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Fantasy Winners!!

Hello lovelies! It's time to announce the winners of one of my favourite genres! Fantasy!! I would like to thank your fabulous judge robbie_caine for helping in this contest! You have been an amazing help!! <3 

Please Remember: If you would like your winner sticker you'll need to private message my main account: coolcourtney5 <3 


Honourable Mentions!: 

The Bridge's Gale : Wings by: MichelleManisha 

Crown Of Roses by: Oceane_Breeze 

Eclipse Of The Worlds by: Linneae_Liam 

Congratulations Lovelies!


Taking Third Place we have!:

Medrith; The Origin Of House Wollstone by: BrookeDayDreams12 

Review: I really love the imagination behind this story- having your usual enchanted forest and turning it into something more. I also love the idea of using a court system, but similar to olden times, it only benefits certain people. I think this idea can really go somewhere. Erin's disappearance also fuels this book, along with creatures and dreams.

Be careful with using dreams however, try not to make them generic.You used really good language, the imagery and similes/ metaphors really worked. I also loved how you built the world, showing a class divide and also the concepts of magical creatures.

Congratulations Lovely! <3 


Coming in at Second Place we have!!: 

Flying by: CarolineDonica 

Review: I love your take on Neverland, adding greek mythology was a really nice touch. Jimmy is an unusual character and she seems very opinionated (in a good way), and is very relatable, which is good, because readers should have a connection with the characters since it's more enjoyable (percy jackson etc). I did not expect to see the arrival of Peter Pan, and I think it's a brilliant idea! Jimmy has the right level of smarkiness- not too harsh that it's unlike able but not too little so she seems boring, which is hard to control and keep the right level.

I like the banta that Jimmy and Peter have with each other.Perhaps try to expand on descriptions of the scenery and use writing techniques such as metaphors and similes to boost your writing and expand it further. I'm in love with this book!

Congratulations Lovely!! <3 <3 


Annnnd Finally!!! For Our First Place Winner!!!: 

Silver As Glace by: GrandArkirah 

Review: For one thing, the descriptions you use are so delicately written but are like poetry- they describe in a way I had never previously imagined. It's a really beautiful use of language.

Marita is a really interesting protagonist, because, yes, like many others, she is set apart from society, but her general attitude is almost admirable and I just find her intriguing, and I could see her as a real person, which can be hard to manage sometimes. The use of religion in the way you have is very clever, because you imply everything is created by such deities that Marita chooses not to believe of their existence- perhaps because they made her too different from anyone else? (This was explained why but this could be a further reasoning Marita doesn't actually realise is why).The names of places are very imaginative too, although I have no clue on Earth how to pronounce them!I love the plot line so far, but please be careful with using dreams since they are quite commonly used and can become unoriginal very quickly. I love Marita and can of sorts see myself in her.I love this book and recommend to all!

Congratulations Lovely!!! <3 <3 <3


Thank you all for entering into this contest! Please remember to thank your judge, and to congratulate the winners you see here! Please do not be upset if you haven't won, there will be many more chances to come!! <3 

Thank you! <3

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