JUDGE: Aserranoaldana

🥇 All I ever wanted by HWhardy

Title- 5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-35/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -10/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-100/100

Review- First things going to say, that is the best blurb I have seen and I loved so much. That one way to get a person interested in the story. The title,cover, and opening was good. The character development was very good, I knew who was who and the best part, what they are feeling. No grammar mistakes seen and loved the creativity of having the view from both main characters. I loved reading this story and I can't wait to read more once I have time.

JUDGE: Aserranoaldana

🥈 Perfectly unexpected  by minimoxx 

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-96/100

Review- The title, cover, blurb, and opening were great. With having such a good blurb/ summary of the story, I think have a little preview or a couple of sentences will get a reader more interested.There was good character development but to me , I like having the story play in my head and I didn't really see how the characters liked. There was still description and I loved that but to me not enough of the characters. I didn't see any grammar mistakes and I loved how you made Gray become a nurse. I loved reading this story and I wish to continue when I have the time. 

JUDGE:  

🥉The Enchanting Stranger by YourGalNocnitsa 

Title-5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-95/100

Review- With that good of a blurb, you could use a preview or like sentence of the story to hook in the reader in more. The character development could use some work in how the characters look and the description of where they are but also knowing more about their emotions. I enjoyed the story, it was insterg and I hope to read more when I have time.