JUDGE: Aserranoaldana 

On the Edge tomorrow by  OlivaRose436

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-91/100

Review- I feel like the cover could be better somehow, just don't know how, but it was still good. The character development was good but I feel like I want more emotion or thoughts. There were a few mistakes but everyone has a few. It was creative but I have an idea to what might happen next and I feel like I can predicate it. Which means I have seen similar concepts but only a little. Everything else was great but don't' forget that, anything can be improved. 

Imperfect Perfect Life by Priya_shady 

Title- 5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-27/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-87/100

Review- I liked the title, blurb, cover, and opening but for the cover, your username was not on the book, and I think the opening could be improved. The character development can be improved by getting more background information. For example, when did Prince meet Prisha for the first time, and what class. Then How did the two get the job and what job it is. Then How did her best friends become best friends. Relating to this, It is to fast-paced and because of this, you need more story to make everything fit an understanding. Need more background. Need more details.Then there are a few grammatical errors. It was creative and I really want to know what is prince real name and is that his real name? I enjoyed it and can't wait until you update.

Girls Chill & Chat on fb by FaithJessica8

Title-4/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-27/35

Grammar-17/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -4/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-81/100

Review- The title got me at first but after a while I understood it. The cover was good but I didn't personally like the fount used for the title. The blurb was great and interesting. The openignb was a little confusing but then not after. The character development was okay but I would like description of how they look and where they are. I was not sure of what was happening sometimes. The grammar was not very good but then again, it kinda written like a script. I didn't personally enjoyed it but that was mostly because I would get confused. During the times not be confused, it was a great story, and it was little funny with Jacob always being there and having different names for everyone.

JUDGE: arrogoxx 

The Freshman Tease by Leolunah 

Title- 4/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -10/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-94/100

Review-I really loved reading through the first five chapters of your book! To be quite honest, I could have easily continued reading more, but that would be unfair to the other participants! With every twist and turn in the story, I found myself wanting to know more and more about what was going to happen next, and with who. You definitely hooked me as a reader, and I'm sure that you will hook many more readers to come with your story! Great job!

Not like me by hchladybug1218

Title- 5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-21/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -10/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-80/100

Review- I loved reading through the first chapter of your book. However, I was quite disappointed to find that there was only one chapter published. The grammar of the first chapter was exquisite, and really left me wanting to read more! Although you did introduce all of the characters quite well within the first chapter and the blurb, I unfortunately had to dock quite a few points, merely due to the fact that there was not enough content for me to read through.

THORNDEROUS by Incen_dia

Title- 3/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-28/35

Grammar-13/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-74/100

Review- First off, let me begin by telling you that I did enjoy your book. It was interesting and most definitely unique in comparison to some of the other stories that I have read on Wattpad. However, your story was lacking in character development, and there were quite a few points that I found myself confused as to what was going on and why. For instance, within the first chapter, it's just randomly said that they are in some form of secret society out of nowhere, which didn't make a ton of sense. Aside from the plot holes and grammatical errors, you do have a good story. Good job!