Judge: Graciousrs

Shipping Sails Right by Aserranoaldana

Title- 5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-25/35

Grammar-15/20

Creative/Originality-6/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-72/100

Review-Improve the blurb. You can rewrite it in a different way just by playing around with words and choosing which suit best to make the blurb more interesting. ( Use the same information in the blurb, but write it differently.) I loved the cover and the titel. There aren't many grammatical errors. Just take some time and proofread your work. I loved that you showed us everything instead of telling. Doing this allow the reader to experience expository details of the story doing this allows the reader to experience expository details of the story through actions, words and characters' facial expressions. Just try including emotions in the story. Other than the blurb and the emotions lacking, everything is good.

Beneath the Moonlit Silver Sky by Halfsisterofpercy

Title- 5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-0/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-20/35

Grammar-16/20

Creative/Originality-6/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-65/100

Review-The title and the cover are good. Do write a blurb for the story to attract readers and do make sure to not give too much details. I think the last paragraph of the •prologue• can help guide you on how to write a blurb. There are only a few grammar errors which are not distracting. Try to make the first chapters more interesting. Show us the personality of the characters more to make the readers intrigued/interested to know more about them. I loved the plot.

Shades of Starlight by -aceofdiamonds 

Title-5/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-29/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-6/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-78/100

Review-The title is unique, but as far as I read the story, it doesn't seem connected to it. I really enjoyed the opening and I love your writing style. The characters were amazing and interesting, especially Cassia. Every chapter was excellently written with very few mistakes. The pace of the story is great and everything is showed well. I loved the story and will continue reading it.

Falling for You by Rinuesha

Title-3/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-29/35

Grammar-17/20

Creative/Originality-7/10

Overall Impression-6/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-80/100

Review-I really loved and enjoyed the opening. Naina really makes me intrigued just like she peeks Rajveer's interest. The title is good, but it is a common title. The cover is good, but it can be improved. Try to make the cover show us a glimpse of the story or plot. The conversation seems too formal to me, but considering the situation, it fits perfectly. [ The formality is perfect considering the situation.] I loved that you didn't rush the story into Rajveer and Naina being too comfortable with each other, and that you made this story come alive and be realistic.I enjoyed reading the story and will continue reading it.

Judge: Aserranoaldana 

Mean Girls the musical Adoption by dovechocolate13 

Title-3/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-1/5

Opening-2/5

Characters-24/35

Grammar-16/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-72/100

Review-Now this story about Sam meeting the Mean girls' cast was interesting. I liked the part where Sam fangirls upon finding Erika Hennigson! But it would be pretty interesting if you didn't change the P.O.Vs from one person to another in the same chapter. It's a bit confusing then. It would be better if you write it in third person way to make it easier to understand. Your grammar is fine though!

Shooting Stars at the balcony  by Sneehadoirin

Title- 4/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-89/100

Review-I am not a BTS fan but this was kinda nice. I really liked the way you describe the night sky matching the shooting star guy. There isn't a lot of mistakes really, And I really like the name Sung- Rin, it's quite soothing to read. The cover is AMAZING! And I kind of like the mysterious sounding blurb. The title matches the story perfectly.

Sincerely your lover by -tanyawrites-

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-31/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-89/100

Review- I liked this story and it was good but the most improved would be the character development. For me, I got confused on who view it was because I know it was third but it felt like it was first sometimes. Also I got confused on who who with names but then again, I am always confused with names. The grammar could use some work but only very little.

Eyecandy, Wasn't I by Jellycuddles19_

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-84/100

Review- The title, cover, blurb, and opening were good but I feel like everything but the title good use very little work. the characters were good but I feel like I was confused on their understandings and emotions. Tee grammar was the not the best and it could be improved. I have seen things that are similar and the plots have things in common. I personally didn't enjoy because I would sometimes get confused and I was not interested but overall it is still a great book that can  become better.

Kiss me if you can by Roxydog05

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-93/100

Review- Everything was great. Some things I think you would need to work on is the character development. Sometimes I would get confused who was person. Then I would like more emotion or thoughts of the characters. The grammar was good but not great, there a few mistakes but everyone has some. I personally didn't enjoy it because I didn't get a lot of background off of the characters. 

Love me by Alishkha45

Title-5/5

Cover-2/5

Blurb-1/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-25/35

Grammar-17/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-75/100

Review- There was no title on the cover and no author name on it. There was not a blurb or summary just saying all ships. The opening was very short. In the charter development, you need more emotion and explanation in why they did the decisions they made.There was a few grammar mistakes I saw but not a lot. It was original and creative. I didn't like that it was written as a play, if you wrote it out not as a play, it would be such a better story. The good part was Understood what was happening and I understood the story. 

We found  love by Madzlaufeyson_Malfoy

Title-4/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-17/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-89/100

Review- I have seen a title the same. The cover was good but there was not the author name on the cover. The character development was good but I would like to know how Mia grew up with Snape. I also want more emotion from the other characters about Mia. The grammar was not he beat, you need to capitalize I's when it is alone. I enjoyed it and when I have time, I can not wait to read the rest of it.

 Baby Bird by WHITEY_28

Title-4/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-28/35

Grammar-14/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -4/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-80/100

Review- The title does not make sense to the story so far. The character development could use some work in description, emotions and thoughts. The grammar can be worked on with capitalization. I had trouble understanding where I was in the story. The paragraphs were too long and there was times where you could have split the paragraphs to make more sense. I enjoyed reading the story and can't wait until the next chapter is uploaded.

Sons of Bangtan  by Misscraziness21 

Title- 5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-83/100

Review-I didn't see the author name on the cover but other than that it is good. The blurb needs to be a little longer than of what you have. The opening was wonderful, As soon as I read the first sentence I could not stop reading.I know that you put who was who at the beginning of the book but I would like more description of the charters looks and little more thoughts. There were some grammatical errors but not many. I personally did not enjoy the book because of my confusion but other than that it was good. 

The Phantom by BreanneLHeureux 

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-30/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-89/100

Review- The cover, blurb, and opening could be a little better. For opening,a little more information. The chara development was quite good when it is a character x reader. My problems where when you kept changing the points of views in 1 chapters. Also when you you said you were doing 3rd person, it was second person. Also In the 5 chapters I reward, there so many things going on , a little fast but I understand why you would want to do that. Other than that I enjoyed the story and I was really bummed out that I had to stop reading, because I had other things to do.