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Best Indian Participant [ASIA Continent]

Judge: -Navyah-

Participant: VinyaAmby

Book: In 9 hours

Title: 10/10

Cover: 9.5/10

First 4 chapters: 54/60

Ending: 17/20

Total: 91.5/100

Review: The book is a fresh piece of creativity, worthy to read while relaxing. The title is very
captivating and the cover gives out positive vibes, try to correct the title's alignment as it's cut
from the top. Plot gives us life lessons to learn which is the best part. Chapters are nicely
planned and executed. A suggested book. Keep writing.

Participant: sarah_amlan

Book: Katana- The Slayer

Title: 9/10

Cover: 10/10

First 4 chapters: 53/60

Latest Chapter: 18/20

Total: 90/100

Review: The cover is appropriately chosen as it blends with the title and the plot. This is
another spy/intelligence agency story, but with a twist. The protagonist reminds me of
'Robinhood'. Opening chapter is thrilling and creates a vibe of curiosity straight away in the
reader's mind. The description is intriguing that at some point it feels like you are in a movie.
This is a suggested book. Good job, keep writing.
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Participant: XX_Flying_Pandas_XX

Book: The Hoodie Girl

Title: 7/10

Cover: 10/10

First 4 chapters: 55/60

Latest Chapter: 16/20

Total: 88/100

Review: The book is a good read overall, although there are some cliches yet the author has
cleverly mould it into something better and interesting. I liked the cover but not the title because
it isn't authentic and I'd really appreciate it if you change it and this will attract more readers.
The description is touchy and real. I love how strong the protagonist is despite all the downs of
her life. Pace and flow of the chapters is maintained. Good job, keep writing.

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Participant: DharmaPriyaa

Book:Dharma Priyaa

Title: 9/10

Cover: 7/10

First 4 chapters: 52/60

Ending: 16/20

Total: 84/100

Review: I've always been a fan of 'Mahabharata' hence I enjoyed reading the book but the title
should have been 'Priya' instead of 'Priyaa'. I'm not sure if Rukmini and Draupadi were related
as shown in the book, but I loved that connection. The cover looks fine but not professional,
maybe try making a new one. There are some errors in tenses that could be corrected easily,
and I believe description could have been better. Good luck, keep writing.

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Participant: shreyl_

Book:Crimson and Azure

Title: 8/10

Cover: 6/10

First 4 chapters: 45/60

Ending: 14/20

Total: 75/100

Review: I loved the blurb, it's catchy enough but the cover takes away that spark so you can
work on that part. I liked the plot, how it develops eventually. There is still some work to be done
on description. Also do not use lowercase when using inverted commas or starting a new
paragraph. Good luck, keep writing.

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Participant: POETUNKNOWN1912

Book: Speaking the unspoken

Title: 8/10

Cover: 6/10

First 5 chapters: 42/60

Latest Chapter: 14/20

Total: 70/100

Review: The author has tried various forms of poetry in the book following a thought free writing
style. The poetries give out a raw vibe which is appreciative, but at places it feels like a forced
rhyme due to which the messages become vague. Know that haitus often focus on images from
nature. Try to use punctuations often and some poetries can be easily split into stanzas you can
look upto it. Keep writing.

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Participant: Arisha_Ansari_463

Book: Choose me (Reddie)

Title: 7/10

Cover: 4/10

First 4 chapters: 40/60

Latest Chapter: 16/20

Total: 67/100

Review: The fan-fiction is nicely planned but not executed. Try to work on the cover, because it
is just a scattered collection of pictures. There are some errors here and there that can be
corrected easily. There is more of telling than showing, so try to get to that thing. Don't lengthen
the paragraphs unnecessarily. Keep writing.

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Participant: ENCHANTEDmajor

Book: A Hidden Tale

Title: 7/10

Cover: 6/10

First 4 chapters: 36/60

Latest Chapter: 13/20

Total: 62/100

Review: The storyline is a typical Indian Drama which seems fine to me, but descriptions could
have been way better. I'd suggest you work on the cover, to make it look attractive. Also, there
are many grammatical errors which must be corrected, use space after full stops and commas
to make the paragraphs look neat. Good luck, keep writing.

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Participant: TanviGawde004

Book: A monster or an angel?

Title: 6/10

Cover: 4/10

First 4 chapters: 38/60

Ending: 10/20

Total: 58/100

Review: Cover should be better as this one doesn't attract someone who is not fond of Indian
Dramas. Title is fine, but try to find an authentic name. Everything feels so rushed right from
early chapters of the book, which later on slows down like a turtle's pace. There are
unnecessary gaps after dialogues and lots of images actually disrupts reading, a writer must not
use images because this is a book that you are writing and not a magazine. I'd suggest a high
amount of editing because there are many grammatical errors and faulty description as well.
Good luck, keep writing.

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Participant: drikshit____

Book:Magical Abilities

Title: 5/10

Cover: 4/10

First 4 chapters: 25/60

Ending: 10/20

Total: 44/100

Review: The writing style could be way better to transform the book into a fiction which is
readable. Description lacks at almost every part with blunders of grammatical errors and misuse
of ellipses and punctuations. I'd suggest you to work out on the overall structure of the book, it
needs high editing. Good luck, keep writing.
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Judge: bleeding_dior

Participant: Words_Do_Matter

Book: Journey of love

Total: 55/100

Title: 8/10
Cover: 5/10
First 4 chapters: 33/60
Ending: 9/20

Review: It lacks in the areas of proper writing,figures of speech and somewhat in making a good impact on the reader.

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Participant: KaushikiGanguly

Book: Abhaya Bhairavi

Total: 85/100

Title: 10/10
Cover: 5/10
First 4 chapters: 55/60
Ending: 15/20

Review: It is a good book,it lost points all over because of small aspects.

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Participant: KeshavaNandini

Book: Pandava Nandini

Total: 71/100

Title: 7/10
Cover:9/10
First 4 chapters: 45/60
Ending:10/20

Review: Needs to create a better connectivity between the reader and novel.

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Participant: Sassy_Fangirl

Book: Cupid's rhombus

Total: 78/100

Title: 8/10
Cover: 10/10
First 4 chapters:40/60
Ending: 20/20

Review: Overall it is a good book and can do a better job at making it even better.

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Participant: TheDrippingOilPaint

Book: Shadow on the window

Total: 88/100

Title: 8/10
Cover:10/10
First 4 chapters:50/60
Ending:20/20

Review: It is a good book,carries a sense of suspense,good work.

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Participant: Namrata8155

Book: Fly me to the moon

Total: 77/100

Title:10/10
Cover:10/10
First 4 chapters:42/60
Ending:15/20

Review: Overall it's a good read,creates an atmosphere of curosity very well,good work.

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Participant: Being_A_Pluviophile

Book: Deep in the woods

Total: 94/100

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
First 4 chapters: 56 /60
Ending: 18 /20

Review: I love both your cover and Title, no flaws in there. Your first four chapters can really capture attention of the readers.

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Participant: Again_if_only

Book: Cursed or blessed

Total: 97/100

Title: 9 /10
Cover: 10 /10
First 4 chapters: 59 /60
Ending: 19/20

Review: Your work was my favourite, I couldn't leave my seat just to read your book completely. Nice work. Almost beautiful was your work.

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Participant: aadiwolf

Book: Real cure

Total: 100/100

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
First 4 chapters:60/60
Ending: 20/20

Review: I have nothing to say. It was marvelous.

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Participant: TessaHardin007

Book: The irrevocable powers

Total: 100/100

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10 /10
First 4 chapters: 60/60
Ending: 20/20

Review: Love your work. Keep on updating.

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Well Done everyone!
A little improvement is needed by each of you, our Judges judged your book with Full honesty, So their reviews does matter to you.