The Suicidal Boss - NoXiOuS_PsYcHe 

Reviewer - tisha650 

Review:

Cover + Title + Blurb= 5/5

Grammar and Spelling= 10/10

 Detail= 10/10 

 Plot= 10/10 

 Originality= 5/5 [I love the fact that the girl has a bad attitude while the boy has a soft one] 

 Flow of the story= 5/5 

 Overall Enjoyment= 5/5 

 Total Score: 50/50

I would like you to make the girl aka Lilith to make her realize that she doesn't show enough affection to her best friend. I want her to realize it in a dramatic way. 

 I was the man to at least put his fake parents behind bars. 

And I want Jerome to marry Alva instead of the other girl. I want him to divorce. Reason maybe because he didn't like his girl or his girl is cheating behind his back