JUDGE: Duncana1003 

Ocean storm  by VictorisLachac 

Title- 4/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-7/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-88/100

Review-There are very few errors. Emotions were done beautifully, making me feel for the characters in the story, but the story could use more descriptive elements to make the reader feel part of the story. Intriguing story that's fun to read.

Twisted Time by Sonjaebersole

Title- 5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-92/100

Review- Great use of emotional cues. The characters personalities come alive. There is very little description to help the reader become part of the story. Well written with very few errors. Plot seems intriguing, even though I don't really feel it started in the chapters available.

The Ajax by TheAjaxStories

Title- 4/5

Cover-2/5

Blurb-2/5

Opening-2/5

Characters-20/35

Grammar-9/20

Creative/Originality/-710

Overall Impression -7/10

Enjoyment-1/5

Total-51/100

Review- The beginning of this story started off intriguing, but I'm not completely sure what the plot is. The blurb needs more description on the plot, and there is too much dialogue in comparison with action. Description and emotional cues are important for making the reader feel invested in the story. There are a lot of errors. Full sentences need to be separated by periods instead of commas. There are lots of missing punctuation and improper capitalization that makes understanding difficult at times. 

Across the Globe by Nayla_Savicki

Title-4 /5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-3/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-17/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-84/100

Review-Characters are well written, with interesting personalities. There is a bit of intrigue in the opening, but it doesn't really brave interest. It feels like an info dump. The use of emotional cues is good, but description is a bit lacking. The story is intriguing as it moves along, and it would be interesting to see where it's heading.

JUDGE:  Aserranoalana 

To kill a king by Last_Apprentice

Title-5/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-3/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-91/100

Review- The title, cover, blurb, ad opening was good. I liked how the opening was long, I got lots of background information and then it hooks you in for the next chapter. Then the blurb was a little too short. I liked the charters but I would like more deception of how they look. The grammar was good but need some words need capitalized. It was original and creative. Also just want to stay, I like plot so far.I liked the book I lot, I will continue reading when I have time.

Everett by Violetsadowski 

Title-4/5

Cover-3/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-33/35

Grammar-20/20

Creative/Originality-10/10

Overall Impression -9/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-93/100

Review- The title, cover, blurb and opening were great, but I have seen similar titles, and cover was too blank I say. Then the blurb was a little to short but the Opening I loved, it got me hooked right away, it had me wanting to keep going. The characters I liked but I would like to know more about how they look. Then a little more about emotion. Also I got confused knowing who view it was from. The grammar was perfect, no mistakes seen. It was original and creative. I enjoyed reading the story.

Out Dwellers by Athens-J

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-5/5

Characters-34/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression-8/10

Enjoyment-5/5

Total-93/100

Review- The title ,cover ,blurb, and opening were great. The cover I feel could be a little better. The opening was amazing, it had be wanting to go to the next chapter and wanting me to continue reading. The characters were understandable expect on how they all looked. I feel like description is very important. There were grammar errors like capitalization and spelling. I feel like the plot was a little similar to another story I have read but It was still wonderful. I enjoyed reading it, oh and the best part was you put songs for each chapter.

Another chance-Dramione  by mann101978 

Title- 5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-18/20

Creative/Originality-9/10

Overall Impression -8/10

Enjoyment-4/5

Total-90/100

Review- The title, cover, blurb and opening was good. The opening could have been a little better. The characters were great but not everyone knows who the harry potter characters are. So I like description of how the characters look. The grammar, there were mistakes seen. Some spelling and some needing commas or spaces before commas and not after. It was a good book but i feel like you didn't try your very best and you could have added more things to make it better. I personally didn't like it because I don't like the ship but that's fine, it is still a good book and you can improve it.

A Mage's Choice by sillver89

Title-5/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-4/5

Opening-4/5

Characters-32/35

Grammar-19/20

Creative/Originality-8/10

Overall Impression -6/10

Enjoyment-3/5

Total-85/100

Review- The title,blurb,cover, and opening were good but I felt like the opening could have had something to make it better. The characters were interesting, I liked them but I felt like I didn't understand them.There were a few grammar mistakes seen but everyone also has a few. It feel like there could have been a very small portion of creativity not used but I have never seen anythings else like this story. I liked the book but It is something that I would not continue reading, it didn't reach out to me.