More into the Wattpad feelz

I really hate it when story lines are really forced, like the author would switch sky and earth for their story to go the way they want it to. Sometimes it doesn't work that way, Karen. You can't make your best friend the owner of a shop through her billionaire father just to get the hot employee to talk to you. 

It just won't happen. It's so ridiculous it would make a good plot for a comedy, not a romance. 

The lack of a concrete conflict is also a piss off. If I don't know what's the problem here then why am I reading in the first place? I didn't come here to watch your character have a happy, normal life. I came here to watch them suffer, despair, be sad, be happy, and make difficult choices that will change their lives forever. 

I will make an introduction here of a future chapter: self-inserts. Talk about lacking a plot. When people add a character into a series and rewrite the whole thing with their character standing there and holding a sign "PLEASE STOP IGNORING ME." 

Of course, they're ignoring you, because you're not supposed to be there xd. 

Plot holes. When people really don't explain things they need to explain. Like is there a special reason for your character to visit the cemetery every October first? I'd like to know.