Judged by me!

Podium:

Under The Sea (Callisto_enyo) 🥇

Coalescence (kth_disneyfanatic) 🥈

Maid For Two (quandyluv) 🥉

Under The Sea (Callisto_enyo)

"What do you think would happen if your thoughts were to be exposed without you knowing?" Very good description of what the book will likely be about. I really love how you started the book with an intriguing question! The preface had me hooked, and I really appreciate how you went into a deeper description of what the book will be about. "What do you think would happen if your thoughts were to be exposed without you knowing?" Very good description of what the book will likely be about. I really love how you started the book with an intriguing question! The preface had me hooked, and I really appreciate how you went into a deeper description of what the book will be about. I was honestly hoping for some sort of twist to the story, but otherwise, it was very good overall! The message of the final chapter made me tear up, and as someone commented I fully agree with this; "It's essentially important to speak out your thoughts. Only then you will feel at peace." Very good job with this work! Congratulations on the first prize for Short Story!

Coalescence (kth_disneyfanatic)

The. Fourth Wall. WHAT- I'm so interested in what's behind it! OHMYGOD ITS SET IN DISNEY!? So cool!! The description and detail you put into your writing are incredible, even though the paragraphs are short. But that's okay because everyone has different writing styles! The. Fourth Wall. WHAT- I'm so interested in what's behind it! OHMYGOD ITS SET IN DISNEY!? So cool!! The description and detail you put into your writing are incredible, even though the paragraphs are short. But that's okay because everyone has different writing styles! House of Kamundra was very interesting to me because of the name Princess Raya. I like the name Raya a lot, and I compliment you for using her name. Will you be adding more chapters to your book? I feel like it's a bit short (even for a Short Story lol)... Congratulations on the second prize for Short Story! Congratulations on the second prize for Short Story!

Maid For Two (quandyluv)

Let me fangirl on your work for a hot second: THE ANESTHETICS! THE DETAIL! THE WOW! THE CONFETTI THAT SHOULD BE EXPLODING EVERYWHERE! The pictures and banners were a sight for sore eyes. I really like the way you started the story, it was very fast-paced which is not the type of book that I would normally be caught reading, but I stayed on for the ride with this one! I found the little text messages going back and forth between the two characters cute! It shows how close they are :) Congratulations on the third prize for Short Story! Congratulations on the third prize for Short Story!

Thank you to the rest of the participants who entered into this category!