Hey guys, so this is a short story that I wrote and it is for an English assignment. I really want to know what you guys think about it so please let me know in the comments what you think about. Also, if you would like to, in the comments, write what grade you think I will get for it. the person/ people that get it right will get a shout out on my account and I will add one of their books to my library (you can choose which book).

also, if any of you would like me to read one of your books, please message me which one and I will gladly read it for you :)

thanks guys, have a great day!!