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JUDGE: Aserranoaldana
🥇 Ice Portal Interval Two by oldpuzzle
Title-5/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-32/35
Grammar-20/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -10/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-97/100
Review- The title, cover, blurb, and opening was great. I liked the cover a lot. The characters were good but I would like more description of how they are looking a little more emotion or detail. The grammar was perfect, I did not see any mistakes. It was original and creative. I liked this book a lot, I understood it very well and It had a really good plot setting. I hope to continue reading when you have updated and when I have the time.
JUDGE: Duncana1003
🥈The Claimed: A Clash of Copper and Gold by spelunkadunk
Title- 5/5
Cover-4/5
Blurb-4/5
Opening-4/5
Characters-35/35
Grammar-19/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -10/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-96/100
Review-Great descriptive elements bring the story to life. Well written with very few errors. I love the characters, and their personalities we're back up by proper emotional cues. This is an intriguing and original story that I plan on reading more of in the future.
🥉 3rd place we had a tie with..
JUDGE: Aserranoaldana
An Ember Among Shadows by Xnthelion
Title-5/5
Cover-3/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-33/35
Grammar-20/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression-9/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-95/100
Review-The title, cover, blurb, and opening were all great but I think something could be better for the cover. The characters were good but I had a little trouble understanding how they were feeling or what there emotions were. Other than that, I knew what was happening with them and I knew what they were thinking. The grammar was great, no mistakes seen. It was original and creative. I enjoyed the book and I would like to continue reading when I the have time.
JUDGE: Aserranoaldana
The Apocalypse by Hihi-isha
Title-4/5
Cover-5/5
Blurb-5/5
Opening-5/5
Characters-35/35
Grammar-18/20
Creative/Originality-10/10
Overall Impression -8/10
Enjoyment-5/5
Total-95/100
Review- First thing have to say, capitalize the a in apocalypse in your title. The cover, blurb and opening was great. The opening got me interred curious and wanting to continue reading. The characters were wonderful, I knew how was who and I understood them about their feeling, thoughts and actions. There were grammar mistakes like spelling and capitalization. It was creative and original, never seen anything similar. I enjoyed it very much and I hated when I had to stop to do somethings else.
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