Best Non-Cliche Royalties ✓
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Judge: Keybey20
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Participant: LeiAndre
From: Asia
Book: Ditch
Score: 97/100
Reviews:
Title: The title is relevant and unique. The story is based on the lead protagonist's Ditch ruse so it does have a bold effect on the story. (9/10)
Opening: Oohh, the prologue is great and very intriguing, it's captivating and bold. (10/10)
Characters: Ave is a lovely lead protagonist. (20/20)
Plot: Writing skills are a 100.The way the books is written is seductive and captivating. It shows the emotion and makes the story feel real. (38/40)
Grammar: No noticeable errors. (20/20)
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Participant: FParungao
From: Asia
Book: My Rebel Angel
Score: 78.5/100
Reviews:
Title: Not very unique. (6/10)
Opening: There was very little character development. (7.5/10)
Characters: Don feels a little unreal and awkward. (17/20)
Plot: The conversation flow is little awkward in the first few chapters. Overall plot is good but writing could be improved. (35/40)
Grammar: Punctuation errors, sentence structure errors, word errors. (13/20)
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Participant: FeministWitch_13
Book: The Other World
Score: 82/100
Reviews:
Title: (4/10)
Opening: The prologue is enticing but doesn't exactly build up our curiosity. (7/10)
Characters: Grace and James share a beautiful friendship. Grace's character is developed beautifully. (19/20)
Plot: Solid plot and good use of figures of speech. Fantasy environment built nicely. (34/40)
Grammar: (18/20)
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Participant: booklored
From: Asia
Book: Sugar Baby
Score: 93/100
Reviews:
Title: (9/10)
Opening: Great opening. (9/10)
Characters: Xavier's character is seductive, strong and enticing. (19/20)
Plot: Solid plot with mysterious writing. (37/40)
Grammar: (19/20)
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Participant: Synonymous_Boost
Book: Baulked From Love
Score: 84/100
Reviews:
Title: Relevant and unique. (10/10)
Opening: Yes, it's not what I would expect (in a good way). (9/10)
Characters: Addilyn's character could have been developed in a more precise and detailed manner. (17/20)
Plot: The plot is original and solid till what has been written until now. (30/40)
Grammar: (18/20)
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Judge: -Navyah-
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Participant: black-cypher
From: America
Book: The President's Daughter
Score: 79/100
Review: The book definitely starts with a promising tale. But as we are introduced to the main characters, I don't think I can say I haven't read how the story unfolds. Although the story is very well-written, I wouldn't place it in a strict "non-cliché" category. That being said, a well-written cliché is equally enjoying, I'd love to see how it goes in the future. (Title: 7/10, Opening: 9/10, Characters: 13/20, Plot: 32/40, Grammar: 18/20)
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Participant: akeila_agramunn
From: Asia
Book: Rise of The New Olympians
Score: 85/100
Review: The story is based on the Olympian Gods and revolves around the teenage girl's journey in the Olympian School. The plot is quite interesting and character development is good though. But, there are a lot of punctuation errors. I would suggest the author to use "comma" & "and" to separate the sentence instead of over using full stops. The author has used exclamation marks on each and every statement which was not needed. Overall, it is a book which is quite interesting with an essence of mystery and horror. Keep it up. (Title: 8/10, Opening: 7/10, Characters: 17/20, Plot: 37/40, Grammar: 16/20)
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Participant: AMRahi
Book: I Want To Be The Final Boss
Score: 75/100
Review: The plot is definitely non-cliché but it is unplanned. The reader will not be able to understand the characters and scenes. The writing style needs improvement (paragraphs and dialogues need to be written properly) because the plot is really different one. You should also work on the cover. The book needs a high amount of editing. (Title: 8/10, Opening: 7/10, Characters: 15/20, Plot: 30/40, Grammar: 15/20)
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Participant: BrutalRice
Book: The Lady in The Weeping Mansion
Score: 87/100
Review: The book is really intriguing. The opening chapter really grabbed my attention. The narrative is very good and pace is just perfect. The characterization of princess eva is good. I liked how you have portrayed her as a cold hearted person yet, she feels bad for the prisoners. The grammar is fine. Saito's perspective was good to see. The book has a good potential, just focus on the plot. (Title: 9/10, Opening: 9/10, Characters: 18/20, Plot: 34/40, Grammar: 17/20)
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Participant: SrijitaChattopadhyay
From: Asia
Book: Reality: Not So Beautiful
Score: 65/100
Review: The title is good and suits the story quite nicely. The main character Pritha's character is realistic. Pranzal sounds like a handsome guy as per the MC's description. The grammar needs refinement. The dialogues get confusing because they are written into paragraphs and they need to be separated. Description can be added to increase length plus that will make the reading experience better. The plot is simple and has a lot of potential. (Title: 9/10, Opening: 6/10, Characters: 10/20, Plot: 27/40, Grammar: 13/20)
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Judge: pastelhazelnut
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Participant: Hafelia
From: Europe
Book: Finding Me Out
Score: 80/100 (Title: 7/10, Opening: 7/10, Characters: 20/20, Plot: 35/40, Grammar: 11/20)
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Participant: faychaaaa
Book: Love and Adversities
Score: 71/100 (Title: 7/10, Opening: 6/10, Characters: 10/20, Plot: 30/40, Grammar: 18/20)
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Participant: shreyl_
Book: Crimson and Azure
Score: 77/100 (Title: 4/10, Opening: 10/10, Characters: 15/20, Plot: 30/40, Grammar: 18/20)
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Participant: Finnclarkson
Book: Zenith
Score: 98/100 (Title: 10/10, Opening: 10/10, Characters: 20/20, Plot: 40/40, Grammar: 18/20)
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Participant: FParungao
Book: My Rebel Angel
Score: 95/100 (Title: 10/10, Opening: 10/10, Characters: 15/20, Plot: 40/40, Grammar: 20/20)
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Judge: _-JesterTheJoker-_
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Participant: Witto150
From: Europe
Book: Golden Pear
Score: 97/100
Review: Well, honestly, it's a wonderful book. The idea was new and inspiring, but the word flow could be a bit better and there were a few small grammatical errors. I don't think the story is complete, either, but it's going well so far and it leaves me addicted. Keep writing!
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Participant: infinite_neeanu
Book: The Ground Breakers
Score: 93/100
Review: You have a very good book on your hands. I just feel like a bit more could be explained in the first few chapters. The ending was pretty good, to be honest, and you are good at making your readers be on the edge of their seats. Good job!
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Participant: Shivran86
From: Asia
Book: Kāma: Liberation
Score: 94/100
Review: Your characters are so dynamic! Other than some small grammatical errors and less use of English than the rubric would like, this story is a wonderful read. I hope that you decide to continue writing and inspire others to do so as well.
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Participant: Alpha_Me8
From: America
Book: Bound By The Past
Score: 89/100
Review: I just want to tell you that your story is amazing! I saw that you were still rewriting it, but here is some information I have for your former ones: they're a bit short. I'm sure if you added more detail and varied the words a bit, it would be longer and more attention-grabbing. I did like your story line, though! You have a good characters and you have the knack for making personalities that are relatable and realistic. Keep up the good work!
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Participant: SpinAroundWords
Book: Flawless Facade
Score: 97/100
Review: Your story absolutely drew me in from the first few sentences. I really didn't expect the ending and it came as a shock to me, but I do feel like you can make it even better if you made your characters a bit more dynamic. Other than that, you are such an amazing writer! I look forward to your next work.
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