ChickLit Royalties ✓
A tribute follow to Fantasyforlife20 who wrote this
Judge: sissybella_
Participant: saku_a
From: Dubai
Book: Summer Girl, Winter Boy
Score: 63/100
Review: Keep it up.. and try to focus on the grammar. I hope as you continue the story the characters will bring out too.. all the best.
Participant: RCorsini
From: USA
Book: Sushi and Sea lions
Score: 81/100
Review: Great read.. but just couldn't feel the characters as they should but overall nice story.
Participant: SrijitaChattopadhyay
From: Asia
Book: Reality: not so beautiful
Score: 73/100
Review: It was a good read. Most of the time we really don't get what we want, even we get better sometimes. I really liked the ending. All the best and keep writing.
Participant: Hafelia
From: Europe
Book: Finding out me
Score: 35/100
Review: The storyline wasn't quite clear what the book was trying to express.. nonetheless keep going.. and hope you will find the way to express your work in the book. Good luck.
Participant: ivyrenAl
From: Africa
Book: The Town Slut
Score: 53/100
Review: Well the plot was very clear... keep writing and hopefully it will turn out to be a fun read.
Judge: adorabella2018
From: Africa
Participant: katherineWitherspoon
From: Europe
Book: When in London
Score: 77/100
Participant: faychaaaa
From: Asia
Book: Love and Adversities
Score: 72/100
Participant: shreyl_
Book: Crimson and Azure
Score: 61/100
Participant: JamesEnd49
Book: Park and Ride
Score: 65/100
Participant: ReptilianRuler
From: Europe
Book: Ragnarok's Downfall
Score: 59/100
Judge: DevilSpawn2005
Participant: thelazylemon
From: Asia
Book: Stumbling towards you
Score: 95/100
Review: The title is nice. It's relevant to the story. The opening was good. Makes the reader wonder why the main character is at the airport. The characters were good. I liked Rose's character. But sometimes the characters couldn't provoke any emotions in me. The plot was good. But there was less description. Sometimes it was hard to connect to the environment and the situations. There were grammatical errors. In many places, there are no periods or question marks inside the quotation marks.
Participant: BitchThatsMe
From: Asia
Book: A change of Heart
Score: 100/100
Review: It's unique. I loved it. It is also relevant to the story. I liked the opening. It was interesting. I loved Destiny's character. Her character is relatable. The other characters are also good. I loved the plot. All the situations and environment were able to bring out the emotions. The mystery surrounding Destiny's past is very intriguing.
Participant: Aestheticflair
From: Asia
Book: Hold my hands to dance
Score: 95/100
Review: I liked the title. It is relevant to the story. The opening was nice but it is common. Doesn't exactly makes the reader wonder what is going to happen next. The characters were good. But sometimes they didn't provoke any emotions in me. The plot was good. It could be a little more descriptive. Sometimes it was hard to connect to the environment and the situation. The grammar once needs to be checked.
Participant: sonjaebersole
From: Canada
Book: Unquenchable Pursuit
Score: 100/100
Review: The title is unique. It is relevant to the story. The opening is rare. Makes the reader wonder what's next? The characters were good. They do provoke emotions in the reader. The plot is good. The situations and environment were able to bring out the emotions. The descriptions were good.
Participant: Shanil6798
Book: Hold me tight
Score: 98/100
Review: The title is nice. The opening is interesting. Makes the reader want to read more. The characters were nice. I loved the characters. The plot is good. It is intriguing. The grammar once need to be checked.
Judge: sophie_swadil
Participant: Rhena_pearl
From: Africa
Book: Miss popular
Score: 56/100
Review: The unique title really expand the book's plot. It is precise and does not include extraneous words. The book's unsurprising opening gives us 90 percent of what the plot is about, and it lacked every spark of curiosity. The characters were poorly placed in the book. They were used in a cliched way which made them lack emotions. The book's plot was fairly average but the writing was unskillful. It had few grammatical errors and misplacement of punctuation marks.
Participant: Starrlite101
From: Africa
Book: When Sparks fly
Score: 79/100
Reviews: The metaphorical meaning of the book's title relates well with the storyline and plot. The unusual opening can be termed unique due to the fact that it put across the way of life of the main character and her environment before diving into the suspense filled part of the book. Well developed characters that passes on emotions and thrills to the reader. The writer's unequalled way of writing turn this unoriginal plot into something entertaining and transfixed. Good vocabulary and fairly average use of punctuation marks, some sentences in the story were bad.
Participant: Phimimi01
From: Africa
Book: Boss lady
Score: 72/100
Review: A good, relevant and precise title. A rare opening that instantly makes the readers curious. The characters were portrayed and described so well that the readers can almost perfectly picture them in their imaginations. The beginning of the story was filled with curiosity but a little more after that was boring because the readers could tell how it ends. Poor use of vocabulary and misuse of punctuation marks.
Participant: HeraHarker
Book: Strength and sensuality
Score: 75/100
Review: I think it portrays the idea in the book2. It had a nice opening that made me want to read on. They are characters one can easily relate to, not cliche. I think the plot was a little too diverse. There were less of punctuational errors but more of grammatical ones.
Participant: Azulmidnight
From: USA
Book: For the love of the game
Score: 82/100
Review: The title rhymes perfectly well with the rhythm of the book. The opening was rather uneventful at first but later turned out to be pretty nice. I could almost perfectly picture the characters and the way they acted.4.plot: For one the plot was pretty nice and it didn't diverse and elongate more than necessary. Good use of vocabulary
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