
Opening: 8/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 20/20
Title: The title is cute giving the sense of the possessiveness of the male protagonist and is good for the story.
Opening: The first part is of prologue giving us the overview of the main characters. the thought about the "true love exist" is great. The first part giving us the sense of mystery in the life of Akruti is great with the description of the dream.
Characters: The story revolves around two large "Indian" Families with the great bond between them. Just loving the bond and bickerings. The female lead has something in the past which she doesn't remember. That's the mystery. The male lead is perfect in the way he is and the connection between them is also Mysterious. Loving the characters of the grandparents and their energy in the story with the sense of comedy. It's perfect.
Plot: I personally like indian stories and the plot is perfect with the sense of office romance in it. And the myterious past between the lead is interesting.
Grammar: The story is edited with a good english phrases. Contains punctuations and the tenses are good.
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PARTICIPANT: Oluwatosinmelody24
FROM: Africa
BOOK: Law and Order
TOTAL: 90/100
Title: 7.5/10
Opening: 9/10
Characters: 18/20
Plot: 36/40
Grammar: 19.5/20
Title: The title shows us the the story will have the binders of law and its good.
Opening: The story starts with the past of Jeremy. well written it shows us the reason for the revenge and the mental health of Jeremy. That intrigues us. with the nightmare description the opening is perfect.
Characters: The character of Jeremy cant be well explained more then it is. his thrist for revenge is right and His nature is perfect. Yomi is such a loyal and best friend giving us the goals for it. His support and care is Marvellous. Loving the strong characters in the story with their actions.
Plot: The plot of revenge is perfect and everybit of it is fabulous. I personally like the action with the guns and shooter. just mind blowing. The detective is perfect for her job. One more thing the creativeness of the writer is good as she explained the names of the country and cities are imaginary. Making her own world of action is amazing.
Grammar: The story is edited with punctuations and spelling. everything is good.
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PARTICIPANT: demigorgeous_wrytes
FROM: Asia
BOOK: Buried Secrets
TOTAL: 87.5/100
Title: 7/10
Opening: 8.5/10
Characters: 17/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 20/20
Title: The title is good giving the readee a sense of the secrets in the life od main leads. its intriguing.
Opening: The first is emotions jerking. with its the most emotional topic. The death of the sister of Female lead. its well written with tears jerking explaining of the feelings of Leslie and Evan.
Characters: The characters of the sibling is cute. with the twins Leslie and Evan. their bonding clearly shown. well perfectly written. The parents٫ her friend and the Raquel. the scenes are clear with the suspence of the criminal " Robert.'
Plot: The plot is suspenseful with the criminal and the police detectives.
also having a personal touch in it. The track line is strong and well portrait.
Grammar: Okay٫the story is edited with punctuations and the writing style is good.
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