Action Winners!
Hey there everyone! I hope all of you lovely people are ready for another round of fabulous winners!! A huge thank you to -21darkpoet14- for judging this genre. Thank you for all your hard work love! Please remember to always thank your judge!
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Now, time to announce the winners!
For our Third Place Winner!:
The HOPES Project by: avadel
Score: 80/100
Review:
Plot- Your plot contains certain cliches but that doesn't make your book less intriguing. Try to keep some cliffhangers too.
Character Development- I have no issues with the character development. They're up to the mark and well presented.
Conflicts- The inner conflicts are properly demonstrated as well as the clash between the characters. Though try to make it a bit more informative.
Setting- The set up is okay. Not the best I suppose. But you can improvise it.
Diction/Grammar/Detail-Try to be more demonstrative about the environment. Not more than necessary though. Your vocabulary is really fantastic and impressive as well.
Creativity- I wouldn't say the story is very creative or original. Because I have read such books. But it isn't bad either. I hope to see more of plot twist rather than just expected outcomes.
Congratulations Lovely! <3
Coming in at Second Place we have!!:
Finding Orion by: VictoriaSlater457
Score: 88/100
Plot- Well the plot is well chosen. I actually liked it. There are cliches too but apart from all that its really intriguing. Don't forget to mention abobe, who's POV we're reading. Whether it's a narration or third person.
Character Development- Certain character development is really good and up to the mark. But i didn't like the character development of John precisely. It's a bit bipolar at time. But not all too bad. You don't need to change anything.
Conflicts- The Conflicts are well presented. Nothing much to say about it. Setting- The set up is well presented. I loved the demonstration of every event and environment. The descriptions were up to the mark.
Diction/Grammar/Detail- Its well detailed and dictated. Yeah,there're few grammatical errors. Not much,just needs to be proof read. But over all its perfect.
Creativity- Title and cover,is amazing. The mystery,jokes and thinking keeps the reader at bay,eventually asking for more. Keep up the good work. I really look forward in reading your book further.
Congratulations Lovely!! <3 <3
Annnnd Finally! The Time Has Come! Our First Place Winner Is!!!:
Their Elemental Curse by: MomoOnTheGogo
Score: 92/100
Review:
Plot- The plot you chose is amazing. I loved it. Its unique and well executed. I loved the way you illustrated everything according to its necessity.
Character Development- the character development was a bit to hastily done. Slow down a bit on that. Don't jump from a shy nature to a too cool nature. But over all,well done.
Conflicts- an amazing work there too. The Conflicts, situations and events are well described
Setting- The setting is great. The environment,the stereotypes,the people,the way you put it for the reader,its all really good. Not gonna complain about it at all.
Diction/Grammar/Detail- well there are the usual grammatical errors like punctuation,spelling mistakes and use of propositions. Proof read them, I'm sure you can find them easily. Your cover is an interesting and captivating one too.
Creativity- Absolute 100 for that. I have not come across such a unique book until now. Once I read the book,I had doubt I would find a better book under the action category. Keep up the good work,I really look forward to read your book.
Congratulations Lovely!!! <3 <3 <3
I would like to thank the judge for all their hard work once again! Please be sure to congratulate your winners and to thank your judge everyone! I hope you've all enjoyed this contest! Please don't be upset if you haven't won, there will be many more chances to come!
I'll see you all soon for another round of awesome winners!
Thank you! <3
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