JUDGE: Easter6

Silver Lake by AdamCavelle

Title- 3/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-29/35

Grammar-16/20

Creative/Originality-7/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-79/100

Review-Your title was okay and your cover was good.Your blurb was able to give me the necessary information that I needed to be drawn into your book.Your opening was on point and it had enough information to be able for the readers to familiarize themselves with your work before moving on to the next chapter. Your characters were okay. You tried to potray their thoughts and feelings in a vivid way.Your grammar was simply excellent.our creativity was over the roof,I really liked how you described the events in a way that I was able to play out the scenes in my head.To be sincere I am impressed with your work.I really enjoyed reading your work. Good luck.

JUDGE: Arrogonxx

Can't change the Fate by ispectacleyou

Title- 4/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-28/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-74/100

Review-I really enjoyed reading through the first five chapters of your book! However, there were a few areas that I thought could use a little bit of improvement. For instance, the main character really doesn't have a ton of development within the first chapters, which is important, as the readers should know about the main character. Additionally, the grammar of the story was a little on the choppy side, which made it difficult to smoothly read through. However, it was enjoyable to read regardless, and you did a good job!

You are the One for me by Mineforever6

Title-5 /5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-16/20

Creative/Originality-7/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-83/100

Review-You have created a really interesting story for your readers! As I was reading through the first couple chapters, I found myself continuously wanting to read more and more to find out what was going to happen next; especially with all the drama between Noah and Alex! The grammar was a tiny bit on the rocky side, but was overall good. I would have liked to see a tiny bit more character development within the first five chapters, but other than that, everything else was great! Good job!

Who Killed Edmond by JRyno1

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-17/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-88/100

Review-Wow, wow, wow! I really loved reading through the first several chapters of this book! You did an excellent job with truly setting the scene and introducing the main character, as well as her deceased brother. The concept that you have for this story is so interesting, and I truly found it to be quite unique! Your grammar was overall pretty good, which made the book flow very well and made for a great read! Great job!

JUDGE: Ali-leo13

Royal Delinquent by -Tanyawrites-

Title- 5/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 4/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 18/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 90/100

Review: I really liked how you opened the story and immediately added drama to make the reader want to stay for the rest of the book.

Little Wonders by MichelleRobie

Title- 4/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 4/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 8/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 89/100

Review: The characters were introduced in a very interesting way and their relationship developed quickly and smoothly without a lot of drama which was nice change from other books and made the book more enjoyable to read.

 The Treehouse by hchladybug1218

Title- 3/5

Cover- 2/5

Blurb- 2/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 87/100

Review: This book had a really nice start to it and was a major change from other books. It was completley original and very entertaining to read.

Happily Ever Afters are Bullshit by x3nn16

Title- 3/5

Cover- 2/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 3/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 18/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 84/100

Review: This book covered some serious topics but was still enjoyable to read. The characters portrayed exactly what the author intended. It was a very interesting book to read.

Misfit by nivetha1509

Title- 5/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 2/5

Characters- 25/35

Grammer- 18/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 85/100

Review: A beautiful cover and an intriguing blurb immediately made me want to read this book. The setting was described nicely and the plot was immediately set into action. I enjoyed reading it.

BFFS Apart by AnnabellaAndCairee

Title- 2/5

Cover- 3/5

Blurb- 2/5

Opening- 3/5

Characters- 22/35

Grammer-8/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 8/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 71/100

Review: The opening is creative but could use more detail and emotions to draw the audience in. The characters bond is portrayed nicely but it would help the readers a lot if more backstory was given. The story is a little bit of everything and doesn't seem to have clear plot. It has a lot of potential if you're willing to work on it and fix a few things up. It is an enjoyable book overall.