R O M A N C E // B A T C H 2 // R E S U L T S
BATCH TWO 🌿
🌿 RESULTS: 🌿
GENRE // Romance.
Judged by: Apsara_1808, eroticfictionauthor & elizapaige01.
Ones who have not won a place may, as always, re-enter in batch three.
FIRST PLACE
Name: Yamanika_
Book: Half a Donut.
Review:
Absolutely love the author's story! The cover goes with the title of the story.The blurb hooks the reader.Creativity was off the scale.The flow was impeccable.Dialogues were well-paced.I absolutely adored the interactions between the characters and also not to forget the humor throughout the story.Keep up the good work!
SECOND PLACE
Name: JayCee____
Book: Cruel Summer.
Review:
The cover and blurb hooks the reader.However in the story blurb, there are some punctuation errors but that can be edited.The flow was impeccable.The author missed a few commas and I noticed in a place,the pronoun was wrongly added according to subject. Nevertheless, the writing style was awe-inspiring.The characters well-developed.Looking forward to read this story afterwards!
THIRD PLACE
Name: WinterLafae
Book: Broc and Summer.
Review:
I'm absolutely in love with your cover.The blurb hooks the reader.The flow was imposing.However in some places,the author missed a few commas but edited.You did a good adding pictures,it gives the readers an insight how the characters look.The length of chapters felt fulfilling.Overall,I enjoyed reading this book.Good job!
FOURTH PLACE
Name: SmileInSorrow
Book: The Scare Under Our Skin
Review:
I am in love with your cover!It sums up the whole story in one picture.The blurb hooks the reader.The flow was imposing.However in some places there were a few capitalization errors but that can be edited.Characters were well-developed.The writing style is awe-inspiring.Keep up the good work!
FIFTH PLACE
Name: Isla_Grace
Book: Fake Bride.
Review:
What a fun read!!! I so adored the humor and the Main Female Lead. A cute main male lead. Would love to read more of the author's work. Cheers.
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Name: HeraHarker
Book: Strength and Sensuality.
Review:
The cover hooks the reader.The story had a great opening chapter,enough to grab the attention of readers.However the author missed a few periods and commas but that can be edited.The flow was imposing and the length of chapters felt fulfilling.Good job!
HONORABLE MENTION
Name: TinyAsianEmpress
Book: Yours, Aphrodite.
Review:
Your cover really resonates with a soft romance vibe, and it matches the tone of your blurb. The blurb was very intriguing. It introduces the main character in a way that entices the reader and makes someone want to get to know their story. I loved how original this story was. Even though you found the idea for it from a public prompt, you still made it your very own and it really shows. Your characters are clearly very well-defined people, which is reflected in their descriptions, their actions and their speech. There were some small grammar issues such as run-on sentences and some capitalizations that shouldn't be there, but they did not affect readability. The first two chapters definitely reflect how stubborn Clara is in her ways, and Aphrodite's introductions shows how she has no choice but to change.
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