🎉HORROR WINNERS🎉
Since there is only 4 books in this genre, There is still 3 winners. The other books results will just underneath the winner instead of a new chapter in the awards.
JUDGE: Mystic_xx_wolf
Mystic_xx_wolf Thank you for judging this genre.
🥇 The Ager by Kimverly_rash
Title-5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-3/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-34/35
Grammar-15/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-3/5
Total-86/100
Review-It has an interesting plot but the flow of the story gets disrupted due to the repeated punctuation and grammatical errors and becomes a hindrance to good reading, otherwise it's an intriguing book!
🥈The Unknown by Powerful_niya
Title-4/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-35/35
Grammar-16/20
Creative/Originality-9/10
Overall Impression -7/10
Enjoyment-3/5
Total-83/100
Review-The plot seems interesting and caught my eye but the punctuation and grammatical errors were a hindrance to smooth reading. The story could be more well written but besides that the plot is intriguing.
🥉Cookies by jchudgirl2001
Title- 4/5
Cover-3/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-2/5
Characters-30/35
Grammar-18/20
Creative/Originality- 10/10
Overall Impression-7/10
Enjoyment-4/5
Total-82/100
Review-I like the concept of the story and it has great potential but there is a lot of improvement needed . The first chapter was oddly way too short and the other remaining chapter that I read just did not have that emotional capture to it which would give me motivation to keep reading on . Nonetheless I like the creative perspective but there is a lot of room for improvement . And the cover is just plain . The title too can be a little more eye catching . I think that story has some references to The Vampire Diaries so like I said it has great potential but the writer can definitely improve more .
OTHER RESULTS
The Untold truth by kimberly_rash
Title- 4/5
Cover-1/5
Blurb-1/5
Opening-2/5
Characters-15/35
Grammar-14/20
Creative/Originality- 5/10
Overall Impression -3/10
Enjoyment-0/5
Total-46/100
Review-To be honest I did not enjoy the book at all. Firstly the blurb was very confusing and gave off mixed vibes. The blurb should attract the readers to go ahead and read more but this is doing the exact opposite because of how confusing it is. Second the font used for the chapters in the book is a huge no. I get trying to make it aesthetic but using other fonts for a storybook on Wattpad is just not right. It was difficult to read as I'm not used to reading an entire chapter in a font other than the one on Wattpad. I don't think anyone would like read the book in the fonts that the author has used. And the chapters seem shorter than they should be. Considering this book was put in the horror category there is nothing horrific or scary like in the cover, the blurb or the first 5 chapters. When I was reading the chapters I couldn't wait to reach the mandatory 5 chapter reading limit and that in itself shows that this book needs a lot of improvement. It does not have the drive that pushes a reader to continue reading. And the font especially pushes away the reader. I apologize if this review seems harsh but I'm giving my honest opinion and pointing out the mistakes so that the author can improve the book and have the best results.
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