JUDGE: Aserranoaldana

Friends become sisters by vrushali_krish

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-19/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -4/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-69/100

Review- I feel like somehow the cover could be improved. The blurb pull the reader in but the name should be capitalized because it is a person's name. To be honest, got a little confused in the beginning of the first chapter. Into the next chapters, confusion is going away and understatement is coming in. I would recommend have longer chapters, having only two chapters is not the best for one chapter. Need to work on your grammar a lot with capitalization the most and combining sentences.

Her Brother's Keeper :A  Story of a Alpha Centauri by arkham71

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-92/100

Review- The title, cover,blurb were are great and brought a reader in. Then the opening made the reader be hooked in. I would like to see more emotions and feeling in the characters. There was a few grammar mistakes that are easy fixes. I liked how you introduced the characters and elaborated on who they are to the main character.

Even in Pieces by the_typewriter_ink

Title- 55

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-35/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-97/100

Review- Liked how the cover is related to the title and matches it. The blurb really brought me in to want to read the book. Gave a good background of what the main character feelings are. I loved this book to be honest the character development was wonderful, it was like it was a movie and I was watching it. There were a few grammar mistakes but everyone has some. I can't wait to keep reading when I have time.

Destined Souls for life by AtipaZhuga

Title-5/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-28/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-86/100

Review- You did put who it was by on the cover, but it was partly cut off. The blurb was very good and I cutrous that it was based on a true story and who's story. The writing style is interesting,it reminds of a play, like the story is being told as a play and Shennie is the narrator. If you are doing it like that, I would recommend putting her name, Shennie instead of 'me' as her. The opening was great and I liked, got me a background of the main character. I liked the emotion and actions but some just doesn't fit a 9 or 10 year old. Unless I got everything messes up and still think they are young and not in the teen years. Oh well, I like the story and want to read more when I have some time. The grammar could use some help with capotalting the 'I's and Pronouns.

Shelter in the Dark by emeryyashes

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4.5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-35/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-97.5/100

Review- Interesting cover to match the title. I did not understand the summarization of the story or where it was in the blurb place. I loved the characters in this book, or at least how it was brought in to the story and how I was getting to know more about hem, but still having mystery left there. I am liking how the plot is going so far, and I am happy to countie to read it when I have time. I really enjoyed this book, might even recommend it.

Rashmi  Rathi by Darth1221

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-88/100

Review- The author's name was not on the cover. I appreciate the beginning, It explain a little more to the background. The character development was good but I would get confused on who was who and who was important or a friend. Besides that confusion, I liked the story.

The Zodiac Signs Of Anderson Academy by priorites-sorted

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-31/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-87/100

Review- Anything with Zodiacs I like. It does not really pull me in or match the title to me atleast.The blurb did pull me and I love that you put something from the book in the blurb that brings mystery. Love the school IDs. I like you writing style but changing from first to third is not probably a good idea because I don't know who view it is from 1st. It can also cause some confused like it did to me. WIth this style, it is a little confusing but it make the story a little more interesting with having more emotions from the characters. Grammar could be improved with capitalization and commas. I LOVED this book, I am curious to see how much I like your other book with the Zodiac signs at Hogwarts . I can not wait to continue to read the story once you have updated.

The Fourth Daughter by ElixirInBooks

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-95/100

Review- I enjoyed reading this story, it has emotions that I understanded. I could see what the message of the story was going to be once I had read 3 chapters. I understood the charters and what they were thinking and feeling in their emotions. I would like to see more details in the surrounding and setting. The grammar was good ,with only a few errors with easy fixes, I am sure.

Reality by Changing-the-World

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-10/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-86/100

Review- Nice and simple cover. Got a little confused on having text from the story, it did not look like from the same paragraph. I liked the emotion that was in the last paragraph of the first chapter. The character development was great but I would like to know more of their background or their reason in feeling/emotions. The grammar only needs help when capitalizing a letter when it begins a sentence.

In the Dark of the Night by red12212

Title- 5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-88/100

Review- Title and cover matching is..wonderful! Bringing in the reader was not a problem with you with that blurb. The opening began with some mystery, and suspension and I loved it. I am a person who likes background and I would like to see some more so I know more about the characters. The grammar could be changed with having periods at the end of a sentence. Also to have capitalizations when there are pronouns and names. I liked reading this story and will continue to read when I have time.