Aragons

By earlfangs  

Reviewer: quixotic_cat 

Title: 10/10

The title is wonderful and relating to the book.

Cover: 10/10

The cover is beautiful and mystical.

Blub: 10/10

The blurb is well-written. It gives a general idea of the book while hooking the readers in.

Flow/plot: 9/10

The flow and plot were excellent and very fast-paced with a lot of depth and action. Be careful with info-dumping though. Too much of it can confuse your readers.

Usage of literary devices/figurative language/description: 10/10

The description was great! I could really picture what was going on. Can we just talk about the world-building here? It was fantastic and well-written!

Characters: 10/10

The character depth was awesome. I love how you got to see Raia's inner thoughts and feelings. Raiden was great too! The villains were well-written too. I'm a big mythology fan, so I perked right up when I read about Loki.

Vocabulary/spelling: 10/10

The vocabulary and spelling were mostly error-free and well-done.

Grammar/sentence structure: 10/10

The grammar and sentence structure was good.

Punctuation: 10/10

The punctuation was great!

Originality/Meaning: 9/10

Enjoyment: 10/10

Total: 108/110

This is a wonderful and out-of-this-world story. I love the action and how you keep us all intrigued. I really enjoyed reading this and would definitely recommend it to fantasy lovers. Keep on writing!