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Best Non-Cliche Royalties ✓

A tribute follow to SugaKookies05 who wrote this.

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Judge: Keybey20

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Participant: LeiAndre

From: Asia

Book: Ditch

Score: 97/100

Reviews:

Title: The title is relevant and unique. The story is based on the lead protagonist's Ditch ruse so it does have a bold effect on the story. (9/10)

Opening: Oohh, the prologue is great and very intriguing, it's captivating and bold. (10/10)

Characters: Ave is a lovely lead protagonist. (20/20)

Plot: Writing skills are a 100.The way the books is written is seductive and captivating. It shows the emotion and makes the story feel real. (38/40)

Grammar: No noticeable errors. (20/20)

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Participant: FParungao

From: Asia

Book: My Rebel Angel

Score: 78.5/100

Reviews:

Title: Not very unique. (6/10)

Opening: There was very little character development. (7.5/10)

Characters: Don feels a little unreal and awkward. (17/20)

Plot: The conversation flow is little awkward in the first few chapters. Overall plot is good but writing could be improved. (35/40)

Grammar: Punctuation errors, sentence structure errors, word errors. (13/20)

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Participant: FeministWitch_13

Book: The Other World

Score: 82/100

Reviews:

Title: (4/10)

Opening: The prologue is enticing but doesn't exactly build up our curiosity. (7/10)

Characters: Grace and James share a beautiful friendship. Grace's character is developed beautifully. (19/20)

Plot: Solid plot and good use of figures of speech. Fantasy environment built nicely. (34/40)

Grammar: (18/20)

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Participant: booklored

From: Asia

Book: Sugar Baby

Score: 93/100

Reviews:

Title: (9/10)

Opening: Great opening. (9/10)

Characters: Xavier's character is seductive, strong and enticing. (19/20)

Plot: Solid plot with mysterious writing. (37/40)

Grammar: (19/20)

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Participant: Synonymous_Boost

Book: Baulked From Love

Score: 84/100

Reviews:

Title: Relevant and unique. (10/10)

Opening: Yes, it's not what I would expect (in a good way). (9/10)

Characters: Addilyn's character could have been developed in a more precise and detailed manner. (17/20)

Plot: The plot is original and solid till what has been written until now. (30/40)

Grammar: (18/20)

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Judge: -Navyah-

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Participant: black-cypher

From: America

Book: The President's Daughter

Score: 79/100

Review: The book definitely starts with a promising tale. But as we are introduced to the main characters, I don't think I can say I haven't read how the story unfolds. Although the story is very well-written, I wouldn't place it in a strict "non-cliché" category. That being said, a well-written cliché is equally enjoying, I'd love to see how it goes in the future. (Title: 7/10, Opening: 9/10, Characters: 13/20, Plot: 32/40, Grammar: 18/20)

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Participant: akeila_agramunn

From: Asia

Book: Rise of The New Olympians

Score: 85/100

Review: The story is based on the Olympian Gods and revolves around the teenage girl's journey in the Olympian School. The plot is quite interesting and character development is good though. But, there are a lot of punctuation errors. I would suggest the author to use "comma" & "and" to separate the sentence instead of over using full stops. The author has used exclamation marks on each and every statement which was not needed. Overall, it is a book which is quite interesting with an essence of mystery and horror. Keep it up. (Title: 8/10, Opening: 7/10, Characters: 17/20, Plot: 37/40, Grammar: 16/20)

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Participant: AMRahi

Book: I Want To Be The Final Boss

Score: 75/100

Review: The plot is definitely non-cliché but it is unplanned. The reader will not be able to understand the characters and scenes. The writing style needs improvement (paragraphs and dialogues need to be written properly) because the plot is really different one. You should also work on the cover. The book needs a high amount of editing. (Title: 8/10, Opening: 7/10, Characters: 15/20, Plot: 30/40, Grammar: 15/20)

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Participant: BrutalRice

Book: The Lady in The Weeping Mansion

Score: 87/100

Review: The book is really intriguing. The opening chapter really grabbed my attention. The narrative is very good and pace is just perfect. The characterization of princess eva is good. I liked how you have portrayed her as a cold hearted person yet, she feels bad for the prisoners. The grammar is fine. Saito's perspective was good to see. The book has a good potential, just focus on the plot. (Title: 9/10, Opening: 9/10, Characters: 18/20, Plot: 34/40, Grammar: 17/20)

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Participant: SrijitaChattopadhyay

From: Asia

Book: Reality: Not So Beautiful

Score: 65/100

Review: The title is good and suits the story quite nicely. The main character Pritha's character is realistic. Pranzal sounds like a handsome guy as per the MC's description. The grammar needs refinement. The dialogues get confusing because they are written into paragraphs and they need to be separated. Description can be added to increase length plus that will make the reading experience better. The plot is simple and has a lot of potential. (Title: 9/10, Opening: 6/10, Characters: 10/20, Plot: 27/40, Grammar: 13/20)

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Judge: pastelhazelnut

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Participant: Hafelia

From: Europe

Book: Finding Me Out

Score: 80/100 (Title: 7/10, Opening: 7/10, Characters: 20/20, Plot: 35/40, Grammar: 11/20)

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Participant: faychaaaa

Book: Love and Adversities

Score: 71/100 (Title: 7/10, Opening: 6/10, Characters: 10/20, Plot: 30/40, Grammar: 18/20)

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Participant: shreyl_

Book: Crimson and Azure

Score: 77/100 (Title: 4/10, Opening: 10/10, Characters: 15/20, Plot: 30/40, Grammar: 18/20)

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Participant: Finnclarkson

Book: Zenith

Score: 98/100 (Title: 10/10, Opening: 10/10, Characters: 20/20, Plot: 40/40, Grammar: 18/20)

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Participant: FParungao

Book: My Rebel Angel

Score: 95/100 (Title: 10/10, Opening: 10/10, Characters: 15/20, Plot: 40/40, Grammar: 20/20)

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Judge: _-JesterTheJoker-_

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Participant: Witto150

From: Europe

Book: Golden Pear

Score: 97/100

Review: Well, honestly, it's a wonderful book. The idea was new and inspiring, but the word flow could be a bit better and there were a few small grammatical errors. I don't think the story is complete, either, but it's going well so far and it leaves me addicted. Keep writing!

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Participant: infinite_neeanu

Book: The Ground Breakers

Score: 93/100

Review: You have a very good book on your hands. I just feel like a bit more could be explained in the first few chapters. The ending was pretty good, to be honest, and you are good at making your readers be on the edge of their seats. Good job!

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Participant: Shivran86

From: Asia

Book: Kāma: Liberation

Score: 94/100

Review: Your characters are so dynamic! Other than some small grammatical errors and less use of English than the rubric would like, this story is a wonderful read. I hope that you decide to continue writing and inspire others to do so as well.

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Participant: Alpha_Me8

From: America

Book: Bound By The Past

Score: 89/100

Review: I just want to tell you that your story is amazing! I saw that you were still rewriting it, but here is some information I have for your former ones: they're a bit short. I'm sure if you added more detail and varied the words a bit, it would be longer and more attention-grabbing. I did like your story line, though! You have a good characters and you have the knack for making personalities that are relatable and realistic. Keep up the good work!

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Participant: SpinAroundWords

Book: Flawless Facade

Score: 97/100

Review: Your story absolutely drew me in from the first few sentences. I really didn't expect the ending and it came as a shock to me, but I do feel like you can make it even better if you made your characters a bit more dynamic. Other than that, you are such an amazing writer! I look forward to your next work.

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Well done everyone!
A little improvement is needed by each of you. Our Judges judged your books with full honesty, so their reviews should matter to you.

Thank you.

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