Mystery/Thriller Results
Judge: bored_mama
Perfect Lives by brokenvibesxoxo
Title- 5/5
Cover-4/5
Blurb-3/5
Opening-2/5
Characters-10/35
Grammar-10/20
Creative/Originality-7/10
Overall Impression -/710
Enjoyment-2/5
Total-50/100
Review-The blurb was different but the prominent errors took away the points. Punctuation errors made it difficult to enjoy. The idea was different but the characters were confused and unreasonable.
If she knew by Nabs_xoxo
Title- /55
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-16/20
Creative/Originality-8/10
Overall Impression -10/10
Enjoyment-/55
Total-91/100
Review-Blurb is interesting and proportionate in accordance with the title and cover. Detailed descriptions and good grammar kept the story interesting and enjoyable. Though it would be advisable to be cautious while using adverbs. Apart from that great job!
Riddles to be solved by Priya_shady
Title- 5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-3/5
Opening-2.5/5
Characters-18/35
Grammar-12/20
Creative/Originality-7/10
Overall Impression -5/10
Enjoyment-2/5
Total-59.5/100
Review-I liked the cover and the title of the book but the blurb needs polishing especially in the language. The language throughout is not smooth and it slows down the mystery build up instead of supporting it. Punctuation and spelling errors along with redundant sentences, are the areas that need to be worked on.
Wreckage by tejashreesubhashArye
Title- 5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-2/5
Opening-2.5/5
Characters-15/35
Grammar-8/20
Creative/Originality-6/10
Overall Impression -6/10
Enjoyment-2/5
Total-51.5/100
Review-The title and cover are good but the blurb has errors. Punctuation errors prevail throughout the writing. (Use of full stop before and after question mark. Multiple exclamation marks. Redundancy in sentences. Incorrect use of words.) Contradictory statements makes the reasoning of the plot questionable.
In the game of love by DrMarwaSamad
Title- 3/5
Cover-3.5/5
Blurb-2.5/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-20/35
Grammar-15/20
Creative/Originality-6/10
Overall Impression -6/10
Enjoyment-2.5/5
Total-62.5/100
Review-The title on the cover and in the blurb are missing 'the', which makes it sound a bit weird. Blurb was short. Repetitive punctuation errors. The opening was good and interesting but the remaining chapters that followed were lacking in description to support the plot.
Judge: Rinuesha
The Shadow Walker by Kimberly_rash
Title- 5/5
Cover-4/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-19/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -10/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-94/100
Review-The blurb of the book is intriguing. I particularly liked the first three lines of the blurb where the writer has introduced about the Shadow Walker. The first chapter was interesting. The way the chapter was written about Billy, the shadow boy, and Rosie who had the shadow boy's photo, kept me hooked and compelled me to read further. I loved the writer's way of keeping the chapter to the point and making it interesting through different twists and turns. It made the story gripping enough for me to continue reading it. The written discourse of the author was also impressive. Due to the comprehensive and descriptive writing style of the writer, it was easy for me to visualize the scenes as I read it and I was able to connect with the story as well as with the characters in it.Overall, I enjoyed reading the chapters. The writer was able to keep me engaged to the story by keeping it to the point. Since I love reading thrillers, this book precisely suites my taste due to its intriguing twists and turns.
Judge: Priorites-sorted
The Girl of an Old Mansion by GarimaSingh743
Title-3/5
Cover-2/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-30/35
Grammar-16/20
Creative/Originality-8/10
Overall Impression -9/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-81/100
Review- The title doesn't give me much but it is intriguing. Not a big fan of the cover, too much going on. I personally like short chapters, so I really liked the opening. You could have had a bit more going on. The characters were very intriguing , but their sorta two dimensional. There were a few mistakes, but overall it was pretty good. In some of the mistakes I commented to let you know.It was quite original, but some parts were cliche. Quite Impacting. Though sometimes it got boring and my mind started to drift
Nightfall survival by Calmguy9
Title-3/5
Cover-4/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-3/5
Characters-25/35
Grammar-12/20
Creative/Originality-6/10
Overall Impression -7/10
Enjoyment-2/5
Total-67/100
Review- The title was Kind of cliche, but still interesting. Interesting cover , but I'm not really sure what's going on with it.There's not much going on at first, and we're not really sure what's going on. But, as you go a little bit, it starts to become clearer. o me, the main character wasn't very likable. But, they were interesting.A lot of the punctuation wasn't correct, but other than that, the rest seemed to be correct. Some parts were original, but overall, it was mainly a cliche. The typical "other woman".As you got a few chapters in, it got a lot better, but at first, it was very slow moving.
The Vanishing Girls of Willow creek by AneesaBadu
Title-4/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-33/35
Grammar-18/20
Creative/Originality-7/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-89/100
Review- The title was Sort of cliche, but still interesting. Excellent cliffhanger! Harley is kind of a cliche, but still is very relatable.Very few grammar mistakes.Made me want to keep reading! The main part I disliked though was the long chapters. I prefer shorter chapters on Wattpad. It just makes it feel quicker moving.
Oblivion by AlfionaLia
Title-3/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-17/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-86/100
Review-Not very unique. It's better if you choose a title that's more unique to your story. Because, you want your book to be one of the top books if you search up the title on the search engine. But, with this title, thousands of books will show up before it. Maybe try "The Missing Memory of Katrina Clyde". Gets a bit off track, but quickly gets back to it.For the most part, not many mistakes. Rare that you'll find a story like this! Very impacting.
Alnwick Chronicles by noelleswift
Title-3/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-18/20
Creative/Originality-6/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-3/5
Total-83/100
Review-Now, obviously, this is probably just a me thing. But, my expectations are usually pretty low when I see the word Chronicle in a title. Probably because I wasn't a big fan of "The Chronicles Of Narnia". I'm all about a beautiful crown. I love anything with twins! Probably because I can relate, due to the fact that I'm a twin.Not very original, but still very good. Very Impactful, but can veet off subject sometimes. Pretty good, but, for me personally, I prefer shorter chapters. It makes the book feel like it's quicker paced.
Judge: Aserranoaldana
A Shot of Blood by azditigkadam
Title- 5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-30/35
Grammar-19/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-92/100
Review- Okay, That blurb was... Wonderful. It brought me in real quick. Wanted to start reading as soon as I finished reading that. Opening was great, gave me a interesting start. For character development, I like that you know only part of Dave background and the reader gets more hooked in. I would like some more descriptions, cause for me I like having the book play in my head as a movie and for that I like descriptions. Then the grammar needs a little fixing. Only thing is the Character development and grammar, everything but that is great. I enjoyed reading that and when I have time, I can't wait to finish reading that.
The Game of Revenge by MochaChocolateRose
Title-5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-20/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-94/100
Review- I like the cover, it was nice and eye-catching. The blurb was short but simple and I liked that it ended with a question, Draws a reader in. The opening was confusing until I realized it was like different parts. The character development was good, but I would like to see more descriptions of what and where the characters are and what they look like. The grammar was great, don't think I could see any improvement that would help. I enjoyed reading the story, definitely like that one of the characters had the same name as me.
Forever-Dramione by Mann101918
Title- 5/5
Cover-4/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-34/35
Grammar-19/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -7/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-94/100
Review- First I would like to say that you have improved a lot since the last time I judged your book for another award. Now for the review.The words on the top of the cover were difficult to read correctly, I could still read it but had some difficulty. On the character developed you could still use some improved by having details. I like details when I am reading. Then only saw some grammar mistakes. I think that's all, I enjoyed it more like I said.
Fourteen by notTayyaba_17
Title-5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-30/35
Grammar-15/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -6/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-83/100
Review- Little confused in the beginning but then started to get in once I was more into the story. Had a little difficult getting to know the characters and personality but I understand them once I got to know them better if that even makes sense. The grammar needs work not a lot but some with spacing and correct punctuation when it come to dialogue. It is a mystery, but with mystery can come confusion and for me it was more confusion rather than mystery but then again I am me. I liked reading this book and in future time, I would like to read it again and see if I can understand it more.
Broke out Smoke by SecretlyMe0
Title-5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-30/35
Grammar-8/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -5/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-77/100
Review- The cover matched to its title, liked that. Nice and short but intriguing blurb. The opening was a great start, started with eh background. The character development was good could still be a little better with descriptions. Now for the grammar, I am sorry but you have bad grammar but if you need someone to edit your stories, I am here. Having better grammar will bring in more people to read you book or other stories. I liked reading the story and I hope to continue when I have time.
The Lioness who Roared by conquestofthesomnium
Title- 5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-30/35
Grammar-19/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -6/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-88/100
Review-I liked reading this story, it was a little fast paced in the beginning but then it was good. The character development was good but for the dialogue, I feel like you could describe what the dialogue is with emotion. There was only a few grammar mistakes.
Mrs.Fernsby's Cottage by Peggors
Title- 5/5
Cover-4/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-8/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -7/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-91/100
Review- Interesting cover for a mystery thriller, and I am saying before reading the story. The characters development was good but could use some more details and more emotion for me. Grammar is a another thing with punctuation, combining sentences and correct words. Now done with that, THAT is definitely a mystery book. And I loved it so much, I even continued to finish rather than stop at the 5 chapters like I am supposed to .
Yesterday by Bonolo20k
Title-5/5
Cover-3/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-31/35
Grammar-15/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -4/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-70/100
Review- It is hard to read the title and author name on the cover. Need a little more in the blurb for me. Your plot, should be the blurb. The opening was a good start into the book. The character development for me could even use more emotion. II need to work on the grammar with punctuation and capitalization. I liked reading the story but I got bored in the middle of it, expected what came next.
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