FANFIC RESULTS

By the judges lunahmed and MooonYagami !

First place:

Will You Love Me?, LadyArwenEvenStar

Review:
" Fast. That was the word that popped in my mind first when I read the first chapter where the events seemed to occur fast. But then the pace seemed enough appropriate on reading further. And my god! I loved Rey here a lot; the character of her of someone so kind at heart and equally understanding and compassionate. Even if the plot came out rags to riches cliche, but by the end of third chapter, my fingers were truly itching to just tap to the next chapter ( which I will later, mind you). Well written and beautifully placed words bringing out the events properly and sharing Rey's thoughts along with it is a ride one must take. Keep going writing like this. "

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The Perks of Being a Wallcrawler, Geekator

Review:
" So yeah your story runs so smooth and you have this fascinating writing style, I'm impressed. Grammar, vocab everything is perfect. Creativity is to be expected from all authors. Both chapter length and character development are satisfying. Okay your blurb mentioned Peter winning over spidey but considering  the few chapters I read, spidey is dragging Peter around at its pace, I don't know how the story proceeds afterwards. At any rate, the story is cool. Writers guide the emotions of their readers. Befriending after breaking up, still having feelings for your ex or trying to to hook them up with another person is a bit hard on the readers though. "

Second place:

Both got the same scores!

Into My Heart An air That Kills, MarinaM56

Review:
" So honey your story is very well written. Horror is flawlessly portrayed and tragedy is to be expected. Needless to say i just had to read the ending or i couldn't go on. Okay some sentences are strenuously long. I myself write like that but i didn't really realize it before. Thanks for the tip. Moving on you could have managed your chapter length better i'm sorry for being so stingy. But this is the first time i've felt so sad judging a plpt by first three chapters only. The main critical point of your story would have been how her genuinely motherly feelings changed when she saw him as a potential partner grown up and all. I am very much interested how you described the transition between platonic love and romantic. It can happen, it does happen but explaining the depth of emotions in black and white is no ordinary stunt to pull. And when you described the almighty stalker, well it's exaggerated to a poetic extent but okay we'll see how the story plays out. Thank you for your hardwork. "

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Ripper: An Indoraptor Story, ElijahCole11

Review:
" The writer has this exceptionally beautiful way of portraying a wide spectrum of emotions. Vocabulary, grammar, character development, everything has been taken care of well. The story flows streamline and blurb is relevant. Chapters end abruptly though. Whose side do we take after feeling all kinds of pain. The readers are left wondering? If you write a fan fiction of characters like Balto or Remy's dogs where an extreme of hardships is faced to stay true to their loyalty to humans, i think you'll create wonders. Being selfish for your own survival is nothing new. Novelty makes the writer stand out. Anyway, thank you for your hardwork. I enjoyed reading your story. "

Third place:

A Liaison in the Greenwood's, Azukiel

" The story has been worked hard on. Your writing style is very impressive. Vocabulary and scene descriptions are all catchy. Plot is a bit clichè and chapters end on a predictable note though. Character sketches are a bit lacking as well. But overall the story makes you want to read it so i hope more and more  people read it :'),still Reading books instills serenity, patience and sense into humans. Stay calm and take pride in your work. Happy writing. "

First r.u:

Lan Zhan's Untamed, eroticfictionauthor

Review:
" Honey i initially felt really reluctant to read homo stuff but your story is so unbelievably inspiring. Blurb is compact, your writing style is touching, the story flows in concentric ripples spreading in all dimensions. Its my first time wherein character development is perfectly portrayed in three short chapters. But i would very much prefer if you extended the chapter length and used stronger words seeing as you are following a traditional theme line. And you have mixed up tenses in a few places. If you are comfortable with present, make it symmetric. Plot is apparently a dramatic clichè but two points it signifies highly are that working yourself to the best of your abilities against all odds and being able to recognize your fated pair when your heart is pure and your head is clear from the dirt of the temp world. So that's both thumbs up for ya. Write us a thriller next time won't you, you are more than enough capable. We'll be looking forward to it. Thank you for your hard work. "

Second r.u:

Mass Effect One, jennylgale

Review:
" For a person who stays away from anything sci-fi, this did not make me regret reading. The writing style was top notch with the way the story flowed along with proper usage of a good vocabulary. The characters are well picked and written and giving the sypnosis' in foreword part did the trick of not getting lost with how the story is read. Excellent work here, which fans of Mass Effect would love to read and even those who love sci-fi without not knowing about Mass Effect. Keep on this good quality writing intact. "

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Youth Wasted, catsaredragons

Review:
" You've chosen a sensitive topic. Spoilt rich brats, personally i like it. And you have written an elaborate blurb to accompany it. Story flow is amazing though chapter length is asymmetric. Your writing style depicts fun and interest but do run a spell and grammar check. All in all, the story is captivating and i am itching to read more. But look at the lesson you are driving home. Everything goes perfect in the end even if you opt bad habits. From medical point of view, is it alright| your mental capacity, your physical charm everything stays intact even if you take drugs really now then the addicts would never give up seeing as it doesn't affect their social reputation in the least :'D Anyway, all i'm saying is the moment you chose to write, the moment you took responsibility of leading your readers' lives, you need to put in more effort for their sake. "

Third runner up:

Not Alone, wicked_is_good_

Review:
" So honey you have a movieistic style of writing with exaggerated expressions of your characters and imminent romance. Everyone has their own taste. Blurb is catchy. Intro is well set. You've appreciably created a separate profile page for characters. Avoid repitition of words and even if you are uncomfortable with the language, run your story through some software for otherwise dreadfully disturbing grammar. Chapters are good enough long so you have fine creative potential. But there are contradictions in the mannerism of your mcs. Being confused in frenzy is justifiable but then shilly shally characters can't lead your story that strongly. Overall the story has an elaborated line, i immediately hopped onto the next chapter after i was done with the required three already. Curiosity "

Honorable mention:

Kaiba's Prostitute, KariRakitan

Review:
" Oh my my. The plot line came to be quite interesting if not somewhere it was getting me a bit confused here and there. You have potential which shows from the awards you have won as listed. However, for me there wasn't a clear build up of the scenes which you need to work on I feel. Overall, the writing quality is good. Flow? Lovely. No hindrance. Add some emotions to the story and from then we will see what happens till then. "

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