JUDGE: EchostoriesMB

The Leveler King by LynaForge

Title-4/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-20/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-7/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-2.5/5

Total-71.5/100

Review-The book was beautifully written, however, there were parts within it that were difficult to read. Parts that I had to constantly reread over repeatedly to understand what was going on. The book cover itself did its job, pulling me in and making me want to know more of what the book was about. The main storyline and characters were well thought out, but I felt it was moving a bit fast paced for my liking. Some of the characters seemed far more unique than others did, but I loved them all the same regardless. A little more descriptiveness on certain parts would have been lovely, just to give the imagery of what was happening a bit more for the reader's imagination to grasp onto.

 Wrapped around her finger by LeoLunah

 Title-3/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-1/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-8/20

Creative/Originality-5/10

Overall Impression -4/10

Enjoyment-2/5

Total-60/100

 Review - Overall, an okay story, but there was nothing special about it that kept my attention. It was hard to read at times and jumped between characters, making it difficult to keep up with the story. The pace of the story itself was rather quick, making it just as hard to keep up with all that was going on as well. A slower more thought out plot line may have helped with the flow a bit. There were a few grammar issues, but with some editing this could be a really good book.

Wet and Wild by MichelleManisha

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality/-510

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-82/100

Review- A well written and well thought out story. The characters are unique in their own way, pulling the reader in so they could learn more of their story. I love how the story alone leaves you breathless with each encounter the main characters have with one another, leaving you wonder exactly what is going to happen next between the two. With a bit more editing and attention to the grammar of the book, this could be an amazing book worthy of professional publication. Well done.

The Parallel Lies by timelesslady-

Title- 3/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-90/100

Review- An amazing read, and the way things were described was absolutely beautiful. There are some issues with the grammar, but with some editing this could be a perfectly written book. One that I would love to read over and over again. The characters were so simple, yet their backgrounds so vast already, it was like a about an old friend and getting lost within their own separate stories. However, the characters did feel the characters could have had more of a softness to their personalities, everyone seeming so serious and coarse. Overall, amazing job.

JUDGE: Ali-leo13

Drowning by EveLeft13

Title- 5/5

Cover- 2/5

Blurb- 4/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality-8 /10

Overall Impression-8 /10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 88/100

Reveiw: The book was enticing and well written. The plot line was carried out nicely and the characters were developed quickly.

Love shouldn't Hurt by zmswift

Title- 3/5

Cover- 1/5

Blurb- 4/5

Opening- 2/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 15/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 6/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 76/100

Review: This book was filled with emotion and drama. It was an interesting read with a lot of ups and downs.

My Little Secret by  BethAmos

Title- 5/5

Cover- 2/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 25/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 87/100

Review: This book was emotionally enticing and developed nicely. The characters were introduced well and it all fit together perfectly.

The Burden of Us by MiniMoxx

Title- 2/5

Cover- 2/5

Blurb- 3/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 87/100

Review: This book was creatively written and very intriguing to read. It kept me hooked on each word and was beautifully crafted.

Deserves One More Chance by Narmada_

Title- 3/5

Cover- 4/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 2/5

Characters- 35/35

Grammer- 18/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 92/100

Review: This book was very original and entertaining. It had an interesting plot line and was a fun read.

Your PURE by jiyarani

Title- 5/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 8/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 93/100

Review: This was a very emotional and intriguing read. It kept the reader enticed and was written nicely.

He was her all by Skymoon6311

Title- 5/5

Cover- 3/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 93/100

Review: This book was full of emotions and it kept the reader on edge and enticed with the story. It was neatly written as well.

Looking through a new window by Kimberly_rash

Title- 5/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 3/5

Opening- 2/5

Characters- 25/35

Grammer- 18/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 83/100

Review: This book was well written and a different sort of read because of the P.O.V switches. But the switches made it all the more fun to read!

Homewrecker by Abeledva

Title- 5/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 2/5

Opening- 3/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 10/10

Overall Impression- 8/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 88/100

Review: This book has a nice plotline that is intriguing and emotional.The characters are well written and the backstory was thought out.

A Black Freak Charm by papililgirl8

Title- 5/5

Cover- 3/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 35/35

Grammer- 18/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 8/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 92/100

Review: This book covered some serious topics but was still nice to read. It was emotional and intriguing for readers. I love how the characters were developed and the scene was set.

Black Dress Wedding by OliviaRose436

Title- 5/5

Cover- 3/5

Blurb- 5/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 30/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 8/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 89/100

Review: I enjoyed the interesting word choices you used and how you set the mood of the book. The entire setting of the book was played out nicely.

His Wife by birdeyze

Title- 2/5

Cover- 5/5

Blurb- 3/5

Opening- 5/5

Characters- 35/35

Grammer- 20/20

Creativity/Originality- 8/10

Overall Impression- 10/10

Enjoyment- 5/5

Total- 93/100

Review: I love the maturity the characters have and how realistic the setting of the book is. It makes me empathize with the characters and want to read even more of your other books.