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Judge: sissybella_

Participant: saku_a

From: Dubai

Book: Summer Girl, Winter Boy

Score: 63/100

Review: Keep it up.. and try to focus on the grammar. I hope as you continue the story the characters will bring out too.. all the best.

Participant: RCorsini

From: USA

Book: Sushi and Sea lions

Score: 81/100

Review: Great read.. but just couldn't feel the characters as they should but overall nice story.

Participant: SrijitaChattopadhyay

From: Asia

Book: Reality: not so beautiful

Score: 73/100

Review: It was a good read. Most of the time we really don't get what we want, even we get better sometimes. I really liked the ending. All the best and keep writing.

Participant: Hafelia

From: Europe

Book: Finding out me

Score: 35/100

Review: The storyline wasn't quite clear what the book was trying to express.. nonetheless keep going.. and hope you will find the way to express your work in the book. Good luck.

Participant: ivyrenAl

From: Africa

Book: The Town Slut

Score: 53/100

Review: Well the plot was very clear... keep writing and hopefully it will turn out to be a fun read.

Judge: adorabella2018

From: Africa

Participant: katherineWitherspoon

From: Europe

Book: When in London

Score: 77/100

Participant: faychaaaa

From: Asia

Book: Love and Adversities

Score: 72/100

Participant: shreyl_

Book: Crimson and Azure

Score: 61/100

Participant: JamesEnd49

Book: Park and Ride

Score: 65/100

Participant: ReptilianRuler

From: Europe

Book: Ragnarok's Downfall

Score: 59/100

Judge: DevilSpawn2005

Participant: thelazylemon

From: Asia

Book: Stumbling towards you

Score: 95/100

Review: The title is nice. It's relevant to the story. The opening was good. Makes the reader wonder why the main character is at the airport. The characters were good. I liked Rose's character. But sometimes the characters couldn't provoke any emotions in me. The plot was good. But there was less description. Sometimes it was hard to connect to the environment and the situations. There were grammatical errors. In many places, there are no periods or question marks inside the quotation marks.

Participant: BitchThatsMe

From: Asia

Book: A change of Heart

Score: 100/100

Review: It's unique. I loved it. It is also relevant to the story. I liked the opening. It was interesting. I loved Destiny's character. Her character is relatable. The other characters are also good. I loved the plot. All the situations and environment were able to bring out the emotions. The mystery surrounding Destiny's past is very intriguing.

Participant: Aestheticflair

From: Asia

Book: Hold my hands to dance

Score: 95/100

Review: I liked the title. It is relevant to the story. The opening was nice but it is common. Doesn't exactly makes the reader wonder what is going to happen next. The characters were good. But sometimes they didn't provoke any emotions in me. The plot was good. It could be a little more descriptive. Sometimes it was hard to connect to the environment and the situation. The grammar once needs to be checked.

Participant: sonjaebersole

From: Canada

Book: Unquenchable Pursuit

Score: 100/100

Review: The title is unique. It is relevant to the story. The opening is rare. Makes the reader wonder what's next? The characters were good. They do provoke emotions in the reader. The plot is good. The situations and environment were able to bring out the emotions. The descriptions were good.

Participant: Shanil6798

Book: Hold me tight

Score: 98/100

Review: The title is nice. The opening is interesting. Makes the reader want to read more. The characters were nice. I loved the characters. The plot is good. It is intriguing. The grammar once need to be checked.

Judge: sophie_swadil

Participant: Rhena_pearl

From: Africa

Book: Miss popular

Score: 56/100

Review: The unique title really expand the book's plot. It is precise and does not include extraneous words. The book's unsurprising opening gives us 90 percent of what the plot is about, and it lacked every spark of curiosity. The characters were poorly placed in the book. They were used in a cliched way which made them lack emotions. The book's plot was fairly average but the writing was unskillful. It had few grammatical errors and misplacement of punctuation marks.

Participant: Starrlite101

From: Africa

Book: When Sparks fly

Score: 79/100

Reviews: The metaphorical meaning of the book's title relates well with the storyline and plot. The unusual opening can be termed unique due to the fact that it put across the way of life of the main character and her environment before diving into the suspense filled part of the book. Well developed characters that passes on emotions and thrills to the reader. The writer's unequalled way of writing turn this unoriginal plot into something entertaining and transfixed. Good vocabulary and fairly average use of punctuation marks, some sentences in the story were bad.

Participant: Phimimi01

From: Africa

Book: Boss lady

Score: 72/100

Review: A good, relevant and precise title. A rare opening that instantly makes the readers curious. The characters were portrayed and described so well that the readers can almost perfectly picture them in their imaginations. The beginning of the story was filled with curiosity but a little more after that was boring because the readers could tell how it ends. Poor use of vocabulary and misuse of punctuation marks.

Participant: HeraHarker

Book: Strength and sensuality

Score: 75/100

Review: I think it portrays the idea in the book2. It had a nice opening that made me want to read on. They are characters one can easily relate to, not cliche. I think the plot was a little too diverse. There were less of punctuational errors but more of grammatical ones.

Participant: Azulmidnight

From: USA

Book: For the love of the game

Score: 82/100

Review: The title rhymes perfectly well with the rhythm of the book. The opening was rather uneventful at first but later turned out to be pretty nice. I could almost perfectly picture the characters and the way they acted.4.plot: For one the plot was pretty nice and it didn't diverse and elongate more than necessary. Good use of vocabulary





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