JUDGE: arrogonxx

Short Stories by Total_KOTLC_Fan

Title- 3/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-25/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-80/100

Review-Your short stories were good, but I felt as though some of them could have used a little bit more elaboration to further get across the plot of the individual stories. I enjoyed reading them, but at times, I felt that I was actually reading a poetry book, rather than an actual book of short stories. Regardless, you did a great job and it was still enjoyable to read through!

Their Insecure Club by jiyarani

Title-4/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-28/35

Grammar-16/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-81/100

Review-Reading through this short story was most definitely a new and interesting experience. I felt that the characters were lacking a little bit in their development. For instance, it felt like there wasn't really any genuine connection between Adam, Aiden, and James. I know it is meant to be a short story, but there could have been more development of both the plot and the characters. Regardless, you did a good job with creating a unique story for your readers!

JUDGE:Graciousrs

Snowflakes are falling from the sky by Sneehadorin

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-22/35

Grammar-10/20

Creative/Originality-7/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-64/100

Review-The title and the cover are good. The blurb is good, but it needs more details so it can be more interesting. Remember not to give away too much information if you redo the blurb. Write this as a story and not as a poem. Add the correct punctuations in the story instead of ellipsis and write in full sentences. Don't break the sentences always as it makes it seem like it's a poem excepect it's not. I loved how you showed and described every emotion the main character, y/n felt. Do make the scenes in chapter five more interesting, beautiful and enchanting. I feel like Jungkook and y/n 's reunion needs to be described better and it needs more emotions. Make us experience what they are feeling. Interaction between the characters is important to peek our interest and build the story so do make the characters interact more. I loved reading this and I will continue reading this story when you update.

My love by Pihuxpreeran

Title-2/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-0/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-15/35

Grammar-14/20

Creative/Originality-4/10

Overall Impression -3/10

Enjoyment-1/5

Total-45/100

Review-The cover is good, but the author's name is not mentioned and it is not related to the plot. The title is good, but to try to come up with a better one. There isn't any blurb. Do consider adding emotions in the story to make the readers understand how the characters feel and so the readers can connect more with the characters.

JUDGE: noelleswift

Freeing Faith by bxjade95

Title- 5/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-/45

Total-90/100

Review- The way this book explored and portrayed mental issues, toxic relationships, and how every little thing tends to affect a person's entire life was really good. The grammar could be improved upon a little bit, but otherwise, the story got across all the minted emotions. It was a read I would definitely recommend to everyone.

The wicked Half by aditigkadam

Title- 2/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-14/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -10/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-82/100

Review- The concept was really unique. The writing was captivating, but the grammar could be improved upon. Also, the ending felt slightly rushed and incomplete. Overall, it was a interesting read.

A Wish For Granted by TheGracedRaven

Title- 4/5

Cover-/55

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-93/100

Review- It was a super fun read, and the concept I hadn't ever read before. The writing and grammar were on point. The only suggestion I'd make is to give the "perfect" Mary sue more flaws. Oxymoronic, I know; but it would highlight the lesson you're trying to get across. The way you built the wishgranter character needs to be commented; she's a memorable one. Overall, a story I'd definitely recommend to everyone.

The Queen's Court by AmnerisTenjo

Title- 4/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-35/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -10/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-94/100

Review- One of the most unique concept I've ever come across, paired with an interesting plot, made this story a super fun read. My only suggestion are to improve slightly on the grammar, and make the blurb more captivating. Otherwise,it was a book I'd definitely recommend to everyone.

JUDGE: Aserranoaldana

Entangled Fates by Rikara_sk

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-92/100

Review- I feel like something is missing in the cover just don't know what. Blurb was good, ended with a question to draw the reader in. Opening was a little confusing with the translating but I understood the most of it. I didn't like the time skips a lot but that is just your writing style.Having the bold words and some not is making my brain think only part of it is important. Full understanding after reading the on, I liked that you did the same scene from different perspectives. Could use more background in the story and other than that, I enjoyed reading it.

The Butterfly Effect by the_reminiscent96

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -4/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-86/100

Review- The cover doesn't really match the title but I also find that interesting. Would like more background in the chapters. There were a few grammar mistakes but not a lot. I liked reading the story, but it was not just for me. I love that you shared only little then a lot about the descriptions and their emotions.

The Great-Wide Somewhere by OliviaRose436

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-95/100

Review- Love the ecover, it is so unique and it matches the title. Wonderful structure for the opening.The character development was good but could use some more emotion. The grammar was on spot and I liked it because it remind be of Beauty and the Beast story. I am inserted in other short stories you have.

My Married Soulmate by jimhen211

Title- 5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-96/100

Review- I would work on having more background about him and his grandmother. Other than that, his personality sees what I think it is. The grammar had a few mistakes, barley any but that is something. I liked this story and hope to continue to read it once you have updated.

The Girl with the Blue Umbrella by Hihi-isha

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-35/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-95/100

Review- Need a little more in the blurb. There is so much emotion in the 5 chapters,and I loved it. The characters showed lots of feeling and I like it. The grammar could be improved. I like reading this story because it relates to the real world of bullying and how people with disabilities are bullied in school and are having to deal with it. I hope to continue reading when I have time.

When Daylight had faded by mellimack

Title-3/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-95/100

Review- you could capitalize 'd' in daylight and the 'F' in faded. The blurb got straight to the point of what the book was. The opening of all the stories were good. I like that some left some cliffhangers even though the story is not going to continue.