Cackle

By JEStrother 

Reviewer: quixotic_cat 

Title: 10/10 

 The title was great and I love how it goes back to witches. 

Cover: 8/10 

 The cover was wonderful. I love the eyes and the colors. It has a very witchy feel to it. I like the hand with the fire, but I noticed that it had an ash-grey background. The background kind of disrupts the scheme of the cover and I think the hand with fire would look better with no ash-grey background, just with the black background of the cover. 

Blub: 10/10 

 The blurb was fantastic. It gave a general idea of the book without giving the whole plot away. In addition, it had a great and tempting hook that drew in readers. 

Flow/plot: 10/10 

 The flow and plot were excellent. You built a well, detailed fantasy world. In addition, the depth and interaction of both the world and characters were spectacular. It wasn't too fast-paced nor too slow-paced. 

Usage of literary devices/figurative language/description: 9/10 

 The literary devices and description were amazing. I found lots of imagery and comparisons. You also were right on point with the description of the setting. Well done! 

Characters: 10/10 

 The characters and their depth were perfection! I love both of Remi and Ana's personalities and depth.

Vocabulary/spelling: 10/10 

 The vocabulary and spelling were great. I found no spelling errors nor overused words. 

Grammar/sentence structure: 9/10 

 The grammar and sentence structure was okay. I found a few spots where the structure wasn't the best. However, that can be fixed by reading it out loud. If it sounds off when read out loud, then the word choice and structure are probably not the best and you should change it

Punctuation: 9/10 

The punctuation was fantastic. I did notice some spots where you could put more commas or periods for clarity and flow, but it was still good overall. 

Originality/Meaning: 10/10 

 The originality went above and beyond. The world-building and story depth were amazingly good. I love where you are taking this with the time travel too. 

Enjoyment: 10/10 

 Total: 105/110

This book was out of this world and well-written. My mind was blown away by the world-building and depth. I definitely enjoyed reading it and would totally recommend it to fantasy, witch, and time-travel lovers alike. My final word to you is to keep writing because you are an undiscovered and great writer.